RaYa TS-Priya reply to Ram 'part 2' page 3 - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: DiehardRaYafan

Nice...eagerly awaiting Priya's reply to his cute confession of love!

thank u dear
you will soon read Priya rply

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: contactcharu

very nice

waiting eagerly for next part

pleasure was all mine
will soon post next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Cute_Saakshii12

Beautiful !!!
Plz continue sooon!!!

i am glad you feel like this
will soon post second part
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Prabina057

Superrbb update..
Plz continue soon..

i will surely post next part soon dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sandhyasn

Wow beautifully penned down the letter
Love it.
Please continue soon😛

indeed
Ram has shown his feeling through this letter
i will post soon second part
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ramsakshi

Awesome update

Plz continue soon

thank u for liking it dear
will surely posy next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey RaYains i am back and all of your wait is over i am posting second and last part of this story with Priya reply to Ram letter. Enjoy reading it 😉


Part 2

COMING BACK TO YOU

Ram was half sitting half lying against the headrest of the bed...with is hand covering his eyes...he was engulfed in the darkness of doubting his wife and was feeling ashamed on himself for doing so...His pensive mood was broken by a knock on the door.

It was Neha...she was feeling miserable looking at her friend like this...She and Vikram never wanted this outcome of their plan but it back fired...

Lifting his head up he saw Neha Came to get Priya's saree she called me and...' Cutting her short Ram just gestured to carry on. After few minutes Neha came out holding a bag with what all Priya asked her to get..She looked and Ram and was moving away..

With all the courage that Ram could gather in that state of mind he called Neha... She was standing at the door. Ram walked up to her fished his pocket and took out the letter forwarding it to Neha Can you please give it to her..?' his voice was feeble and broken Ram you need not say please...I will give it to her' Neha replied as softly as she could and hugged Ram...gave a kiss on his cheek and patted on the shoulder.. ALL WILL BE OK FATTY...DON'T WORRY' Ram mocked a smile and nodded his head slightly...

At the Fashion Show

Ram was surrounded by reporters when Priya walked in...He was only interested to know if Priya got his letter. Following Priya Neha entered and looked at Ram. She showed a thumbs up indicating that is work was done...for few seconds he felt happy..but again sadness engulfed him thinking if she read the letter and she not forgiven him...his eyes followed Priya where ever she went.

Ayesha as usual was into herself. She came running to Priya.. Di can I have you kajal please my make-up man got one which is not suiting me and I am feel irritated around my eye.' Priya smiled at her and rifled through her purse...an un-noticed piece of paper fell out of it...Ram caught this as he was keenly observing Priya. He tore past the ocean of the reporters and walked up to the spot...Priya was standing now with some other people. He wanted to give her paper then but restrained himself...on the second thought his inner soul provoked him to read the paper...somewhere he wanted it to be the reply to his letter... his heart was pounding against his chest...his throat went dry..he swallowed with a heavy breath and trembling hand...and to is belief it was her hand writing ..her letter addressed to him

Ram found his legs weak to support him he grabbed the nearby bench and sat...wiping the sweat beads with his free palm his closed his and opened it with a hope to read the letter

My Ram

Yes Ram I like to call you that...only when we are alone...and I am sure this will be only between us two. Why did you take so much time to confess your love to me...you know I was dying to hear those three words from you...i never wanted our confession to take this turn...

Yes I did not expect you to shower flowers from sky or write in the sky among the clouds that you love me...but I was expecting you to just come up to me hug me take me in your arms...creasing my hair and say I LOVE YOU PRIYA...

You think I don't care for you...I asked Neha to make you stop eating those jalabies...they are not good for you...and when you say me sleeping...just because my eyes were closed you thought I was fast a sleep...no Ram I was up all night waiting for you...whenever I heard footsteps on the stairs I thought it was you and ran to the door...but ever time I was let down it was not you...you for once did not call me to ask whether I reached home safely...

I am sorry for the way I pushed you...but you did not leave any choice...I had to...do you really think I am that kind of a women...RAM..really...

I like the small small things you did for me...those 6 days were a bliss for me you made me feel like a queen...when you canceled your flight and waited for me to bid goodbye to you...it made me feel special...when you on my words went through the whole test...I knew you did only for me...that gave me happiness...But just in a moment u shattered them into pieces by calling it your responsibility...

On the Lohri day when you confessed your fear placing my hand on your heart...i promised myself what so ever happens I will always be there to so the pain off this heart... because I want to listen to this heart beat till eternity...

Ram I know you are innocent you can take big decisions of business in snap of finger...but in emotions you are still a lost child...who is afraid of losing the most precious thing of his...i can understand you...I to want you to understand me...

I want to be with you as your wife...not wife of THE RAM KAPOOR-BUSINESS TYCOON' by my Ram...my innocent Polar Bear...

I TOO LOVE YOU RAM

YOUR WIFE

PRIYA

Ram's eyes moved to the direction to where she was standing before...She was alone now...He stood up with great courage and walked up to her...stood facing her..Her eyes were empty and lost Priya...' he handed her the letter. Priya's eyes moved perplexed from the paper to Ram...she could not control herself and broke into tears leaning against him...

He embraced her creasing her hair I am sorry Priya...i am very sorry...but I promise you that there will be tough times in our life...there will be times where we have to go through pain and hardship...but today if I would have not confessed my love...I would have regret it for the rest of our journey.. because I know we are ment to be...for each other.. you will always find this shoulder to cry upon...these palm to hold your tightly...these eyes to see into yours which are filled with love...these legs to walk along with your on the beach...

Priya looked upto her husband...she loved him for this...she could feel the love by her RAM..she smiled with tears still in her eyes...Ram just clasp her face in his palm and kissed her dearly...which he should have done before...Priya closed her eyes enjoying the sweet taste of the first kiss by her husband.


THE END


By Anonymous

This was the last part of this two shot and i hope you had enjoy reading it. Do comment and hit the like button. Will be looking forward to the feedback.

Edited by LovingRaYa - 9 years ago
MnSakshifan thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
Beautiful story...very well written...pls do write more...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19
Beautiful story.
Very well written.
Keep writing more.
Edited by Sakshiashu - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
Beautiful story..
Nicely written..
Please do write more..

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