Priya Ram Ficlet: Were You Ever Mine?

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
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Kabhi khusiya v de diya karo



Such an interesting name Vayu. Zain ❤️❤️❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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What did I just read?🥺😱… so much angst? Where did you get this idea from?

Let me pick your dimaag… just a little… how did you land up in writing something so seamlessly, that, just for a while I forgot I was reading something about raya, and such angst pent up as the piece flowed, and I was searching frantically for some semblance of raya and utterly clueless by the end of it, yet knew it wasn’t the end…😳

YOU MUST CONTINUE THIS ,GET RAYA TOGETHER…(not shouting, just emphasising) 🙏

I want to see the whirlwind of emotions, you will create in getting them through this and make it to end…☺️🙈

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Haal-e-Dil

Kabhi khusiya v de diya karo



Such an interesting name Vayu. Zain ❤️❤️❤️

Depresso is espresso 🤣

Idk why, but I love the name Vayu, its origins in the mytho, plus it has a modern touch to it (atleast to me😅)

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: TheCoolDocSid

What did I just read?🥺😱… so much angst? Where did you get this idea from?

Let me pick your dimaag… just a little… how did you land up in writing something so seamlessly, that, just for a while I forgot I was reading something about raya, and such angst pent up as the piece flowed, and I was searching frantically for some semblance of raya and utterly clueless by the end of it, yet knew it wasn’t the end…😳

YOU MUST CONTINUE THIS ,GET RAYA TOGETHER…(not shouting, just emphasising) 🙏

I want to see the whirlwind of emotions, you will create in getting them through this and make it to end…☺️🙈

@bold, is that good or bad? 🙈

@italic, sorry🥲

I wrote it on whim, but kuch sujhe toh... 🤞no promises though🙈

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Wow! You have a way of writing that just touched my heart! Please write more to this story.....

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rani16

Wow! You have a way of writing that just touched my heart! Please write more to this story.....

Glad it was worth your time🙈

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: oye_nakhrewaali

@bold, is that good or bad? 🙈

@italic, sorry🥲

I wrote it on whim, but kuch sujhe toh... 🤞no promises though🙈

short circuit of words ,shayad… 🤣

It’s so good…that I was boiling re… 🙈 isliye to continue karne keliye Bol Rahi hu☺️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Loved it!! I love angst too ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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This is so damn angstyyy Just as you said !!!

Now you need to continue

Come on you can't leave it like that

It's so so good

But then again sometimes only sad "end" makes us feel the angst for a longer time

But still I hope you write more like this cuz you are damn good at it ! 😊

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