FF: May be you are the one for me( Cha 15 pg 33).Updated - Page 7

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Posted: 9 years ago
#61
nice story
short short chapters made easy to read all d parts in one go
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Posted: 9 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: Krish58

Hey nice update so finally names are decide ..hmm chalo bhairavi unhe le gai apne saath to give them shelter..mast hain. Here poor varsha she is confused ke if Mr Patel knew she is not his daughter then why he is acting. ??

Hmm lots of questions
Well update soon.
And yes do I start looking for actors?


Thanks 😛😊 you will answers for her questions in the next update😊will update soon
yes plz i couldnt choose actors and will update the character list and faces as soon as we finalize the face😛😉 Thanks again
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: coolhi1988

superb update!!!!
wow..

well written!!! ⭐️⭐️

loved it so much


finally the names finalised..


loved maya & sharad's bickerings 😆😆
too good they wer
poor vasant 😆😆

old couple worried,
the old man knows 1721 isnt his daughter but her look alike..
hw is he so sure??
is his daughter dead?? or may b in hospital, in coma or sumthing??
that he & his helpers, servants even doctor knows..
but his wife doesnt know???

wen 1721 doesnt say anything he thinks she has lost her memory really!!
oh this proves he is a nice man!!
so 1721 is safe there...

no place to live for 3 aliens roaming around..
& the surprise thsy meet our dearest bhairu & convince her to rent them a place,...
bbhairu is convinced but wil her mil get convinced too..

continue soon..
thnks 4 d pm...
wat a morning surprise it was for me!!! 😃😃


Thank you so much😊😛 i am so glad u liked it😛😊the patel family background will get solved in coming chapters😊
Bhairavi is doctor in this story. She is not antic but too innocent and naive.😃
will update soon

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Posted: 9 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: coolhi1988

eagerly waiting for vava first meet!!!
hw & wen wil they meet as they both hv landed in diff states!!!


soon pehle settle hojaye earth pe😆and from few chapters there will be hits and misses before they actually meet😉😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#65
wow this was so cute
loved d update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#66
continue soon
thnks 4 d pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: cutest_vava

wow this was so cute
loved d update


Thank you so much for reading and commenting😊😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: barbieindia


Thank you so much for reading and commenting😊😛


my pleasure
hey u r just 2 posts away from promotion 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 4

Mumbai

"Yes for three of us" Vasant told not knowing why she asked

"Ok stage 1 Interview questions : Are you three relatives?" she asked

"No" sharad said

"Then I cannot give you the home" she said calmly

"Why?" All the three asked in shock of getting rejected in first question itself

"The people with relatives or family members are only allowed that portion. Strictly No bachelors. Bhairavi haven't you told them? They didn't pass the first stage itself" she looked at her daughter in law with a disappointed look.

"But Baa! They are looking like very genuine people and.." Bhairavi said. She really wanted to help them for helping her

"These two are married" Vasant said calmly

"WHaT?" both sharad and Maya shouted in shock

"Actually.." Vasant looked at the lady "It is a secret. They married secretly and hasn't told to anyone"

"Why" the lady asked sharply doubting the accuracy of his story

"Because because ... they wanted to settle down first and .." vasant not knowing what to say looked at his friends " Guys! Tell her your story. How can I explain your story all myself" and winked at them

Both sharad and maya was too shocked to react and they don't know what to say or what to lie

Just then the lady phone rang she checked the number

"Ok you three get in first. We will discuss after I attend this call. Bhairavi give them some tea or snacks" the lady said in a hurry

All Bhairavi and three entered into the home named Bhatt house. The lady attended the call

"Vimala! How many it has been taken for you to remember your elder sister. How are you? How is Vikram bhaiyaa"

"Didi! Didi! You wouldn't believe what happened today. We have finally found Varsha"

"What?" the lady said in shock and surprise.

