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Posted: 7 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: Sakshiashu

It's hilarious, awesome naseem and
beautifully written.
What's cooking in Priya's and yours mind?
I'm keen to know !!!
Do write more...
Thanks for pm.

Thanks 😳
whatever is cooking, its left for readers to presume 😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: LovingRaYa

Wow it was totally awesome update

Finally you have made the RaYa and Arika to meet each other and it was totally hilarious.
Noticing the habits of their respective spouse and comparison brought a sigh of relief on both the couple.
Love to read the further encounter of them. Thank you for the pm dear and it was great update.

thanks aanchal 😳
hv to get it out of system so wrote it 😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: peeyara

Thanks 😳
whatever is cooking, its left for readers to presume 😉


I would certainly love read it from you.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: .tiNNi.

Awesome update

Do write more...
Thanks for pm.

Thanks😳
Asfi and Zubiya in DP ❤️
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Posted: 7 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: contactcharu

ToooGud... awesome

Pls continue soo



Originally posted by: 123supriya

Wow amazing. It's so fun to read it. Plz continue. Sorry I am late to read n reply.


Originally posted by: Rayaland

Soo beautiful n awesome part n love RaYa n AriKa milan n its was hilarious hahaha too good n pls keep writing like this


thank you guys ❤️
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Posted: 7 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: leena04



ok so now I will give you full details comment ... I must say only you can think such concept bit I love this madness I wish once in blue moon we rely get to see this meeting happen in KTBM's any of the season around... I just loved the way you penned down it so well you showed true depth of each character in story this is one of your best concept ever yes AriKa is somehow somewhere is looks replica of RaYa but I loved the way you executed the whole poor keeping everything in life so perfectly... I wish you could have continue this somehow with other incident waiting for your stories to get update specially this one so do post next soon... Will be waiting for it... do soon...

Thanks Leena
Even I would hv loved to continue this one but then it will become never ending circle😆 so yeah ended it here itself clearing out that those four people never want to cross each other😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: LuvSSever

Naseem dear,

wow..what an idea Naseemji..:)
As i said before, only you could come up with such unique, weird(lol) hilarious plots and execute it well with your hilarious dialogues or scenes written in a way that i can imagine awesome Expressions from Raya and AriKa.

I could purely imagine Priya spitting water, Ram anger cum sarcastic dialogue deliveries, Karan being childish and tipsy being naive and showing ocd...lol

then entire convo between each pair and then between four of them was very nice staying true to their character.

i am relieved too just like them on seeing they hv got such partners and not vice versa..lol

Imagine Karan being wid Priya...this wud be such a firecracker combo 🤣 given their individual characteristics...Ram was never dominating but Karan is😳 and same goes with Priya-tipsy 😆

And i loved the fact Ram always take over Karan in preference..so true for us..lol
i hope on tht aspect you write a full scene on them in future update( i think u read it correctly, i want future update..lol)
Ramji is Ramji no matter what 😆 he was breathe of fresh air in all MCP ML on TV that tym😳 he was someone who was just a normal 40 yr old guy so he is always a priority❤️

And whats cooking up in priya mind..i mean Urs..
i am eager to read tht..Pls soon update.

You hv imagine what all Priya wud do 😉 sorry to disappoint you i might write something else n PM you but no continuation to this😳

i wish their lives tangle up again in your writings though they dont want to meet..lol...
bcoz i loved the last encounter of them in Urs:)


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Posted: 7 years ago
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Karan and Priya...hmm..yes i can go for it, can see them together in few epis but finally want priya to end up with Ram..lol
And yes as u said karan- priya firecracker combo...lol

Ram is love though as priya said he did had a big fat ego..his love is larger than tht..

i hv to imagine priya's doings and as far as u concerned, end card for this story :( ...hmm ok ...i will be happy with these two parts only...will read this repeatedly if i want this foursome to meet again..

i am being happy bcoz you said you will write and post some other...waiting to read it..:)
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Posted: 7 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: LuvSSever



Karan and Priya...hmm..yes i can go for it, can see them together in few epis but finally want priya to end up with Ram..lol
And yes as u said karan- priya firecracker combo...lol

Ram is love though as priya said he did had a big fat ego..his love is larger than tht..

i hv to imagine priya's doings and as far as u concerned, end card for this story :( ...hmm ok ...i will be happy with these two parts only...will read this repeatedly if i want this foursome to meet again..

i am being happy bcoz you said you will write and post some other...waiting to read it..:)

thanks for being considerate 😆
looks like we 2 are only here...lostsouls roaming on sunsan forum 😆
I am thinking to change platform for my stories😕😆 somewhere jahan kadardaan ho 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: peeyara

thanks for being considerate 😆
looks like we 2 are only here...lostsouls roaming on sunsan forum 😆
I am thinking to change platform for my stories😕😆 somewhere jahan kadardaan ho 😳


ya..seems so ..only 2 of us ..lol

@bold : ya..thts a good idea...do find one.. your writings deserved to be read more...
but gives us a link here or an ad here :), so tht we too know and can follow that.

And me, i will follow where ever your writings are...:)

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