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Dr.Needa

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hyy all I hv written... No thought to write abt dis story when Ansh marriage was in discussion... That is in season 2 of show...bt before Ansh marriage...sab same he...dolat ram ki entry...n non jhok with vasant... hemant& heramoti ...makhan sab kuch bt laxmi ni he...imagine karlena hoon😃

So here I present u my first BDSAH story...

The Gemstone Tragedy

Teaser-trailer😉

At Ghotalas House

Vasant calling Hemant as he forgot to drink his

Favourite drink -Sarsaun Ka tel and left it untouched...

Sharad join in too as he needs his support in selecting a green tea packet that he wanted to give his Ana on first night as her gift...sharmaoing all the while when telling to vasant abt it...yayayayayyaayayayyaa

...

Here at Bhatt house

Bhavna is not able to find her chakudi...bhadresh searching her too...

@Dolatram house

Sona chandi searching for Heramoti everywhere bt she was not Der...in entire house...

She informed the same abt
...

So ye teeno he kahan to find out u all hv to wait...

Index two or 3 shots

Teaser released

Chap1A&B on pg1

Chap2A onpg16

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Dr.Needa

@-VisheshTippani

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Posted: 9 years ago

chap1

(A)

All got worried... hemant kahin nahi milra Tha...

Sharad ne pura ghar dekhliya...varsha ne bhi sab jagah dhundh liya...

Sharad trying hard to contact Hemant thru his superpowers... but failed every time... same with shishir...he's not able to fond him as well...

Shishir: lagta he bhaiyya ne apna alien mode off kiya hua he ya phir wo aisi jagah he jaha me unko dekh nahi Paraha...na hi sharad chacha contact kar paa rahe he...kahi WO koi problem me to nahi...

Vasant : nahi beta ,wait karo me colony walon se puchta hun.

vasant called manav & then @bhutt house...

manav ne btaya k WO nahi he yahan...n kaha k mein Liza bhabhi me wahan check kar ke call karta hun.

jab bhavna Ben ko call kiya to...pta chala k bhairvi bhi missing he...

yahan manav Ka call aya sharad ko le Ana ke wahan b nahi he hemant...

vasant :sharad ,bhairvi bhi gayab he...ye bhai Behan kahin saath me to ni kidnap hogaye...

Varsha: shubh shubh boliye...

kya ap bhi

Sharad :logically dono saath me bhi to kahin ja sakte he na bhaiyya.

vasant: han waise bhi koi murkh hi hoga Jo do do afton ko saath me mol lega ...

Varsha: vasant, ye joke karne Ka tym nahi he...heeeiiinn(angry on him)kuch kijiyema vasant.

vasant: WO ojha uncle wala mahol mahol halka karta Tha... me bhi parrshan hun varsha... genda lal ne apna fav drink aise he chor diya...k kahan gaya hoga!!? ja kaha sakta he..

sharad :logically hame samdhi Gi- yani Dolatram ke yaha b pta karna chahiye kya pata wahan chala gaye ho dono bhai Behan...heramoti se Milne.

vasant :sahi kaha sharad.

Varsha call lagao.tumhare bhai sab ko.

no ruko... shishir apne superpowers se dekh Samdhi ni me ghar me...unka mood to thik hena kahin gun leke gusse me to nahi baithe hain??

Varsha: kya vasant... inne bhi bure nahi he bhaisab...

shishir checks thru his superpowers... wahan heramoti bhi nahi he..or sab usee dhoond rahe he...

here Samar comes all worried...

Samar :papa Sona chandi Ka call aya tha...heramoti yahan to nahi ayi pucha mene btaya k nahi ayi...or hemant le baare me bhi pucha WO bhi missing he... kahin dono saath me to nahi he??!

To b continued...

How's it guys?? Hope u all will like it...my first ever story on Ghotalapanti😆😉

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Dr.Needa

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Posted: 9 years ago

Chap1

vasant:

kya heramoti bhi gayab he??!

varsha: Ab kya vasant.?

Vasant- Varsha tum pareshan mat ho me kuch karta hun.

Here at Bhutt house all were searching for bhairvi...

meanwhile Ojha family come there too.

Lajo: bhavna bahabhi fikar mat kijeye...yahin kahin hogi...kaha ja sake he Bhairvi??

Bhavnava:(on verge of crying) pta ni kahan hogi...subhah se gayab he...nashte ke tym se...man me bure bure khayal are he bacchon ko school bhejne ke baad se gayab he...Bhadresh ja abhi k abhi sweety Singh ko bula la..jaldi ja...

Bhadresh: baa shant hoja baa... han baa , abhi mujhe b tension hori he.apne kuch bola Tha kya meri Qutub Minar ko???

Bhavna:(turned all red)

tu mujhe blame karra he ...mujhe?? mene ...mein ne Jane bola usee ...tujhe aisa lgta he kya ...??(again tuned gloomy)

Bhadresh: na baa na...mere kehne Ka mtlb he...tune kuch karne ko to ni bola na ye kuch lane ko??

Ojha uncle: hun hunnn hun hunnn,,,

manav: are jaldi boliyena papa!!

Ojha: mhara ko b aise hi lage he...Jo bhavna Ben ki to adat he galat command dene ki.bechari Gujarati bahurani...WO to bs aagya ka palan karri hogi...

phir bhi Bhadresh sab jaga acche se dekhana tune?!!

Bhavna : Kya murli bhai me galat command deti hun...?!!(angrily)

Manav: bhavna kaki shant hojayiye papa ki to adat he apko tane Marne ki...or btayiye sab jagaha dekhana??

(by the time , dsouzas enter)

Ojha uncle- ke ke ke ke ke ke key bolra he manav...

Liza : kya hiUa bhairvi missing he...or pta he Wahan hemant or WO Heramoti bhi nai milra kahin bhi.

Bhavna: Kya ?? teno gayab he ek saath...sab jagah dekhliya he mene ghar me kahin nahi he Chakudi.

Liza: han meko lagta he teeno ek saath hi kahin gaye honge man ...kahin bhairvi indono ki shaadi to nai karne ko mangta he man??...jaise WO Ranchi Sen ni kiya Tha apne Bhai ki shaadi chupke se ...

Bhavna : hain?? kon WO Akansha colony wali Ranchi sen kya?? kab or WO kaise??

Liza: tumko ni pta man?! Arre baitho baitho mein batata he..

Ronnie:(interrupts, shouting) Kya baitho baitho ??

apni bhairvi missing he or tumko gossip Ka pada he man??

Ojha: Han dekho... bechari Gujarati bahirani , fikar hi nahi he kisi ko.or wah Ronnie tu atka ni Aj. (gives shabashi on shoulder by hitting Ronnie)

Ronnie: thank you ojha uncle WO baa WO baa...

all: tchu tchu tchu .

Liza: seriously Ronni tum phir atka??

Ronnie; help karona man...WO Kabab ke saath me at a he na usko kya bolte...

manav: pav

Ronnie: Nai nao...WO dono saathe me hote he na...

Ojha: Seekh kabab?? kya?