R@Y@~THE $eCRet me$s@ge(part 5-page 8) - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
#11
Lol finally update kar diya😆
heading bhi kaafi kuch bata raha hai secret message😆..mein bhi padna chahti hoon kya message de rahi hai Priya😆
lol woh note kya tha...muje toh warning jaise laga...mein bilkul seedhi hoon. kisi bhi characters ke saat real life ko jodd hi nahi sakti😉
Priya ko Ram ke ghar ka door no. yaad nahi hai kya. 😆.
first part superb...
waiting for the next part...pata nahi kab milega😔
Thanks for PM
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12
great going buddy ..
after a longgg gap..
waise .. when u gonna post the next part of this...
next birth 😆


chal waiting.. jaldi dena..
and really nice past and present with Priya's craziness
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Posted: 9 years ago
#13
first of all thank you for PM😊
i loved the concept but the thing "architect" is forcing me to think otherwise 😆😉
the disclaimer is shouting k dont trust me 😆 am i right or wrong in gauging too much on single mention of word "Architect" 😳

coming to story, Priya is despo here 😆 thoda sa bhi sabr nhi hai 😆
love at first sight, gud, very gud
ab Neha ko kuch batane ki zaroorat hi nhi hai, wo khud boss n priya ko dekh kar unka future likh degii😆
Priya's luck is written with golden pen...Ram's family is shipra's friend, toh zyaada mehnat nhi lagegi, family khud hi shayad mrg fix karde😉
continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14
recap
then ram called me - priya come inside.
priya- what???? and then smiled in confused state. and said ok.
neha then signalled me to come over...
priya- ahhh!!! neha yha kya ho rha???
neha-he is the new boss.the new chief architect.
priya-kya??? when did this happen



part 2




neha-idiot u dint come to office from the past 4days. how would you know???u remember me telling you that we'll be having new boss. that's him. and by the way I saw u coming together and that expression of yours clearly tells you know him already how.

I felt my head spinning. comm'n yaar this is too much for a me to handle. ek toh crush. wo mom k friend ka beta and now my boss. hey bhagwan...whats happening.

priya-i'll answer all your queries. first let me go and meet him. he called me.
neha-careful priya. he's very particular when it comes to his work.
priya-thanks. and iam no less darling.
In ram's cabin
priya-may I come in sir.??
ram-come in priya. take your seat.
I sat before him not knowing what to say. how to begin.
ram- relax priya. iam not gonna eat you up.and no formalities. you can call me ram.
priya-nahi its fine.
ram-no its not. cmm'n we are friends right.
priya-haan par that was befre I dint know you were my senior here.
ram- fine then I will resign here and find a job anywhere else if that's the problem.
priya- whattt??????? nahiii I dint mean it that way. fine i'll call you ram.
ram-ok...good. now please show the designs you were supposed to finish by last Saturday.
priya- oh yeah..!!! they are on my desk. I dint know the reason you called. iam sorry.
ram laughed loud this time. I was embarrassed
while ram continued
- I know u are very confused. chalo mein tumhare sare doubts clear karta hoon. first- mera naam hain ram Kapoor chief architect. joined last Thursday. u were on leave. we both laughed together this time.
priya- toh tumhe pehle se pta tha iam working here.
ram-haan. the day I was checking the profiles of my collegues and pta chala. fir jab mein tumhe mila..I understood u don't know me.
priya-haan. neha ne sirf itna bataya ki koi naya boss aaya mr.kapoor. and I told ok. so I dint know it was you.
ram again laughed. how cute he looked laughing.
priya mentally kicked herself-priya idiot he's now your boss stop thinking that way.
priya- ram can I bring the sheets.
ram-yeah pls. soon.
I rushed out of his cabin consuming all the information that was given to me on the Monday morning. enough shocks now.
I came to my desk to take my sheets.
neha-kya hua??
priya-kuch nhi hua. aake baat karti hoon.
neha-ohkk. looks like a big matter...kyun?? winking.
priya-shutup. I hate you.
neha- thankyou.smiles.

ram's cabin
priya-excuse me sir.
ram-ahh priya come in.
priya- the conceptual designs for the next design project.
ram- yeah..!!!!
ram-nicee...!!!!
priya smiles.
ram- once we will dicuss with everyone then come to a conclusion.
ask Neha to arrange the meeting.
priya-yeah sure.thanks.
ram smiles.
priya comes out of the room...
Neha-kya hua??
priya-kuch nahi... he liked the design. but then said we will take everybody's opinion and so he asked you to arrange a meeting.
Neha-wo toh hona hi tha... working drawings meine jo kia.
priya-oh pls he liked the design...not just the working drawings.
Neha- hehhee,... tumhare design ke hisab se hi working drawings dia meine madam.
priya-acha madam...lo pura credit...ab chale meeting hain.
Neha-hahaha...yeah chalo...

