A letter to Mr Kapoor! (Third part is updated in page 3) - Page 2

Waiting for ur next part!!

Loved it !! Beautifully written :)

This was lovely.. Loved it..do continue soon.. Loved how Ram cleared everything

This. This - "You noticed my concern, my care for Vedika but did not notice that whenever you were close to me my heartbeat increased?? You noticed my longing for Vedika but never realized my longing for your attention, your care?? You noticed me thanking Vedika for the party but never realized my eyes only on you the whole time, even when I was dancing with her! Never felt that Whenever you are before my eyes, nothing else matters?? "

Love you for writing this part focussing on how Priya didn't get to the gist in real terms before taking decision🤗

Finally Ram gets to explain his side too❤️.

An incredibly wonderful experience, thank you. Ram finally spoke what was in his heart, now we will wait for Priya with him

Please continue.. it is beautiful. ❤️

Oooh mazaa aa gaya. Such a heartfelt simple straightfoward confession of his feelings by Ram! Hugs to u 🤗

Waiting for the next edition! Kya Priya wapas aayegi?

My take:

Repeat of Ram reaching home devastated & ‘hangry’ also (having declined to eat at Adi-Bri’s die to heartbreak) and yelling for Tarun near the dining table, and out comes a composed Priya from the kitchen, holding a tray of food.

Started writting the next part and it has some similarities with yours! 😅

Ram returns home late from Adi-Brinda's house.

The entire Kapoor mansion is in dark and silent. He goes straight to their room - which again becomes only his room. The person, who made this room a home, left. Ram looks around the room and remembers their moments together, from first time sharing the room to last time tieing her dori- everything flashes back before his eyes! He felt like a drowing person!

He goes to washroom and comes back to the room after freshening up and changing into his kurta.

To his utter surprise there is Priya standing in the room and setting his dinner.

Ram can not believe his eyes and thinks he is hallucinating Priya, but he subconciously goes near Priya and called her name.

Priya turns back and smiles a little

Priya- its very late Mr. kapoor, have your dinner.

Ram could not control himself and hugs Priya tightly.

Priya is taken aback and hesitas for a moment before hugging him back. They are lost in each for a long time before Priya spokes

Priya- I am sorry Mr. Kapoor.

Some moments later they part ways

Ram- Why are you saying sorry, it was my fault. I should have told you everything and came clean! I messed up. I am sorry!

Priya- I left without having any words with you! I know you, I trust you, I should have known if you didnt tell me something then there is some good reason behind that and I noticed all your care, concern, admiration but may be I did not want to acknowledge! I might be scared that if I acknowledged all these I would be weak, I would be vulnerable. I was scared that if I accept the true feelings that I have for you then I would not survive if you leave me!

Ram- No Priya, I will never leave you, I cant leave you! Because I cant live without you! No matter if you can love me or not, you are all I want.

Priya- Mr. Kapoor, You know when you dont call me during my college time, I feel like there is some void in my heart, When you go to office without having breakfast with me, it felt like my day is incomplete, when you get angry with Neeraj for my sake, my heart flutters, everytime you touch my hair I skip a heart beat, everytime you held my hand I have butterfly in my stomach, I dont know what are these feelings but these all are new for me, I have never felt these things in my life and I know one thing for sure, you and this relationship are the most important things in my life!

Ram feels so happy hearing these from Priya! He again hugs Priya and make a round lifting Priya in his arm!

Priya- Mr. Kapoor, leave me, What are you doing? We will fall!

Ram- Never, I will never let you fall, You dont know how happy I am today, This is the best day of my life! Now I know I never loved Vedika, it was just a teenage crush!

Priya feels little bit angry hearing Vedika's name, and Ram can sense that

Ram- Are you jealous??

Priya - No, I dont feel jealous!

Ram- You are jealous, Priya sood is jealous, Priya sood is jealous for her husband Ram Kapoor! Priya sood is mine, Priya Ram Kapoor!

Priya feels shy and goes away!

Ram follows her calling her name!

Thats it! I am not a romantic person in real life, so thats all I can write! Thanks for your appreciation! Maybe I will some other fiction someday!

Sweet proper reconciliation) Priya is smart and sensitive, she couldn't leave the love of her life for something that wasn't there. Hearts finally reunited