New SS on Raya Unnatural love prologue updated 8-12-2015 - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: Sakshiashu

Superb story.

Please finish your other story too.
Waiting.


Thank u sooo much
Yeah I'll finish them
I'll update asap
Thank u
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12
awww. so cute just like RaYa. loved it so much.
do write more.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: iluvusakshi

awww. so cute just like RaYa. loved it so much.
do write more.


Thank u sooo much
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
Very nice update Dee
I guess u can continue more :P
Socho meri baat :-D
Bht achha update hai didi
Continue soon :-P
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow so cute n beautiful story..
Raya r meant to b together... chaye kitna b dur ho lekin
dadkhan ek duje k liye dhadkte h...very nice...
do write more..n complete ur other stories..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It was wow very nice ending
RaYa hasn't shared name and living with the names given to each other
But after two years of separation they cannot able to forget the time they spend.
Wat a coincidence they met in the wedding preparation of their besties marriage Neha Vik
Ram Priya confesses the love they feel for each other with the promised to remain together.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
here is a small prologue... raya ki romance ke bina he meine OS end ki...toh... kaafi logon ki dil thukde thukde hogaye hai... aur raya ko seedhe 2 saal baad milayi... wo 2 saal ka hisaab bhi nehi diya meine... toh ye incomplete OS hua toh... story pe chalthe hai.
priya mobile ringing continously... raya in eachother arms... ram nudging his eyes... arey priya phone utao yaar... kaun duffer kabse phone karrahe hai... priya in sleepy tone
priya : plsss... ram... sonedijiye na...
ram : arey meine kaha mana ki... ye toh tumhari phone kabse bajrahi hai...ek baar uttake check karo... priya still sleeping on his chest ... hiding her face in his broad chest extends her hand... ram smiles at her antics... handovers her phone...
priya opens her eyes... when she sees caller id... she jumped out from his chest... yells tripathi sir... priya aaj teri khair nehi... aaj teri job ki band bajegi... she running here and there in whole room... searching for her laptop... priya murmuring kahan ho meri basanthi...(her lappy name ) finally she got... o teri milgayi... still priya phone ringing... ram dont know whats happening... he just watching everything... she took her lappy and sat beside him.. she answers the phone call...
one side convo
priya : haan sir... sorry sir... wo meri shaadi hogayi hai... so... i couldnt... she blushing telling this
priya : yeah sir... sure am ready ab bas connect kijiye...she cuts the call... ram hugs her from back... priya breath came to normal... she gave a peck on his cheek...
ram tightening his grip... : hmm... toh madam suhaag raath ke din bhi busy... ram nudging on her nape... she loosing her sense in his touch
priya controlling her feelings... turns towards him... gave a peck on his forehead: plss... jaruri hai... pls darling...
ram pouts : ok... priya asks for her duppatta... ram plays with her for a while...priya pleads gives a flying kiss.. priya sets herself ready to do video call... her call went for an hour...at the end
priya to tripathi : sir... i have a request
tripathi : haan priya bolo
priya : she is blushing : sir...sir... wo... tripathi laughs at her hesitation
tripathi : guys dekho hamari hitler advertisement head aaj pehli baar hichkicha rahi hai... very nice improvement ... ram smiles hearng priya nick name as hiter... priya glares at him.. ram suppresses his laugh
tripathi : waise priya check ur mail... tumhare liye kuch hai... humsab ki taraf se chotasa gift for ur marriage... bye take care have fun... aaj se tumhari 15 days ki chutti enjoy and come back... bahuth improtant ad shoot karna hai...
priya just nods her head : thank you sir... she cuts the call... took deep breathe ram comes to her side ...
ram : so... madam advertisement head... great... hitler ... name kaafi accha hai.. suits u...pinches her nose tip...
priya irritatingly : ram... very bad... aap hasrahe ho... bahuth gandhe ho aap... she tries to getup ram pulls her she safely lands on his lap... ram hugging her from back... encircling his hands on her waist over her hands...
ram : 2 saal mein kaafi badalgayi ho tum... am always thankful to neha vikram... unki wajahse aaj humdono ek saath ... ram entwined his hands with priya... gave a peck on her palm...
priya caressing their entwined hands..: haan ram... badal toh gayi hu.. job... aur aapki pyar ki chakkar mein...kaafi badal gayi hu... winks ... ram smirks... tights his hugs... squeezing her
priya : ouch... ram... meri hadiyan tutjayegi... pls leave me... ram looses his grip but didnt leave her... still hugging
ram : patha hai tumhe doondne ki bahuth koshish ki meine...lekin hua nehi... i missed u alot... ek baar aisa he laga ki mein tumhe kho diya... priya cups his face in palm... gave a peck on his eyes..
priya to ease situation : waise mein toh confirm thi... aapki shaadi hoke aapki biwi abhi carrying hogi... teasingly looks at ram...
ram lil sternly : ohhh... toh bina shaadi kiye wait kyu karrahi thi... rahi baath bacchon ki toh koi nehi... ab next wahi hai...tumhe toh patha haina mujhe twins chahiye.. priya feeling very shy... she hides her face in his broad chest... both fall on bed...ram laughs embraces her in hug...
priya lifts her head... ram tucks her hair back on her ears...
priya : ek baath toh hai...humari shaadi toh kaafi different hai... matlab aayethe dosthon ki shaadi karaane...ab khud shaadi ... both looks at eachother and smiles...
ram hugging her tightly : wo isliye kyunki dobara tumhe khona nehi chahtha tha... waise honeymoon ka kya plan hai... shaadi toh without planning hogayi kamsekam honeymoon
priya : uffo... ram planning se bacche hothey hai... honeymoon nehi... waise uska bhi koi tension nehi..meri office colleagues shimla ke liye trip gift ki hai...toh... she couldnt finish feeling very shy...just lowered her gaze...
after one year raya blessed with twins... peehu aur pari... priya ki chacha chachi inndono ko accept karli... ram super happy... now he got everything in life... just coz of priya... priya making kids sleep... she carefully put them in to cradle... ram comes to her and hugs tightly... priya easily understood whats going through in his mind... she just rubbing his back... after a while both out of hug.. priya wiped his tears
ram sidehugs her keeping his chin on her head : priya thank you so much for coming to my life... aaj tumhari wajahse mujhe ek acchasa parivaar mili... i promise u ill protect u till my last breathe... i love u till my last... before he completes priya keeps her finger on his lips... nods her head saying no
priya hiding her face in his chest : pls ram... aise baathein kabhi math kijiye... dekhiye na humdono ek saath sab sambhalenge... har kadam saath saath... har zimedari saath saath nibhayenge... har khushi... har gham... saath saath jeeyenge... har pal ek saath...
ram pecks on her hairs : thank you priya
finaly raya family completes...

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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
Superb epilogue hayeee raya cant get over plsss continue ur ff
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
Superb pen down!!!
Awesome!!
Do write more!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
superb. absolutely mind blowing
pl write more n more RaYa stories.

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