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Posted: 3 years ago

#11

So beautiful❤️ Please write more!

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Posted: 3 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: SEA05
Subtle expression of deep feelings, thank you for that.

Thank you for your very kind words!

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Posted: 3 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: avneil101
This is incredible omg😍 please continue writing

Thank you! I think this is it for this particular page in their story for now. Maybe someday I’ll look back and see what the next page looks like

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Posted: 3 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: Shivpriya6
Thank you. It made me so emotional.

Thank you! Glad you liked it.

Originally posted by: Dewdrops1995
Awesome story

Thank you so much

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Posted: 3 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: aisha_ranbir8
This was beautiful .. pure raw emotions of deep feelings and love Ram has for his Priya and him realizing it. Beautifully written.. loved every bit of it... Please continue writing...eagerly waiting for the other versions as well .. take care.. :)

Thank you for your lovely feedback. Much appreciated :)

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Posted: 3 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: WhyAmIHereAgain
This is so good... Loved it loved it.. Such beautiful writing.

Have u written any more on Raya.. Kindly share the link

Thank you 🙏 ! I have written more. The first is linked just at the start of this story, it’s another one shot. And I’ve just posted a set of Drabbles which I hope you’ll also like!

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Posted: 3 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: FariaJuthi
Beautifully expressed! Please continue with next part. Priya deserves to know his feelings!

Thank you! I think for now I’ve left this Ram and Priya in that hospital room, to chart their own destiny. Maybe some day I’ll write what Priya feels, but abhi ke liye inka safar, yahin tak.

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Posted: 3 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: Balh2fan
Very beautiful, each and every emotion brought out so well. Could actually feel them. Please write more, you are very good 👍🏻

Thank you so much for your kind words! Glad you liked it 🙏