SS: Haule Haule Ho Jaayega Pyar. part 24 PG 37 - Page 3

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Posted: 8 years ago
#21
superb update...
now unknownling both married...
thanx to ram vikneha Ko bhagane ke liye... missing part maybe both family comes to know truth...
it's becoming interesting plz update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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superrbbb update!!!
as usual loved it!!!
toh raya ki shadi hone hi waali hai!!
plz continue soon!!
thank u for pm!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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hailaaa
..full on mast update. I liked it. lovely. thanks for pm. pl continue
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow... story is moving really well...a different concept... looking forward to next update
Pls update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 3


In between some part is missing, before calling pandit ji.


Shipra to pandit ji- pandit ji aapko pehle priya ki shaadi karwani hai.

Pandit- ji usska muhurat pehle hai.

Shipra- phir bhi koi bhi agar kahe ke pehle shaadi neha ki karni hai toh aap yahi bolenge ki shaadi pehle priya ki hi hogi.

Pandit- usske kuch dakshina Deni padegi.

Shipra & savitri- thik hai.

Pandit- jab mai bolunga dulhan KO lekar aao tab aap priya beti KO lekar aana.

Savitri- thik hai.

Shipra- aur ek baat.

Pandit- kya baat boliye.

Shipra- he baat kisi KO bhi nahi pata chalni chahiye.

Pandit- kisi KO bhi nahi pata chalegi, sirf aap ke aur mere bich me rahegi he baat.

After shipra & savitri meet to pandit, Krishna & mal meet and same think told told pandi ji like shipra & savitri.


Marriage done, biddai also done, ram n priya and too family members un-known about all.


After they leave for hotel, in marriage hall.

Amar,krishna, laxman & mala go near sudhir, shipra Ajay & savitri, all member expressions are guilty.

Ajay- humein aap sab se kuch baat karni hai.

Sudhir- ji humein bhi.

Ajay- wo baat hai ki hum vik ki shaadi nahi Kara sakte priya se, so vik aapni shaadi se bhag gaya hai.

Shipra- kya? Phir so kon tha dulha.

Krish- wo ram tha.

Savitri- kya?

Mala- aap aise kiu puch rahe hai.

Shipra- wo ram that n she look at savitri.

Ajay- kya hua bhabhi.

Shipra- lekin dulhan neha nahi hai.

Laxman- kya?

Savitri- ji wo neha bhi aapni shaadi se bhag...

Mala- kya! Isska matlab hai hum logone ram aur priya ki shaadi karwa Di.

Laxman- kya bole jaarahi ho tum mala.

Amara- matlab kya hai run sab ka.

Shipra & Krishna told everything to everyone.

Ship- humein pata tha pehle vik aur priya ki shaadi hone wali hai.

Mala- inn sab me him dono be gadbad kardi pandit KO bola ram ki shaadi pehle ho jaaye.

Shipra- aur hum dono ne priya.

Nuts- ooo maatao inn sab me aap sabhi ki koi galti nahi hai, inn sab me pandit ki galti hai.

Shipra- MATLAB.

Nuts- thoda sa flashback, pandit be sirf yahi kaha dulha, dulhan KO lekar aao, naa ke dulhe vik aur dulhan priya KO.

Rishi side his sehra & says- isska matlab hai dulha dulhan KO pata hi nahi hai Jodi change hai, priya bhabhi KO lag raha hai viky bhai hai aur ram bhai KO lagraha hai neha.

Nuts- ye socho agar ye baat hum sab KO ab pata chali hai, unhhe jab pata chalegi tab kya hoga.


Now time first night after marriage, bride seat groom came seat on bed, groom touch her hand, she side her ghughant from her face.

Ram & priya- tum?

Ram- neha kaha par hai?

Priya- vik kaha par hai?

Ram- bhag gaya vik,neha kaha par hai.

Priya- same bhag gayi,shaadi ke kuch ghante pehle.

Ram- what?

Priya- ghar walon KO laga tum.

Ram- mere ghar walon KO laga tum.

Priya- ahhh kya ho raha hai.

Ram- iss vik KO toh mai nahi chodunga.

Priya- mai bhi neha KO.

Ram- Maine kiu bhaga diya vik KO usske hi shaadi ke din.

Priya- hwww kaisa bhai hai aapne hi bhai KO bhaga diya usske shaadi ke din ek baar bhi nahi socha mera kya hoga.

Ram- tumne bhi toh tumhari dost like sis KO bhagaya hoga.

Priya- itna bhi bura nahi sochti hun mai kisi ke bhi baare me.

Ram- it means my thinkings bad.

Priya- nahi toh kya? Vik KO bhaga diya shaadi se.

Ram- toh kya karta wo jise pyar kar raha tha, wo ladki already ghar chod chuki thi.

Priya- then why are you not inform to us.

Ram- tumhari family ne inform kiya tha humein neha bhag gayi hai ye baatane.

Priya- meri family ne socha aamne samne baat karnge.

Ram- toh hunein ne bhi yahi socha tha.

