SS: Haule Haule Ho Jaayega Pyar. part 24 PG 37 - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
#11
wow... interesting...
seems like they don't tolerate each other
.. waiting for next ...
plz update soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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wow...new ss...new concept...excellent...sista...kash apke jaisi lagan hoti mujhme ff likhne ki!! :-P well ideas to bohot ate hai but... phone par likhne k man nai karta :-/ well next soon..and waiting for rishte actually
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 2

On the day of marriage.

Neha's place, priya in her room, neha entered in tension.

Priya asked her- what happened? Why are you disturb?

Neha- nothing.

Priya- neha kya baat hai.

Neha- aaj usski shaadi hai.

Priya- kid ki shaadi hai.

Neha- mere ex-boyfrnd ki.

Priya- tera ex-boyfrnd, kab tha.

Neha- priya jab tu USA gayi thi seminar ke lite tab mail Boston gayi this holiday ke liye.

Priya- OK toh.

Neha- toh aj usski shaadi hai.

Priya- toh aj Teri bhi shaadi hai.

Neha- but I still love him.

Priya- neha tu pagal hai, shaadi KO sirf 8 hours baaki hai aur tu bol rahi hai, you still love him.

Neha- yes I still love him n he loves me too.

Priya- it's not possible neha, aj Teri shaadi hai.

Neha- I m run from these marriage.

Priya- thappad khaayegi bhag jaane ki baat ki toh.

Neha- toh kya karu mai.

Priya- ek baar uss ladki ke baare me toh soch.

Neha- mera kya.

Priya- ek baar ram ke baare me toh soch usska kya hoga.

Neha- wahi soch kar mai bhagna chahti hun.

Priya- shut ur mouth n go get ready for marriage.

Neha didn't argue n went to her room.


At vik's place.

Ram- mai sambhal lunga sab kuch tu jaa aapne pyar ke paas.

Vik- bro are you sure.

Ram- haan I m.

Vik- lekin bade papa aur papa aur most important humari Maa.

Ram- I will handle them relax u go n marry with her.

Vik- lekin priya.

Ram- I will handle everything.

Vik- are you sure.

Ram- tune naam nahi baatya who is she?

Vik- shaadi hone ke baad ghar lekar aaunga tab dekh Lena.

Ram- ab jaa aur mera card use kar, thode din baad sab steal kar ke tujhe yaha par bulaunga, tab tak enjoy at Goa.

Vik- bhai ek baat bata tune ek ticket Singapore ki kiu nikali aur 2 tickets Goa ki.

Ram- tu yaha se jaa raha hai ya nahi.

Vik- OK jaa raha hun n he hugged him n jumped from window.

At neha'a place.

Savitri neha's Maa read a letter of neha, n started crying, priya in her room, she thought neha commit a suicide n she run there n found savitri n Ajay crying n her mom dad console them, she go near n asked them.

Priya- kya hua? Neha kaha par hai?

Sudhir give a letter to priya n she read it.

Neha's letter.

I can't marry, coz I m love someone else, mai ram se shaadi kaise kar sakti hun, iss liye mai shaadi se bhag rahi hun, sorry. Neha.

Priya got a shocked n she went to her room.

At ram's place, every one at hall n ram told the every one about vik's decision.

Ram- vik he shaadi nahi kar Sakta tha.

Amar- iss liye tune usse bhaga diya.

Ram- nahi papa.

Amar- phir kya baat thi.

Ram- papa, chote papa wo kisi aur se pyar karta rha tha, I mean kar rha hai aur wo ladki aaj vik ke liye aapna ghar chodkar bhag aayi hai coz she believe him.

Krishna- iss liye tumne vik KO ussi ke shaadi ke din bhaga diya.

Laxman- tumne ek baar bhi nahi socha priya ke baare me, usske gharwalon ke baare me, wo sab humara wahan par wait kar rahe honge, hum kya jawab denge unn sab ko.

Ram- wo sab mane socha hai.

Nuts- kya socha hai bhai aapne, aapko pata bhi hai ek ladki ki shaadi, shaadi wale din tut jaati hai toh log kya sochte hai, aap nahi samjh sakte uss ladki par kya asar hota hai inn sab ka.

Ram- relax nuts mai sab sambhalunga.

Laxman- kya sambhalega ram, waha par pehle shaadi vik ki hogi aur phir tumhari.

Ram- chote papa waha pehle shaadi meri hogi aur vik ki shaadi 7 din baad hogi ye baat hum meri shaadi ke baad declared kar denge, hum ye baata denge ke he is not well OK, lekin ladki walon KO ye baat pata nahi chalni chahiye ke vik aapni shaadi se bhag gaya hai.

Amar- galti se wo puchte hai vik kaha par hai tab hum kya jawab denge.

Ram- mera sehera kaha par hai.

