Priya-Ram OS: When Angel Meddles in Human Affairs - Page 2

Nice Work Shibani 😎

Well, if not Veritaserum, An Angel had to interfere to get Ram to speak about Vedika to Priya finally....but atleast she knows now...which is Good☯️

Loved the start, pretty different from any usual piece of yours here & also Punnu finally stating his frustration - now we know why his name was specifically asked in the EDT😆

Amaranth watching over his kids was a good Scene.

It was right that Nandini & Shubham didn't open their mouths Today but should we think it was also because she figured out something's wrong with them today😉 ?

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Finally!! It was so peaceful 😌😌

Ram telling her how he feels after the spell wears off was so wholesome 🥺

I hope cvs can take some inspiration from you. Send this to the cvs. Vese bhi bhut shock hai inlogo ko supernatural gusane ka. Unlogo ko bolo ye daal de no one will complain🤗😉

This is y u needed punnu's name Loved it ❤️

Finally communication!!!!!!👏

This was so satisfactory...😃

You fixed everything in the most simple, non-dramatic and logical way. I really wouldn't mind if CVs were inspired by this.

Loved it.

Awesome

You need to write more parts!!!!

Originally posted by: SONIA441

Nice Work Shibani 😎

Well, if not Veritaserum, An Angel had to interfere to get Ram to speak about Vedika to Priya finally....but atleast she knows now...which is Good☯️

Loved the start, pretty different from any usual piece of yours here & also Punnu finally stating his frustration - now we know why his name was specifically asked in the EDT😆

Amaranth watching over his kids was a good Scene.

It was right that Nandini & Shubham didn't open their mouths Today but should we think it was also because she figured out something's wrong with them today😉 ?

My first draft had a lot more Nandini drama, but I was really tired of the show so just scrapped ot. But I do imagine that after PriRa left for work, Nandini and Vedika must have told each other that they are only using each other and don't care about each other😅

This is Veritaserum, pro max🤣

Originally posted by: RitikaS99

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Finally!! It was so peaceful 😌😌

Ram telling her how he feels after the spell wears off was so wholesome 🥺

I hope cvs can take some inspiration from you. Send this to the cvs. Vese bhi bhut shock hai inlogo ko supernatural gusane ka. Unlogo ko bolo ye daal de no one will complain🤗😉

Cvs ka address do🤣 The day this show turns supernatural, I am out🤣

Originally posted by: Winteriscoming

This is y u needed punnu's name Loved it ❤️

Finally communication!!!!!!👏

This was so satisfactory...😃

Yaa, I had written his name as Pillai for some reason🤦‍♀️ so just double checked with you guys. Yes, *In Captain Holt's voice* COMMUNICATION! 🤣

Originally posted by: Hero_Coconut

You fixed everything in the most simple, non-dramatic and logical way. I really wouldn't mind if CVs were inspired by this.

Loved it.

I love drama, but the drama in the show is giving me headaches for the future🤦‍♀️

Extremely creative !!

Enjoyed it so much !!

My greedy heart wanted some truth bombs to be blurted by Nandu and Shubhu ..........