RaYa Drabble: Rainy Rose scent

She doesn't like rain, but today she is so unusual, she suits to be like that. I want to ask her and I decide, she argues for a long time, remembering traffic jams, dirt and diseases.

What's the deal with them now? Nothing, I think, and she seems to hear my thoughts, agrees. While we continue to argue amusingly, I approach and let her hair down, now I'm not funny, I want to be with her in the same rhythm. Priya hears me again, closes her eyes, holds out her hand, first in the wrong place, and then, our hands join and I feel that she is a part of me. Water flows through our hands, and it finally gives in. She has a smile on her face that I have never seen before. There is something tender, sweet and attractive in it. And it attracts me. I don’t know how and when, I press my body against her and hug her. My face is pressed against her soft features. Nothing like this has ever happened to me before. I am connected with her, I inhale the aroma, I understand that she loves the rain, and I love the rose. I need a rose.

My rose suddenly gets naughty and confesses that she likes the rain. She entered my thoughts again.

Don't run away, laughing rose, I'll catch up with you. Your fragrance is in me, perhaps forever, but am I ready to admit it? I'll decide later, now with me is the rainy laughter of love.

"I love the rose. I need a rose."

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Beautifully written.

Thank you, it's a pity that my abilities are not enough to describe it the way it feels, something big and absorbing the soul to the last drop

You did good 👌 it was very nicely expressed.😌🤭

One of THE BEST Drabbles on the forum…

-English— Perfect(sorry… but that’s the first thing a grammar Nazi like me notices🤣)

- Setting— Perfect

- Persepective— Perfect

- Use of Rose as a Hyperbole— Oh My God! ASSOLUTAMENTE PERFETTO!💓

I am literally smitten… don’t know what else should I say!💓

You are a die hard romantic, you capture the essence very well and really admire how you always see the positive aspects… the span of those moments does not matter to you all that matters is the feelings… please keep writing 👍🏻

Your drabble made the scene even more beautiful. Thank you ❤️❤️❤️

Thank you, about what is beautiful and you need to write beautifully, otherwise there is no point in starting

Life is difficult, I try to make it more beautiful. Capture something more that is hidden behind simple but special romantic scenes. This is so lacking in reality that catching and holding it in your hands at least with the help of this is a great success.

Thanks for so many nice words. I really wanted to capture the meaning of what is happening on the screen and convey it from the other side.

The grammar of my English is terrible)) I try to write in such a way that my original text in Russian is not killed by the translator and gives at least part of its real essence, in most cases, a beautiful essence.

I also write poems in my own language, I hope I can create something good for RaYa too