KTBM OS: Bas Itni Khata Hai.... - Page 2

Originally posted by: itsmeg3

It is so beautiful ..just like as your other writings.👏

Good take on KTBM.

Originally posted by: LuvSSever

Hi Naseem dear,

That's a very good one.

After your last humorous one on foursome, i wanted to read a serious one from you and there you go👏. thanks for writing this one.(hugs)

The beauty of your work is you always write your own take/story on RaShi's fictional characters with restoring the actual essence of characters they portrayed.

it makes me easy to visualise them and you write in such a way that your story and scenes, just run through before my eyes as i read them.

Same way..here too i can exactly imagine AriKa and its lovely too.

hope , in real series too one such scene of them happens.

i loved the start, the restlessness of Tipsy, to read it in words, a feel thts diff altogether...

then the sweet ever caring Karan wanting tipsy to be free of palash thought(we need to be free of it too..lol) and his decision to be away till she is comfortable with...

And then tipsy reaction and her inner turmoil to it(i can imagine sakshi well in it)...

then as always cherry lightening tipsy and our mood too...

then finally tipsy deciding to solve all and taking karan along with her...

poured all...

when i read those lines,

_Aur phir aap aaye meri zindagi mai

Karan didn't miss the twinkle in her eyes when she spoke about him_

even our eyes shows a pleasure while its about them relieving their togetherness...these lines produce a twinkle in our eyes too..lol

then her confession...his hug..her behave mr.khanna , his tease , then finally walking together..all was love...

_You just broke all the walls built around heart without making any noise. _

yes Karan did made her come out of her cocoon..

he just made her to be herself.

And we love him for that.

nicely written dear..loved reading it..Do keep it coming.

Originally posted by: peeyara

itni zyaada tareef 😲😲😲

you deserve it dear...you know my carvings to read emotional ones..especially reading is my fav one. and the start of your Os really took me to Tipsy and arika land.

And that appreciation is for future ones too.lol...write for us a even more emotional one..you can...i am waiting...:)

thank you 🤗

pleasure is all mine.

something got into my mind and I just started writing it and went wid the flow 😆

i wish a all new story comes up in your mind and we get a chance to read it ..lol

we will not get something this emotional in webseries for sure 😆 better satisfy ourselves in our own ways😆

I know it. :( ... they will try to show it with a pinch of humour and will spoil the scene.

i hv made a blog though but was thinking to make a wattpad account😕😆 as soon as I make one, i will share link with you😳

wherever your writings are , there i will end up for sure:)

with much confusion, hesitance...created one 😆

here you go: https://www.wattpad.com/545679386-arika-os-bas-itni-khata-hai-os-bas-itni-khata-hai

will chk there too...its going to be a first time for me. so it may take a while to know how and what wattpad is:) lol

Originally posted by: iluvusakshi

i m very angry. maine reply kiya tha lekin woh post hi nahi hua. grrr...
anyways...naseem di u r a fabulous writer.i just love whatever u write. whether it is arika or raya.
this one is too gud. loved loved loved it.

Originally posted by: LuvSSever