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Hii everyone i m back but this timr with AriKa Os n written by my dear friend Arayna Kapoor pls like n comment on it n sorry for typing error


Os-Hum Tum

Scene start from where karan give the ring to tipsy..
tripura - shocked when karan give her appa's ring in her hand..and said mr.khana Ap or kuch nhi khna chahte Apko bas ye ring dene thi..

karan - han or kya but in heart he also don't know y he is so scared to tell her his true feeling..

tripura running from there karan screaming her name to stop her but she isn't stop..karan running behind her..she enter in her room and lock it and crying lying on her bed..
sherry getup to hear this and ask her what happens but she is not answering at all..then they hear a knock on door sherry go to open it and saw karan in front of her and ask him what ur doing with her y she is crying like hell..
karan - aree mujhe b nhi pta yhi pta krne aya hu

sherry - u both r mad kya she is crying I know it's bcoz of u and ur here to know the reason of her cry like really ?

karan - sherry u go and sleep in my room I'll Handel her

s - r u shure ?

k - 101% I know how to Handel this tanpura..she is going crazy day by day and making me too and sherry goes from there..

tripura still crying cover her face karan lie beside her and hug her by her waist she immidently getup when she feel his touch 440 volt current pass through her body when he touch her..

trip -what r u doing here u monster and hit him with the pillow he try to protect but all in vain she is very angry

t - get out from my room apko koi fiker nhi hai mere mai he pagal thi jo and stop

karan smile and ask Jo agge b bolo
tripura - kyu bolu kuch nhi btaungi jb apko kuch matlab he nhi hai toh and still crying

karan hold her beautiful face between his Palm and ask u r crying like this kyu nhi bta rhi mujhe reason mai hu I know but kis bat k liye vo toh btao..she crying more loudly..

karan - aree pagal ho gyi ho tanpura plzzz btado mujhe asa mat kro tumhara Rona mujhse Handel nhi hota..

tipsy - Mr.khanna apse kuch puchu karan nodded..y u do this to me apna entertainment krne k liye koi or nhi Mili apKo I know ki ladkia marti hai ap per bht attention dete hai apko per mai compete nhi ker skti usne kyuki nhi hoga mujhe still sobbing..Mai unme Se nhi hu kyu ase ghuma rhe hai Ap mujhe jb Apk liye mai sirf apki doc hu or ap mere patient..

karan - acha mere liye tum sirf ek doc ho ? or tumhare liye mai kya hu Dr. tripura sundri nagrajan let me tell u ur the one jo hmesha doc or patient Ka flag gle mai latka ker ghumti thi..

tipsy look at him or said mujhe nhi pta mai apse bat Krk apna time waste nhi krna chahti aj hmara last day tha session ka ur fyn now Kl mai chali jayungi na honge ap na mera Dimag khrab hoga na kuch or so better mai chli jau..and get from bed or ready to leave the room karan hold her hand and said u want answer na ok fyn he take the tipsy's father ring from side table or use phna deta hai and tripura sirf dekhti reh jati hai..

karan - u know what tanpura bht ladkia ati hai mujhse flirt krti hai impress krne ki koshish krti hai mere traf attract hoti hai mujhe attract krne ki koshis b krti hai but u know what mujhe sirf tum attract krti ho Mai sirf tumse impress hota hu tumhare her choti Se choti bat her chij psand hai mujhe tumhara gussa tumhara pyar tumhara mjak mujhe tont Krna tang Krna sb kuch..or tum khti ho mujhe tumse kuch matlab nhi ghuma rha hu tumhe..han ghumana chahta hu tumhe but apne sath her jgah but ghuma ker chodna nhi chahta hmesha tumhare bahon mai rhna chahta hu..
Dr.tripura sundri nagrajan Ap Jase ladki ghumane ya flirt k liye nhi bni sirf ishq or mhobbat k liye bni hai jisk sath kbhi koi time pass nhi ker skta..tipsy had tear in her eyes to hear that she can't be live ki karan ne asa bola..
karan bend on his knees and propose her..Forward his hand and ask
WILL U MARRY ME DR.TRIPURA SUNDRI NAGRAJAN and look at her she can't blink her eyes to hear this..

