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Hi guys, I'm again to disturb you all with a small story. I'm updating this as two parts as the intended one shot became little lengthy. I don't want you make you all bored. Excuse my mistake.. hope you all like it.


Part 1:


After Priya and Brindha exposed Vedhika's true colour, Ram was hurt more by the betrayal of nandhini's and shubham's than vedika's act. When vedika got exposed , she blurted out all her plans and the involvement of his own mother and brother.

Even shivina was hurt seeing her own brother trying to spoil her married life and it was done according to her mother's plan.while the Bhai she never respected but took him for granted was protecting her love and husband's respect with all his might. Shivina felt disgusted learning all this and felt bad for not respecting the way her Ram bhai deserved.she immediately went and hugged her Ram bhai who looked more broken than her. Ram was standing still as he thought it as bad dream while shivi's apology made him jerk back to the real world. Ram just hugged shivi and asked vedhika to get out of his house, also from his life.

Ram turned to nandhini and asked

Ram: What was the need for this mom?

Have I ever made any decision without your permission. I know you never considered me as your own son but now I can understand you never saw me as living person.

Nandhini: it's nothing like that ram. I was just concerned about shubam and shivina, what will happen to them if you neglected them because of your own family.

Ram: you don't have an iota of trust upon me. Do you? . What did I ever do to think like this about me mom?. I always considered shivi and shubam as my own even when I know they don't reciprocate my feelings.

Saying so he wiped his tears and turned toward priya

Ram: Priya I am sorry , I am taking some life changing decision without consulting you but I know you will support my decision.

Priya: Mr. Kapoor apki har faisaleh meh main aapke saath hoon.

After listening to her , Ram went to his room while speaking in the phone

He came after 30 mins with many files in his hands and silently sat on the living room couch. After few minutes,their family lawyer came and gave the documents he asked to preapare immediately.

Ram asked the lawyer to read it out

It was drafted as adi,Kunal , vikrant and Priya will get 5% of share each while both shivi and shubam get 30% of share each and remaining 20% of share will be in nandhini name.

Ram got the documents from the lawyer and signed them. After signing them he asked the lawyer to hand over their share paper accordingly.

As the lawyer handing the procedure, ram went inside and packed all his cloths to get away form the mansion as he started feeling suffocated among them.

When ram came down Priya asked him to wait and went upstairs to pack her bag. Ram never opened his mouth just waited for her. Priya came near him and kept her luggage,then turned around to go to nandhini and after taking hold of nandhini's hand priya thrusted her share papers saying Ram is more important to her than anything.

Priya : chalo, mr.kapoor hum chalte hain

Adi: ek minute Priya, we don't need anything other than our friend Ram.

Saying this adi gave his share papers to nandhini followed by Kunal ,vikrant. Brindha felt proud of her friends.

Together they started moving out,

Shivi: mom you can have my shares too. I don't want anything from you guys. I have only one brother as my family and that is my ram bhai.

Shivi gave her papers to nandhini and started moving out with Ram . Nandhini tried to make her understand but shivi was so stubborn and didn't listen to her.

Ram and Priya went to brindha's house as it was night and four of them went to sleep skipping their dinner.

Priya saw ram acting like sleeping. She switched off the light to make him feel better as she know he is controlling his tears.

After seeing his tears falling endlessly in the pillow.priya slowly lifted Ram' s head and made him lie down in her lap,while she kept whispering sweet nothings. This made Ram to broke down completely,he cried like a baby by hugging her waist ,she allowed him to cry.

Ram slept in the same position while Priya was sitting for the whole night,she to slept crying on seeing her husband's broken condition.

Morning Ram woke up , and saw their position ,he felt bad seeing Priya state that was caused because of him. He owed to prove himself for Priya. Ram made Priya to sleep in a comfortable position and went to get ready after kissing her forehead.

Ram went and wished brindha, adi a chirpy good morning . They too wished him happily as they saw him trying to mend his heart and with Priya by his side they know Ram will achieve everything in a matter of time.

Ram : adi ask Kunal and vikrant to come over. I have business plan ,let's discuss about it.

Priya came out and say her husband working she felt little relieved seeing him little normal . Ram wished a good morning to Priya and concentrated on his work.

In a matter of time, Ram's business started to flourish. The started their business in the name of KARV(Kunal,Adi,Ram,Vik) which also means Love. Name selection was done by Priya and Brindha. In this business all the four adi,ram,Kunal,vikrant had equal share.

They bought a huge acres of land, where the four built their dream house next to each other and settled into beautiful life.

Their friendship is the one which made them feel like they are the richest people in the world than the money.

After this fiasco, shivi is too close with Ram and she started understanding their true friendship so she now calls adi,Kunal and vikrant as Bhai and treats them same as her Ram bhai.

Adi,Kunal , vikrant,and Ram treats shivi and sandy like a princess.

Finally everything fell into right place.

No one talks about nandhini or shubham.

All are happy with their life shaped up.

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Part 2 :


Five years later:

Ram was in a shopping mall playing games in his phone. Adi was by his side trying to make the baby silent but the Baby wasn't listening to adi . So adi thrusted the baby to Ram and asked him to handle the baby.

