RaYa SS: Afsoos... 2nd part on pg 5... updated 22 Jan 2017

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Sakshi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

A different start to a new story.

I always loved priya's diaries.

Please pm me and continue soon.

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SakshiAddict

@SakshiAddict

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

"Kya pata.. jis pal ko special mann rehi thi.. wahi pal meri jindagi ke sabse bade afsoos ka pal banega.."

This Making me curious to read

Nice start

Priya's diary this particular part is something that makes me feel so good to read

I started to read this story from first chapter so I want to stick on to this till end

Please do update the next part soon

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umayal

@LuvSSever

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Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Hi..

Nice start..

Based On the real story...

Knowing priya's life through her diary is always heartfelt ...pleasure to read...

The entire life till priya's coma was summed up well with her current views and fears...

And the last line of hers about the pal she thought to be special turning into some other...

Does increase the eagerness to read more...

In actual story, the struggles of priya getting through this phase wasnt shown fully as needed...

I would love to read one real sad coated heart touching one from priya side...

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aanchal

@LovingRaYa

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Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Through her dairy Priya shared her inner most feelings and still.in confusion how to face them and solve them.

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fan_forever

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Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Hey dear

even i loved priya's diaries a lot... but i felt the writers could have shown it more... so here is the ss..

will try to pm u...

yes u r first...

Originally posted by: iluvusakshi
wow new ss. loved priyas diaries.
eagely waiting for next.
if possible pl. pm me from next time

yahoo. me first

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fan_forever

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Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Hey Arpi...

glad u liked it... next part will be up today...

also... I m a huge fan of ur all ff... pls do continue all of themm...

Originally posted by: Arpipatil
Superb start nice plz continue soon

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fan_forever

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Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Happy that you loved it... thanks for commenting...

Originally posted by: Rayaland
Wow very nice part loved it

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fan_forever

@fan_forever

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Posted: 8 years ago

#18

hehe... glad u liked the story... this ss will be more on character's inner feelings and thoughts... hope you will continue to like it...

Originally posted by: Kiruthikaaaru
Wow...A different start loved it pls continue soon

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fan_forever

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Posted: 8 years ago

#19

Hi Reshak

glad that u like the update... and diary idea...

will post next part today... hope you will like it too...

Originally posted by: reshak
Waw superb update... interesting
Priya is pouring her heart out through dairy ..
Waiting for next update...

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fan_forever

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Posted: 8 years ago

#20

hehe... was surely waiting for your reply... yes another dard bhara ss... to be frank i was motivated to write only becoz of ur pm... 😉 otherwise was too lazzzyyy...

grumpy golu is also on cards...😆

Originally posted by: abhishekpanchal
wow...;!!!? another dard bhara ss!!! well on the real show... :-D nice...to be honest i just like this side of ur writing... :-) next soon plzz...and consider writing grumpy golu :-)

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