karan - sry yar need to correction aham aham will u marry me my tanpura

t - NO

karan shocked and get up or said y kyu kisliye ..
t - bcoz apne abhi tak I love u toh kaha nhi usk bina purpose pura nhi hota na..

k - itna sab bol diya toh I love u Ki gunjaish thi tum na sach mai tanpura ho..and both laughing

t - boliye ab jldi..

k - nhi I love u phle Ap bolengi sbkuch bola Maine shadi k liye b puch liya now ur turn

t - no way ap bologe phle..

k - dekho nhi bola toh mere pass bht se trik hai and pull her toward him

t - behave Mr.khanna showing fake anger..

k - bas kro yar Bht ker liya behave now u behave like me tanpura..

t - nhi manege Ap

k - NO ager nhi bola toh ferse drink shuru ker dunga..

t - uff bas ab bar bar ase dhamki Kyu dete hai ap bol rhi hu na..ankhe band kro phle..

k - smile and very excited sachi ok bolo krli band ankhe

t - I ...

k - hmm and smile with open heart

t - love

k - haan jldi bolo na..

t - u...ur acting and laugh he immidently open his eyes and said tanpura ki bachi abhi btata hu and run behind her..

after some time dono tired hoker bed per gir jate hai.. karan come on top of her and hug her tightly and said I love u tipsy I love u so much I can't live without u she also hold him so tight both don't wanna broke the lovable hug..and spend the quality time in each other arms..

tripura - Mr.khanna bas kijiye uthiye mere upper Se vrna mai mer jayungi and laugh

karan - smile achaa tum mujhe mota keh rhi hu lil angry

tripura - nhi Maine kb kaha asa han vo bat alag hai ki Ap thode bhari ho but yes u look so cute and ho..

karan - smile or ask and...

tripura - and sweet

k - NO h... se sweet kase hua tipsy smile or said toh Apko pta toh hai then Kyu mujhe tang ker rhe ho ap..

karan - u know what tanpura ur ryt

for what..?

trail room analysis I mean shi mai whts wrong in that toh mai soch rha tha ki and deeply look in her eyes..
t - walking back or said in low tone no Mr.khanna no

k - y tanpura ye tumhara he funda hai toh lets try the trail room together and winks at her..
t - behave Mr.khanna ap Asa nhi ker skte..

k - mai bilkul asa ker skta hu Mrs khanna..Mai apk Samne abse bilkul behave nhi krunga bcoz I know ur expecting from me jase ap vha se bhagi na mujhe Lga pta nhi Kon Sa crime ker diya hai Maine but galti toh Ki thi mujhe apka hath pkad ker and he hold her hand kamar ko jakad ker and with other hand hold her waist ek jordar kiss krna chahiye tha and for word to kiss tripura close her eyes but she felt his lips on her for head she smile heartily that's y she love him so much...she open her eyes and saw karan standing lil far from her and look at her with so much love in his eyes...

tipsy - that's y i love u so much tb Maine kaha tha na womens feel safe with u its so true Mr.khanna sach mai bhgwan hai ek he antic piece bnaya hai Asa or ab Vo sirf mera hai..and had tear in her eyes..

tanpura don't get so emotional Verna mai b ro pdunga..

no apka Rona I can't Handel and both share a gud laugh or time with each other..both hug each other so tightly..ram start nuzzling her neck..she clutch his shirt more tightly..both hug each other so tight no one wanna broke the hug and suddenly tipsy phone buzzed she immidently broke the hug and go to attand the call its sherry call..
she attend it or ask what happens then sherry ask her about the situation and she said she is fyn and Mr.khanna apne room mai aa rhe hai tu aja wapis..

karan - what no mai Kahi nhi ja rha tipsy smile or said Ap yha nhi ruk skte..u have to go

karan - but y u forget we have to try the trail room together and winks at her..

tipsy - lil bold ya shure...karan shocked really ?

tipsy - ya but after marriage Mr.khanna

karan - no yar plzz na tanpura tipsy stare at him or said now behave Mr.khanna..

karan - teasing her to make face like her or said ok toh Mai Kl he shadi ker lunga tumse...

tipsy - what no amma b nhi hai yha..

