NEW UPDATE ON PG 6 OS: THAT STRANGER IN MY ROOM

Sakshi

@Sakshiashu

Navigator

13

Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Beautiful os.

Please continue this.

1

Reply

Quote

aanchal

@LovingRaYa

Sparkler

30

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#12

2-3 days back i was reading once again your previously written story 'one fine day' and was thinking when will you be back with another and herr u are with one os.

It's an always treat for all us when ever you post some Os. Ram like a typical husband complaing about the change he has to go through with Priya arrival in his house but this was a welcome change for her as a stranger became his life.

3

Reply

Quote

Malati

@bpatil3

Rocker

27

Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Brilliant ,beautiful Rayalicious.

All other characters were not elaborated too much though has references here and there ,yet subtle.
Thoroughly enjoyed reading ,all sequences ,dialogues unsaid emotions and Raya's closeness perfect ,super ending .
Felt refreshed after reading .thank you keep writing

1

Reply

Quote

DiehardRaYafan

@DiehardRaYafan

Navigator

12

Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: iluvusakshi
suuupppeerrrbbb. lovely os. Hayee ram ki irritation, uska dheere dheere Priya ki kami mehsoos karna , Priya KO Milne ki liye tarasna, Priya ki aadate acchi lagna, aur phir usse pyaar ho Jana. so cute yaar.
but I have one request rather a demand u can say.
I want second part. plzzz

Thank you so much for your encouragement! It surely motivates to write. I was thinking of finishing up my other two unfinished stories first but if you guys want then I can do a second part of this ...which can be Priya's POV and epilogue all together😳

1

Reply

Quote

DiehardRaYafan

@DiehardRaYafan

Navigator

12

Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: joemahika
Short sweet & cute os...next part bhi hai kya????

It's a random thought ...wasn't meant to have more parts but I can do Priya's POV as second part! Thanks for your feedback !😃

1

Reply

Quote

DiehardRaYafan

@DiehardRaYafan

Navigator

12

Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: itsmeg3
Its adorable..❤️
Loved your writing 👏

Thank you 😳

Reply

Quote

DiehardRaYafan

@DiehardRaYafan

Navigator

12

Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: reshak
lovely os...
season-1 ki memories fresh hogayi..
do write more..

Ah...the adorable season1😃 thank you for your appreciation...means a lot!

Reply

Quote

DiehardRaYafan

@DiehardRaYafan

Navigator

12

Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: Janilover
Look who is here 😲 My fav writer
res res will read soon Btw still waiting for that Fiance wali story😕

Looking forward to your feedback buddy! After so many requests I have actually started working on Dil toh hai Dil 's next chapter...hopefully this week you will see an update on it. Don't forget to give your feedback !

Reply

Quote

DiehardRaYafan

@DiehardRaYafan

Navigator

12

Posted: 8 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: contactcharu
lovely OS

Thank you !😃

Reply

Quote

DiehardRaYafan

@DiehardRaYafan

Navigator

12

Posted: 8 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: umayal
Nice cute written Os...😊
Reminded of Raya ...😳

Thnks for placing us again in Rayaland with ur own creativity...
And written it as Ram's monologue was nice...

Tht statement frm priya, this means, i am no longer tht stranger in ur room...wow...indirectly asking hv i become a part of ur life and ram's reply... :):)

Waiting for subsequent parts...

.

Aww...thank you for such a sweet feedback! I will for one more part to this!😊

1

Reply

Quote

NEW UPDATE ON PG 6 OS: THAT STRANGER IN MY ROOM - Page 2

Related Topics

Explore Topics