"Yes! We have found her. The God has answered my prayers. I am so happy but"

Inside the bhatt house

"What is the need for you to tell that lady we are married" Sharad whispered to vasant

"I cant believe I will think like him. But he is right vasant. You shouldn't have told her" maya added her part

"Guys! Don't you listen what she told. No for bachelors and you two were there and I made you couple and just chill it is all temporary to get the house"

"Then why you didn't tell you are married to Maya? Why me?" sharad said

"Come on sharad! I am engaged and Maya is my friend. We couldn't even think like that about each other and you both hate each other and it is all fake. This is just perfect" vasant said to him in a low voice with a smile

"But.." sharad started. Just then Bhairavi entered with the snacks and tea and served them

"Maya! What happened? You look sad?" Bhairavi asked Maya who was little upset with vasant talk though she knows what to expect

"Nothing!" she said. Just then Bhavna entered continuing her talks

"Don't worry Vimala! Everything will be fine. If you feel so upset there why don't you people come here with Varsha here? Just think about it" then she noticed her tenants are waiting for her

"Ok! I will talk to you later" she said and turned to them

Goa

1721 viewed the room she was in. It was full of painting and music albums. She thought Varsha must be an artistic girl who has an excellent taste in music and art. Her voice she heard from the player was so peaceful to hear. 1721 then wondered where she had gone. She saw from her concerns that the mother was so affectionate towards her daughter. How can she leave such a loving family?

Mumbai

"Ok lets agree that these two are married. Who are you and why do you want this home? The lady asked vasant

Vasant had already thought about this while they were waiting in the sofa.

"Actually I am son of the cousin of the cousin of father of sharad. We somehow met and became friends and came with him to look for the job.

"What Job are you looking?" the lady still cannot believe what he is saying true from his expressions

Just then Bhairavi entered with a crying baby "Baa! Aryan is not stopping crying for the past few minutes. Please make him sleep again. I am so worried"

"Bhairavi! He is a baby. Stop worrying for tiny things. I will make him sleep in a minute" But then she realized even she failed to make him sleep

soja rey soja

soja rey soja mere raj dulare soja

taare bhi so gaye dharti ke sitare soja

soja rey soja

Both Bhavna and Bhairavi realized the baby stopped crying immediately when vasant started singing. They looked at him with surprise.

Vasant stopped when he realized they are looking at him.

"No Please Sing. I think my grandson likes it" Bhavna said

Vasant smiled and sat near the baby

aayi sapno ki pari tujhko bulane ke liye

aayi sapno ki pari tujhko bulane ke liye

layi chanda ka palna tujhko sulane ke liye

layi chanda ka palna tujhko sulane ke liye

aasama se ninde kare issara soja

taare bhi so gaye, dharti ke sitare soja

soja rey soja

The baby had already slept when he finished singing.

"Your voice is so good" Bhairavi said "Are u a singer?"

"Aspiring" sharad said immediately " that's our job we three are aspiring to be musicians" ignoring the look of maya and vasant

"ok" Bhavna said " I will give you the upper portion. There are two rooms with attached bathrooms and one kitchen. You may move your things tomorrow and I will tell you about rent tomorrow"

"Thank you so much aunty" the three of them said in a chorus

"Tomorrow's sunrise will give a new identity and will start a new journey on earth" Thought 1721 and vasant at the same time though they were miles away from each other

Edited by barbieindia - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#70
superb update..
loved it so much
well written

vasant ne mast fasaya sharad, maya ko...
secretly married 😆😆😆
bhavana aunty ne mast questions puchhe.. inquiry baithi...

wait bhavana is vikram's sis...
nice connection...

bhairavi has son aaryan .. small baby...
he is crying..
bhairavi worried..
bhavana makes her understand to take it lightly..
baby stil crying..
& finally our singer vasant makes him stop...

so all 3 aspiring musicians...
sharad jaise badla le raha tha vasant se😆😆😆

chalo finally room mil gaya...

nice song...

continue soon...
thnks 4 d pm..
Edited by coolhi1988 - 9 years ago

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