karan - it's ok amma se permission or ashirwad le lunga mai phle he so don't make any excuses got it..now tanpura Gud night sleep tight and kiss on her chicks and go from there she smile and worried as well don't know vp Kya krenge subah..he is crazy..

sherry came in her room and ask what happens tipsy told her that karan wanna marry to her tommoro..sherry shocked and laughed or said ye toh shadi k mamle mai channie express ko b piche chod gya..tipsy to sherry yar mzak mat ker mujhe der lag rha hai..
sherry - u love him na toh kis bat Ka der chup chap soja Kl tere shadi hai..

next morning..

karan and tipsy seting in mandap in front of fire to holding each other hand or Mandir g mantr pad rhe hai and Amma is on video call this is the responsibility of vishal ki amma ek b moment miss na kre she is very happy...
a gud note shadi b khtam ho jati hai both r husband wife now..

radhika to tipsy - mai toh karan ko smbhal nhi payi hop ki tum ise smjh pao ise Handel ker pao kyuki ise akser dusro ki jarurt hoti hai Apno se jada or karan I hope mere sath Jo Tumne kiya isk sath na kro wish u a very happy married life..

tipsy - ab mai sirf inki doc nhi inki patni bhi hu toh us hak se mai keh skti hu ki aj k bad mere pati ko kisi or ki jarurt nhi pdegi unhe smbhalne k liye mai he unhe smbhal lungi or Vo mujhe thanks for ur wishes..

khanna house..
karan khanna room tipsy standing in front of the mirror karan hug her from back or said toh Mrs.tripura sundri khanna and tipsy smile karan continue Ab permission hai to use the trail room..

no..

shocked and said y

tipsy - bcoz ab apko permission b lene ki jarurt nhi..

karan - ohoo I see very bold han Mrs khanna then let's make me the first trail and take her in his arms tipsy laugh or said Mr.Khanna I know ur very gud actor but apni movies wale kam mat kijiye..
lay her down on bed and come on top of her or said let me help u in change atleast or vase b kisi ne mujhse kaha hai mujhe permission ki b jarurt nhi so here I m and start nuzzling her neck and open the dori of her back...kiss her on her forehead , eyes then chin start caressing her chicks with his thumb she moaned..karan kiss her both chicks and the both want to kiss each other despiretly next moment both kiss each other so passionately licking and sucking each other lips after 5-10 min they broke the kiss ram whisper in her in very heavy breath tanpura..
tipsy - hmmm..
karan - Tumne kaha nhi behave Mr.khanna
tipsy - smile bcoz I dont want u to behave today..and shy to tell this. .
karan - really then aj toh Mai or mera dil dono batmiz ho he jayenge...and again hug her tightly and kiss her touch and kiss every inch of her body through the fabric and both continusly tell each other I love u..I love u too..in a minut there cloth shrug off from there body and laying on floor both made love with each other so passionately and love became one sole..after love making karan head on her bossom sleeping very peacefully .beautiful soft devut cover both of them..tripura ran her finger through his hairs and very satisfying smile on her face or said to herself ur very lucky tripura ki ap itne handsome or ache insan ki biwi ho congatulation Mrs.tripura ummm no Mrs.tanpura karan khanna and laugh at her own comment and she also sleep to hug him more close to herself..

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Wow.. wonderful story...
Beautifully written..
Please do write more..😛
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Amazing...Arika is new addition on raya
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Awesome OS! plz write more OS on AriKa Plzzz
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RaShi r addiction. we just can't get enough of these two. loved this os. keep writing and posting.
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Wow
Very good story
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Awesome job, but Ek jagah, Karan ke bajaye, Ram likha.

Ram and Priya cannot go out of our system.
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Very nice progressing of the scenerio Between Arika after the ring fisco. Finally in their own words and style they confessed the love with little bit of nok jhok and tied in a knot of wedding and having blissful of marriage life.
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Wonderful os
Pls write more on Arika
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awww all the trial room analays part was the fab... wish Karan actually followed Tipsy till her room before on the night they separated I m just loving all the way too good awesome mind blowing I m so loving it... the way he confesses his love for her all the way he is such cute lover... they finally got married & step into new life to follow as their heart says... awesome mind blowing... will be waiting to next do write more...

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