Nuts- ek dulha apni shaadi chodkar bhag gaya hai aur ek dulha apni shaadi ke liye deewana huye jaa raha hai.

Ram- abhi vik ki shaadi pehel hogi ram ki nahi chalo an tyari karte hai.

Laxman- humein kya Karna hai ye pehle thik se baata phir sehera badha.

Ram- OK shanti se dunno tension mat lo OK.

All family say OK.

At neha's place.

Priya- sab meri baat thik se sunno pehle meri shaadi hone wali hai phir neha ki, toh pehle meri shaadi hone ke baad ram ke gharwalon se baat karke sab thik Kara denge, unhhe ye baat baata denge aur humari baat unnhe samjh aayegi itna toh pakka hai.

Savitri- wo ladke wale hai.

Priya- toh kya hua, wo insan hai samjh nahi sakte.

Sudhir- aur kya samajayenge.

Priya- papa him dono bade huye toh samaj nahi aaya tha, sab thik hoga tension na lo sab thik hoga.

At vik's place.

Ram- sehera utrna nahi chahiye badai tak.

Krish- agar kis KO photo nikalni hogi toh.

Ram- toh baata dena koi rasam hai.

Nuts- dusra dulha kaha se aayega.

Ram- rishab tyar hoo jaa, vik ki sherwani pehen le.

Rishi- kahi aap mere shaadi ke baare me toh nahi soch rahe hai.

Ram- shut up n do what I say aur nuts issye bhi sehera bandh aur galti se bhi upar mat Karna, baki sab mai dekhlunga aur nuts tu mere aas paas rehegi.

Nuts- OK bhai.

At neha's place.

Ajay- ek problem ho sakti hai.

Priya- ab konsi problem chachu.

Ajay- neha ke baare me pucha toh.

Priya- bata dena room me hai, shaadi ke time niche aa jaayegi.

Savitri- agar unhe neha KO milna hoga toh.

Priya- toh bata Dena humare yaha par koi riwaz hai.

Ajay- thik hai.


All plan done by both family, ram's family reached marriage hall with 2 groom, ram n rishi seat on sofa.


Sudhir to ajay- mujhe lagta hai humen baat karni chahiye laadke walon se.

Ajay- lekin kya bolenge.

Sudhir- wahi samjh nahi aa raha hai.


Laxman to amar- humen baat karni chahiye inn sab se.

Amar- kya baat karnge ki dulha bhag gaya hai shaadi wale din issye accha pehle ek shaadi nipta le.

Sudhir to Ajay- pehle priya ki shaadi karwa dete hai phir dekhte hai.

Laxman- pehle ram ki shaadi karwa dete hai phir dekhte hai kya Karna hai.


Pandit ji calling for dulha n ram got up n seat in mandap.

Savitri n shipra brought priya in mandap n seat side by ram.

Ram- priya ka kya hoga jab usse pata chalega ke vik bhag gaya hai shaadi se, in heart.

Priya in heart- ram KO pata chalega tab kya hoga.



In between some part is missing before calling pandit ji...


Aap socho kya hoga...


Continue soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hayeee sooo sweet part n hope raya ek dusre ko pasand atleast karte ho from their 1st meeting n raya ke thoughts kitne milte hai wow n neha n vik r in love n going to get married wow abb aayega maaza n pls update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: leena04



yaar kaha kaha se le aati ho such amazing concept this is my one favourite short story concept as it's very similar to it... yani dulhan hi badal gayi hain some wow ab aayega maza I guess this is oibg to be another rocking story from you for sure can't wAit for next do post all ur stories soon...



kya karu dimag din raat yahi kam karta rehta hai bichara soota hi nahi hai
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: abhishekpanchal

wow...new ss...new concept...excellent...sista...kash apke jaisi lagan hoti mujhme ff likhne ki!! :-P well ideas to bohot ate hai but... phone par likhne k man nai karta :-/ well next soon..and waiting for rishte actually



ohhh my god bhai I thought u forget to read stories but I m glad to see ur comment 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#17
Hehehe bhut maza arha h good going...
Raya ko milwane kliye nehvik ko baga jarha h ...
Krna pdta h nehvik k bina raya b adhuri h..
Waiting for next update...thnx for d pm..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#18
So cute both gonna marry not knowing who is behind them ...Lovely continue soon di..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Superb story and an interesting concept. Read both the parts together. It's awesome.
Thanks for pm and continue soon. Waiting eagerly for Priya and Ram's reaction!!!!!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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awww part 2 is awesome yahi mera shak sahi nikla lol it's all NeVi plan to run away but in very much nice way lol RaYa ko milane ka aacha bahana mil gaya awesome n I also guessed it right k no missing part hai it's abt Dulha Dulhan ki badli k baare me aye unko family k bare me but won't say anything here openly as story's interest will get spoil good going yaar awesome amazing keep it up ur good work waiting for next do post soon...

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