FF: May be you are the one for me( Cha 15 pg 33).Updated - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: vasantvarsha

Omg omg omg this sounds amazinggg!!!! I'm eagerly waiting for this!!... 👍🏼 😃


Thank you so much😊😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: -VisheshTippani

Continue soon & Dont forget to send me pm hoon ??


Sure😊😛Thanks a lot for commeting
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: chakudibhatt

ek char ka naam bhairavi ho ga isme
plz if possible include karna


they are all main characters and many more will come as the story proceeds😛
yes bhairavi is there😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: coolhi1988

wow!!!
barbiedoll characteristics is just too good!!! 👏👏👏
loved it 😳😳
vava love story..
arey waah v hv one more vava shipper here 😃😃😃

plz jaldi se story start karo...
i want to read it...


Thank you so much😊😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Prologue

"I can't believe that I have so much in common with a human and he is amazing" She thought while she was talking to her friend Vasant who is an aspiring singer and whose voice attracted her the most.

"Hey Are u listening?" His Voice bought her back from her thoughts

"Yes. I am Listening. I have talked to my father about you. He was ready to give you a chance in his studio if you perform well this Sunday to him"

"Thank you so much for doing so much for me. You have made my life much better and more..." he stopped himself and smiled at her

"No need to thank me. You are an amazing singer and you deserve it. I will always support you" She knows that he is talented and she has developed feelings for him. But she cannot express herself to him because she also know that she is hiding her alien identity to him and she cannot marry a human with her true identity. These thoughts disturbed her and decided to leave from that place to hide her sadness

"Ok Vasant. I have got to leave" She said without making an eye contact

"So Soon?" his expressions widened

"Yes I have some work and will call you later" She left in a hurry.

Vasant was shocked at her departure. He gathered so much courage to tell his feelings to her. But she was not in a mood to listen.

He then thought it is good that he did not propose Varsha. She won't even accept him if she knew his alien identity but he also don't want to hide it from her. He was even guilty that he was supposed to love his alien fiance but he fell in love with a human.

"Maybe it is not meant to be" He thought.

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Posted: 9 years ago
#16
Hey it's good start and I m already loving it...
A good beginning vava loves each other not knowing each other original identity hmmm kya hoga jab sach patah chalega and yes of course I loved your all characters and cs too..
Loved it continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
wow barbiedoll...
this is trully amazing..
wat a prologue..

so vava wil meet each other as humans..
they wil hide their identity but wil fall for each other..

hmm vasant a singer,..
thats good..
plz start soon..
waiting for chapter 1 & story to begin...

& hey wen r u updating d other one...

thnks 4 d pm..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 1

8 months ago

Mumbai

"9211! We have reached the earth. Now we have to find 1721,225,765 as soon as possible"

"Relax 87 square! We first have to mix well among the people. These three must be sure in human form. We have to know the living style of these humans first to mix with them"

"Fine! We will observe them and then we will follow what they do. But we should learn these things as soon as possible and no time to relax"

"87 Square! You are scaring an already tensed guy. I am sure we will find a way" said their female companion 4844

"Ok as you two wish. I will go and check the safety of the outside surroundings"

2 minutes later

"9211! Don't worry. We will find your fiance and her friends. You two will definitely meet"

"Thanks. You are really very supportive to me from the beginning. I know HC never allowed me to search my fiance as I am not supposed to know her or see her. But you stood up for me and bought me here. Thank you so much for that"

"You Know Even HC is not at fault. They only fear that you may refuse her considering your thoughts and you know that you cannot refuse a match chosen by HC for you. And no need to thank me. I am just supporting you to follow your idea your dream. It is my duty as a Friend.

It hurted more for 4844 than HC to make 9211 to meet his fiance. She was not supposed to like him but she had no control over her emotions. She fell in love with him. But she doesn't want to reveal her feelings as she never got the sign that 9211 liked her that way. She found her happiness in seeing him happy. If he ends up with her, she will be the happiest person but if he ends up with his fiance and he is happy she will find happiness in his.

Goa

"She is waking up" 1721 heard a voice of a woman full of concern

"Daughter! We have Finally Found you" said a middle aged human with happiness shining in his eyes.

She couldn't comprehend what happened to her. All she remembered was she got fainted while searching for her lost companions and an arms holding her

"Varsha! Are u okay" The man asked her again

"My daughter! Where have you been all these days leaving your parents in misery" the woman hugged her

!721 surprised at the sudden turn of events but soon realized that she is in the human form of the girl who was possibly their daughter.

"But I am..." She tried to talk

"Don't try to talk dear" said the man Doctor is on the way to check you.

"But you have mistaken." 1721 said in a weak voice "I am not your Daughter"

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Krish58

Hey it's good start and I m already loving it...

A good beginning vava loves each other not knowing each other original identity hmmm kya hoga jab sach patah chalega and yes of course I loved your all characters and cs too..
Loved it continue soon


Thanks you so much😛I am glad you liked it😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wowie!!!
wonderful start barbiedoll!!!

well written ⭐️⭐️

vava along with their frnds/companions reach to earth!!! 😃😃

87sq.. means sharad?? accompanies 9211 & tries to give hope to 9211 of finding his fiancee
😳

4844 loves 9211 so much.. she is ready to sacrifice her love for him knowing 9211 doesnt think same for her & only if 1721 doesnt agree to marry 9211 then she has a chance...
but still she wishes for 1721 to agree as 9211 would be more happy..
so 9211 came here on earth after 4844 / 87sq fought with HC for himj..
true frnds😃😃

1721 lost her way & lost her companions..
after gettig unconcious she lands to a house where they think her to be their lost daughter as her face resembles with their daughter...

1721 revealing she isnt their daughter..
hw wil that persons react ???

wil they support & accept 1721??

continue soon..
thnks 4 d pm...


Edited by coolhi1988 - 9 years ago

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