Ram cuddled the baby ,made funny faces along with funny noise at him. And finally the two year old found that funny ,so started laughing by clapping both his hands. Adi sighed in relief.

That's when someone called Ram.

Ram and adi turned to see who it was, they both saw vedhika coming towards them. Both adi and ram cursed under their breath but didn't say anything.

Vedhika asked ram seeing a baby in his hands.

Vedhika: is it your baby ram?

Brindha who came at the same time answered her question

Brindha: it's mine , any problem?

Vedhika smirked thinking ram still haven't moved on from the past.

Vedhika : I know Ram you can never move on.

At the same time, vikrant came along with pregnant twinkle.

Twinkle : what is this chudail doing here?

Brindha : same question yaar

Come on guys let's move but vedhika stopped them and started talking to ram

Vedhika : please ram forgive me for my past mistakes. I am waiting for you even after five long years. While she was continuing her melodrama Kunal came there along with his fiancee. Without seeing vedhika

Kunal: guys finally we have selected our bridal outfits.thanks to .. saying this he stopped speaking and asked what the hell is she doing here.

Brindha ,twinkle: welcome to the club.. saying so they started laughing.

Seeing everyone with their pair and ram standing alone vedika thought she still have a chance in Ram's life.

That's when they heard the famous word

Priya: Mr.Kapoor

Ram immediately turned and ran towards Priya replying

Ram: haan jaan . Kya hua

Priya : aapke beti ko pakadiyeh. She is not at all listening to me. Saying so Priya showed their 4 yrs old daughter who was on the verge of crying.

Actually through out vedhika' s conversation Ram was busy in lulling brindha' s baby to sleep that he never paid any attention to vedhika.

Vedhika looked at the scene infront of her with opened mouth like a stupid.

Seeing his daughter on the verge of crying,ram immediately gave the sleeping baby to brindha and started consoling his daughter by picking up.

Ram started asking her why she was crying, she complained about how her mother wasn't giving her icecream she asked for. Ram to asked his daughter to not eat ice cream as she will get affected by cold. But his pyari beti showed her puppy face which was enough for him to buy the whole icecream shop.

Ram: acha chalo, we will get one small ice cream for my choti angel. Saying this he started moving towards the icecream shop followed by Priya

Priya: Mr.kapoor don't buy her ice cream

Brindha : chalo acha hua, if six years before, someone told ram will be happily married. Then everyone would have laughed it out as a joke. but see now Ram's daughter ruhi is the first child for everyone in our gang , precious little angel.

Adi : chalo guys hum bhi chalte hain

Saying so everyone went towards the icecream parlour.

Then everyone sat around and ordered their favourite flavours of icecream.

Vedhika moved little forward to catch a last glimpse of Ram. That's when she noticed Ram was busy getting fed by his daughter, also feeding her while Priya was cleaning both father-daughter duo's messy hand with tissue simultaneously.

Brindha called ruhi and fed her another flavour after getting fed she went and sat between kunal and his fiancee, that's when adi' s son woke up ruhi called him to her.so vikrant had the baby while ruhi fed him little bit of icecream. Brindha and Priya smiled happily seeing their children and started teasing Kunal' fiancee and twinkle.

What surprised vedhika was remarkable change in the Priya character. She was laughing continuously and teasing others. She had never seen her like this carefree. Ram's smile never left his face even for second.

She was shocked by Priya's behaviour as she know Priya genuinely didn't notice her presence.

Vedhika never knew when she came forward in her thoughts.. she saw Priya waving at her so she thought may be now Priya noticed her, that's why is waving at her, she was going to move forward that's when she noticed Priya was waving for shivi and akki not to her.

She watched shivi walking straight towards Priya, with a 10 months baby in her hand. Shivi handed the baby to her bhabhi

Shivi: please bhabi now you handle him, I'm going to eat ice-cream

Everyone smiled at her childishness, then adi and ram kept feeding shivina in turn.

Today after all this years she realised what she truly lost. Seeing them so happy made her realise money is nothing infront of their happiness.

Because seeing their behaviour no one will say they are rich people infact they are the country's second richest people.

She know about their success as they are talk of the town but no one knows anything about their family as they never allowed media in their personal space.

But they are still so simple with the same warmth.

Vedhika for the first time felt like a loser who had no one with her.

And the happy family again started the marriage purchase after completing their sweet treat.

Edited by Supercool30 - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
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Updated both the parts.. hope you don't feel bored.thank you.

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That’s fabulous story thanks

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Beautiful TS dear🤗

It was just amazing

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This is so so awesome. Such a beautiful glimpse of the future. I am so happy to see Vikrant and Twinkle together in your story. Thank you.
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omg this is soo awesome! i really wanted to read a RaYa OS with this kind of storyline, Ram leaving his wealth and Kapoor mansion with Priya. I also loved they had a baby! I loved how you named their baby Ruhi 😃n made her Papa’s girl Ram’s bonding with his friend is amazingly highlighted here too👍🏼 Vedika’s reaction seeing a happy Ram moving on was icing on the cake 🤣

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Originally posted by: sahra1977

That’s fabulous story thanks

Thank you 😊. Glad you liked it

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Originally posted by: MeDHellsAngel

Beautiful TS dear🤗

It was just amazing

Thank you so much yaar 😊.

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Thank you 😀

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