Priya- ye sab hua hai iss ka andaza ghar walon KO toh hoga na.

Ram- ab tak toh pata chal gaya hai ke cross connection ho gaya hai.

Priya- ladki ka naam kya hai?

Ram- konsi ladki?

Priya- wahi ladki jis ke liye vik bhag gaya shaadi wale din.

Ram- mujhe nahi pata naam kya hai.

Priya- phir pata kya hai tumhe.

Ram- shaadi hone ke baad call karega bola tha.

Priya only listen.

Ram- USS ladke ka kya naam hai.

Priya- Boston me mile the aisa kaha tha mujhe, itna hi pata hai mujhe.

Ram- thik hai, tum jaa kar change Karo, is shaadi ka kya Karna hai ye hum baad me decide karte hai.

Priya- kya Karna hai matlab, divorce' Lena hai.

Ram- are you sure.

Priya- of course I m.

Ram- OK.

Priya- Maine vik dekh kar haan kaha tha shaadi ke liye most important neha tumse shaadi ke liye ready thi aur mai bhi yahi chahti thi ke mai aur neha ek hi ghar me jaaye, jaaha par neha nahi waha par mai nahi.

Ram- Maine bhi baado ke kehna maankar shaadi ke liye haan kaha tha wo bhi neha KO pasand karke tum toh aas paas bhi nahi thi.

Priya- exactly my point !

Ram- ho gaya ab jaa kar change Karo aur soo jaao kal subhe ghar jaa kar sab thik karna hoga, nahi toh..

Priya- nahi toh kya!

Ram- mai gharwalon KO baata dunga ke humein divorce chahiye.

Priya- mai bhi yahi bolungi.

Ram- agar gharwale nahi maane toh.

Priya- unhhe maana padega, they all missed up.

Ram- how can you blem to family.

Priya- pehle hi baata dete toh ye sab nahi hota, chupa ke rakha yahi galti ho gayi.

Ram- tum bol rahi ho ye bhi baat sahi hai.

Priya- mujhe ek baat samjh nahi aarahi hai.

Ram- kya?

Priya- pehle meri aur vik shaadi hone wali thi phir tum kaise mandap me baith.

Ram- ye baat mai bhi tumse puch sakta hun.

Priya- what do you mean?

Ram- mujhe choti Maa ne kaha ki meri shaadi pehle hone wali hai baad me tum dono ki.

Priya- lekin meri hi shaadi pehle hone wali thi, tum kiu baith mandap me.

Same time phone ring, ram pickup the call.

Nuts- bhai plz kuch bolne se pehle baat suniye phir swal, and she narrates all the missing incidence before pandit calling them in mandap, ram listen all these n cut the call.

Ram- iss pandit KO toh mai nahi chodne wala.

Priya- kya hua.

Ram narrates her whole incidences.

Priya slap her forehead n seat on sofa.

Priya- plz give me ur phn.

Ram- kiu?

Priya- ek call Karna hai.

Ram give his cell she dialed a number.

Priya on call- kaha par hai kuch swal jawab nahi,video call me right now, rather then I kill my self with last note,jis par tera naam hoga n she cut the call n gave his cell to him she wipe her tears, ram on checked her, she switch on her mobile n went to changing room.

Ram only listen her voice, talking on phn.

Priya- you know what tumhari wajah se Jo kuch bhi hua hai, no u can't listening about anything from you n your boy frnd, you ruined my life, I thought u are my best frnd like my sister but u ruined my life, I just hate you neha, I hate you,n she started crying loudly.

Ram in heart- shayad Maine bahot badi galti ki vik KO bhagakar, sidhe-sidhe bata deta toh ye sab nahi hota, lekin ye vik gadha hai kaha? Priya ne bhi kuch sapne dekhe honge vik KO lekar aur Maine kya kiya vik KO shaadi se bhaga diya,I think mujhe priya se baat karni hogi, she is may be hurt all about, neha ne priya ka dil dukhaya to jarur hai, aise shaadi wale din bina kisi KO baataya bhaag Jana... Mujhe priya se baat karni hogi.

After an hour priya came out from change room.

Priya- ram bhukh nahi lagi hai tumhe.

Ram look at her, her eyes still red, ram give,her glass of water- pillo roone ke baad pani pina accha hota hai aur Rona health ke liye bhi accha hota hai.

Priya gulp the water n say- thanks Jo mujh par bit rahi hai wo tum par bhi bit rahi hai, tumhara bhai vik aur meri frnd neha inn dono ne Jo kiya hai wo accha nahi kiya hai aapne hi shaadi wale din bhag gaye, pata nahi dono kis ke saath honge.

Ram- abhi toh tumne neha se baat ki.

Priya- nahi wo Maine.

Ram- priya I can understand wo tumhara gussa aur kuch nahi.

Priya- tumhe gussa nahi aa raha hai...

Ram- mere gussa karne se kya hoga agar mai vik KO rokta toh wo ruk bhi jaata tumse shaadi bhi karta lekin Jo zindgi bhar pyar chahiye wo nahi kar pata, shayad neha ne bhi yahi socha hoga aur wo shaadi ke din...