meeting goes on for an hour or so with positive results.

meeting ends.
ram-priya hum ye kal submit karngy client ko.
priya-yeah.

lunch hour.

priya-thank you so much darling.
Neha- its ok. tum bhi toh help karti ho mujhe design mien.
priya-haan but is baar mere design mein mujhe sach mein nahi smjh rha tha working drawings kaise karoon...it was such a big project..
Neha-jab organic shapes k working drawings karna nahi samjhta toh leti kyun hoo.
priya-they are interesting yaar...!!!
Neha-hehehhe...yeah.

ram from behind.
ram-mtlab you dint do the working drawings.

priya and Neha are shocked.

priya- woh actually...
ram-what???
Neha-sir wo actually priya has some difficulty in doing the working drawings...I jus guided her. she did the work.
ram-priya is this true.???
priya-wohhh...
ram-stop murmering tell me the answer.
priya was scared seeing ram's serious face.
priya-haan
ram-both of you in my cabin now.
priya and Neha- ok sir
ram leaves

Neha- margay yaar...ab kya kare...bahut khadoos hain.pta nahi kya karega.pagal.
priya-nehaaa wo sir hain.
Neha- haan par mere boyfriend ka bestie be hain so I know
priya-mtlab
Neha-ram...humare sir and also my boyfrined's bestie. uff...!!! ab dimak khayga...sunayega badmein vik ko sab btyga...dono Mazak uddayngy.
priya just gapes

ram rings bell from his cabin.

Neha- hawww...chalo ab...muh band karo...warna yahi aake class lega.

in ram's cabin.
Neha- may I come in.
ram- please my dainty darlings.
priya looks on shocked...!!!

Neha murmers.
shuru hogya...ab dekho tane marega..!!!
ram smiles seeing priya, Neha smirks seeing ram.
ram- so my dear interns kya khyal hain aap dono ka..!!!
what did u plan to do with my clients.???
Neha-sir actually priya has little problem in understanding the structures, iam trying to help her.
ram-priya what do u have to say about this...???
priya-woo...
ram- wo woo...nhi chalega...ye office hain I need your answer
priya gets scared seeing his anger.
she starts sweating.
Neha-ram stop this. itna bhi mat darao. wo recently join hui hain.
ram-Neha let her speak.
priya-yes sir... Neha helps me through structures when I have doubts,
ram-hm... kk...Neha u go out, let me speak to priya.
Neha-ok. but don't scare her.
ram-tu ja pehle.
Neha assures priya through her eyes, priya smiles.
ram turning to priya
ram-priya idhar dekho.
priya lifts her head,
ram keeps a hand on her shoulder.
ram-aage se tumhe koi doubt hain toh let me know.. mein clear karunga. aur tumhe yaha Neha waise bhi help kr rhi...so if u have any more doubts u can still approach me. yaha nahi toh ghar pr toh aaskti ho. ok???
priya just nods her head.
ram-arey baba muskurado todha sa, mein bas ise hi tang kr rha tha tumhe.
priya glares.
ram-hehehe.. sorry lekin maza aarha tha kya Karun...??


to be contnd...!!!😆

**organic shapes mtlab earthly shapes like curves or wave forms...!!!😆
Edited by chillpc - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15
Very nice.. Beautiful update
So Ram priya neha r frnds now..
Priya ki tang kichayi achi thi..bechari dar gayi this
Ram babu ka action dekh kr..
Pls continue soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16
Awww superb mindblowing part priya likes ram n neha bf means vik rams best friend n ram pulling the leg of priya awww now waiting for next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
naught ram but so cute ..
madam next update kab milegi

mere student ji ye organic design thorasa samjhao please..
inbox me okiee

thank u for ur pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
lovely start
beautiful update
continue soon
eagerly waiting for next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19
Superb update
Ram so cute
Lovely update
Continue soon
Iss janam me mil jayegi Na update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
Superb update...
Hehe priya ko shock mai shock lag rha... lol
Ram is in teasing mode. .. lol ...
Ram wanted to help her... r wanted to spend more time with priya... 😉 😆
Continue soon...

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