OS: Aage Kab Badoge by Abhishek Panchal

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SakshiAddict

@SakshiAddict

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Total U turn lol

U nailed it man

Lmao u take Raya in altogether different version

God u are too good

Lol I was thinking like what will happen and u consummated them

I never expected

Wild bold hot innocent priya

So brilliant

I have to say ur ideas are so fantastic to Read

Do write more Abhishek

Thanks for this one

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aanchal

@LovingRaYa

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Unlike the show it shown soon RaYa fall in love and consumate the marriage in drunken state but they didn't regret but wanna became one in full sense.

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Suriya

@ssssabcd

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Posted: 8 years ago

#13

wat an outstanding writing :P:P

sweet surprise for us readers..

need to tell u.. its sooo gud.. so real abt raya..

pls pls pls write such os abt raya.. we are so desparate without raya.. our rashi..

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Kavya Kapoor

@kavyaaakapoor

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Posted: 8 years ago

#14

heheheh nice OS abhishek.

Naughty and Romantic...

like it...

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leena

@leena04

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Posted: 8 years ago

#15

naughty yet amazing so RaYa consummated their marriage but Priya was not in her senses lol... She actually seduced Ram in all way to get him for her awesome too good I really enjoyed it... but the most important part was how he disclose all the truth front of Priya in next morning so RaYa got again naughty - naughty all way awesome the way she showed her rights on him n he hope her back to take her in his world of passion & love awesome too good...

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sandhya

@lovelysakshi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#16

sweet Romantic love story

good one

thanks for PM

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