Priya- neha was told me about that, Jo tumne abhi kaha.

Ram- kya?

Priya- yahi ke wo pyar kisi aur se karti hai shaai tumse kaise kar sakti hai.

Ram only smile.

Priya- tum change nahi karoge.

Ram- bhukh lagi hai.

Priya- OK, they both take the dinner together.

After that priya seat on bed, ram seat on sofa.

Priya- gharwalone Jo kiya wo shayad thik tha ghar ke saath-saath hum dono ki reputation KO samne rakhte huye shayad thik kiya.

Ram- ya may be.

Priya- tumhe pata hai vik kaha par hai abhi.

Ram- haan Goa me hai aapne GF ke saath.

Priya started thinking.

Ram- jaa socho mat kal subhe ghar jaa kar gharwalon ke samne humari baat rakhte hai, wo sab kya chahte hai for hum final decision lete hai abhi ke liye Jo hua hai usse side me rakh kar soo jaate hai.

Priya- yaa good night, she take a cushion n say to him.

Priya- bed par soo jaao, mai yaha par soo jaati hun.

Ram- it's OK, I can mange myself.

Priya- go & sleep there, I can mange here myself.

Ram- no u sleep there.

Priya- haar baat par argue Karna pasand hai tumhe.

Ram- arrye ajeeb ladki ho yaar, tum comfortable ho jaao iss liye kar raha hun toh tum ho ke mujhe hi uncomfortable feel Kara rahi ho.

Priya only look at him n says uth rahe ho ya nahi.

Ram- sherni ki tarah dekh kiu... Dekh rahi ho, uth raha hun n go to near bed b seat on bed.

Priya- lights off Karo, n she sleep on sofa.

Ram murmuring- ajeeb ladki hai, bhalai ka jamana hi nahi hai.

Priya- bhalai ka jamana 90s me chala gaya ab tum bhi soo jaao kal subhe ghar jaana hai.

Ram slap his forehead- kya ho raha hai aaj ke din, din khatam hi nahi ho raha hai.

Priya from sofa- soo jaaoge toh jaldi khatam hoga.

Ram- abhi tak soyi nahi.

Priya- Jo tum soch rahe ho wahi mai soch rahi hun toh iss liye bol rahi hun soo jaao jaldi, raat khatam hone se pehle.

Ram- good night...



Continue soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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yaay me first first...
but loving the story getting unfold so my thoughts were right some golmal actually happen before marriage which is done by panditji lol no problem Ram be Jodi Sahil milayi hai Ram-Priya & Neha-Vikram yahi sahi hai but why all this divorce talk yaar plz make them accept this marriage n try to find love with other hope to see some light moments in next soon...


Edited by leena04 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Why dii divorce pls change that topic and make them fall in love with each other soon pls...Di waiting for ur update continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Beautiful but no divorce yaar make raya ki dono neha vik ko dehkar decide that their marriage should gt one chance n now waiting for next part
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi dear..
Nice back to back updates...
Sorry for being late in commenting for part2.

Part 2

Neha planned to runaway..priya asked her to think about ram and stay back..
But then neha did runaway..had to happen then how raya will endup together..lol

Here Ram helped Vik to go with his girlfriend but have worried thoughts for priya..
Both thought about each other feelings is a good vibe...it shows they will turnup soon...

So, after one respective bride/groom not available, both the families decided to coverup in their own ways and tried to do one marriage atleast as decided...but fate was diff...

I thought swapping will happen at mandap, vik will hv a hand in it by vik-neh liking each other..but they ranaway which added more confusion and misery to raya's life..

Part 3

All those trials of both the family to complete one marriage, ended up finally in raya marriage due to pandit's mistake and chaos created by both family...

Whatsoever raya are married..lol..

And then came the famous raya scene with their trademark nokjhoks...

Tum..tum...
Priya's question of didnt you thought of me before helping vik...
And their discussion on that matter...,finally what happened revealed to them..

And now they decided for divorce......
Oh..anyways you guys opted for arranged marriage, i knew your acceptance was given on different grounds seeing different people but u guys could give a chance for your marriage ...
But i understand them too... their reasons are quite logical..this marriage is not what they asked for, though they are ready for arranged one..they had their own reasons for priya to accept vik and ram to accept neha...

So i can understand priya breakdown and gussa on neha too..

So sweet of ram, he understood her.. and both understood each other's circumstances which is good..

Then their nokjhok for bed and sleep ...poor ram...priya in sherni avatar..
bhalai ka jamana 90s me chala gaya😆
And soo jaaoge toh jaldi khatam hoga.😆

Priya is priya.. :)
Still raya dont know..neha and vik is the pair ..even we dont know yet what nehVik are upto.. lol..

Thanks for the pm.. waiting to see how raya and nehVik story unfolds...

I am waiting for your Rishta updates... :)

Edited by LuvSSever - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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awesome update!!
plz no divorce of RAYA!!!
plz continue soon!
Thank you for pm!!

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