RaYa Ficlet: We Go on Red - Page 2

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Posted: 3 years ago
#11

This is so beautiful🥺 Ram is an idiot, saara mood bigaad diya Poor Pri, kis gadhe se paala pada hai I love how you incorporated their memories associated with the color red

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Posted: 3 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: oye_nakhrewaali

This is so beautiful🥺 Ram is an idiot, saara mood bigaad diya Poor Pri, kis gadhe se paala pada hai I love how you incorporated their memories associated with the color red

Thank you Shibz ❤️

Ram will be Ram, there is no remedy for his lack of common sense 🤣

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Posted: 3 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: Jiyarao

Beautiful 👏👏👏✨

Thanks, glad you enjoyed reading it ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
#14

Res. I will be back to read asap ❤️


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Wow it was so lovely Tia 😍❤️. I absolutely loved how you took a single moment and made it so special with your words. Honestly as you are aware, I don't find Ram and Priya moments on screen exciting or special because i can't connect with the character actions without their inner thoughts.


By writing Ram's pov, you made me find that scene special. Thank you for writing it out. It was pleasure to read 🥰💙❤️.

Edited by BlurredLines - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: BlurredLines

Res. I will be back to read asap ❤️


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Wow it was so lovely Tia 😍❤️. I absolutely loved how you took a single moment and made it so special with your words. Honestly as you are aware, I don't find Ram and Priya moments on screen exciting or special because i can't connect with the character actions without their inner thoughts.


By writing Ram's pov, you made me find that scene special. Thank you for writing it out. It was pleasure to read 🥰💙❤️.


Thank you Nita 🤗❤️ Glad you liked it.

I always liked the kind of love Ram and Priya had for each other, and lately, the way they were behaving, plus the lack of monologues made no sense to me. So I ended up writing this. 😆 I am glad it made you connect to that scene 😳

Edited by tournesol - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
#17

Beta read by LizzieBennet. Updated few things in the OS. Plot remains the same.

Edited by tournesol - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
#18

res😭 where is my tag😭

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Posted: 3 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: la_Reine

res😭 where is my tag😭

Sorry, I didn't know you also followed this show 🥺

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Posted: 2 years ago
#20

I have no idea what scene you based this on, but if it was even half as beautifully portrayed as this, then the show did a good job ❤️❤️


You literally connected me to Ram's heartbeat there 😆 Skipping a beat at her beauty, then going faster, clenching in pain as the bad memories came up... I did it all with him.


Lovely piece Tia

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