New OS Meant to be together pt 5 on pg 12 25.3.17 - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: reshak

beautiful romantic update...
Raya r drenching in Loveland
eagerly waiting for next update.. pls cntnu soon..thnx for d pm..


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Posted: 9 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: nprithi2002

romantic update...
plz contd soon
thanx for pm


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Posted: 9 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: Kiruthikaaaru

Pls continue soon ...superb update


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Posted: 9 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: Rayaland

Sooo romantic yaar Raya ek dusre ke bina rehna nahi for 1 min also n love neha teasing plsss update soon


Thank you sooo much 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45


Part 2
awww thank you so much finally u updated the second part so good I really enjoyed RaYa family time... then RaYa's romance followed by it was all too good so nice to read I actually enjoying her helplessness by being Peehu & Neha arond... where Ram was in his own word...then at dining all were teasing them was really cute n at th end RaYa finally got their quality time means they loved each other all way but morning romance can get disturbed by others too... so moving on for next...

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Posted: 9 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: leena04



Part 2
awww thank you so much finally u updated the second part so good I really enjoyed RaYa family time... then RaYa's romance followed by it was all too good so nice to read I actually enjoying her helplessness by being Peehu & Neha arond... where Ram was in his own word...then at dining all were teasing them was really cute n at th end RaYa finally got their quality time means they loved each other all way but morning romance can get disturbed by others too... so moving on for next...



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Posted: 9 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: sssabcd

so romantic.. pls continue..


Thank u sooo much😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48
Wow beautiful part
Romantic part
Loved it very much
Very beautifully described. ... 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
#49
OMG!!! i mean seriously OMG!!!! diii u nailed it clearly nailed it!!!? i didnt read it from many days as u posted...but now i felt to and i am glad tht i took my time!!! stole the show...there sweet gestures...there family reunion...there reunion!!? haee...wht else dose we want!!! and the highlight... to be continued!!! wow...kya scene pe roka!!! apne..bhi na...pura mood bana diya...and am recently listening to this track frequently...aaj jaane ki jid na karo... am really touched aur kisi chij ko raya ka touch mil jae to kya kehna!!! :-D really awesome..plzzz next jaldi... plzzz
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Posted: 8 years ago
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happy diwali ...
Part 3 : Ram : beautiful... priya looks at him...before she understood whats gone happen...she felt ram lips on her bare waist... she just closed her eyes and gulping lump in throat... Literally ram sucking her skin... both are immersed in that moment... unknowingly priya pressed his head more on her waist... Both are enjoying their morning romance... Asusual someone disturbing their romance came knocking the door continuously... Priya know that its peehu who continuously knocking the door... Ram busy in his morning chores... Nudging...sucking priya bare waist... Priya helplessly looking at the door...she want to go and open the door...but ram not leaving her... He is just in his own world...he is not at all interested in that knocks... Atlast priya finally forcefully pulls back herself from rams grip... Rams looks at her with puppy face... priya caressing her waist which is now became red by his assaults... slight rashes also visible...priya looks at her waist and glares angrily to ram... Ram gives naughtly look... ram tries to hold her... But priya backs off... again peehu knocking the door yelling
Peehu : mumma...paapa... Darwaza kholo na... priya settling her saree properly...priya tried her level best to cover her bare waist too...eyening him with corner eyes she leaves to open the door... Priya opens the door...peehu hugs priya encircling her tiny hands around priya waist... Priya lifts peehu head holding in her palms bends towards her forehead gives a peck
Priya : good morning princess... Peehu smiling widely : good morning mumma... Ithni der kahan thi aap ... tabse mein knock karrahi hu...koi darwaza open nehi ki??? Complaining both mom and daughter entered in to room...priya caressing peehu hairs... They reached bed...where ram acting like he is sleeping...priya astounded by his acting... Priya ignored...peehu jumps on to the bed...
Peehu : papa abhitak sorahe hai??? mumma mein uttau???
Priya : rehnde peehu... sonedo unko... peehu with a upset face...steps down from bed...runs to priya who drying her wet hairs with towel... ( ram silently listening their convo)
Peehu : mumma... kithna accha haina humsab ek saath ek ghar mein rehrahe hai...mere bhai mere saath ... khush bhi hamare saath hotha toh kithna accha hotha na..? sulks her face... Priya feels very bad seeing peehu upset face... ( ram also feels bad )
taking a deep breathe..she bends to peehu level...caressing peehu cheeks : princess... ab jab sab hamare saath hai toh... Ek din khush bhi hamare saath rehne aajayega... ye jo tumhare paapa haina sab theek kardenge... gives a peck on her forehead... ab mumma ko ek acchise smile dedo... peehu smiles... By then neha comes there...
Neha : goood morning.. both priya and peehu wishes back her...toh madam kya aaj breakfast mein sirf jhappiyan...pappiyan he hai ya phir kuch khaane ko bhi milega????? Priya and peehu giggles...
priya : nehi nehi milegi yaar...pehle neeche toh chale...?? Three of them steps down ...priya busy in preparing breakfast.. later she is busy in serving chatting...giggling... teasing each other...
Daadi : priya puttar tu bhi baithja...
Priya : nehi daadi aap sablog khaalijiye...mein unke saath khaalungi...
KK : waise priya beta... hai kahan ye ram...? Abhitak neeche nehi aaya?
Priya : wo...sorahe hai maa..
Here in room... ram still sleeping hugging pillow...a cute blushy smile lingering on his lips... Thinking about their blissful night...and romantic morning... Here on dining table... it's a perfect family moment... peehu demanding for another aloo parantha ( this is not a kapoor mansion...so no servants... everything managed by priya only...though it's a big house..but not a mansion...).. so priya went to kitchen to make aloo parantha... now she is alone... frying parantha... she tries to tuck her saree pallu on her waist... her fingers touch her bare waist where red bruises happened by their morning romance...unknowingly she blushing while caressing them... her mind slipped in to that situation again... she remembering every thing... their night kitchen romance... their beautiful moment... and beautiful morning start... suddenly she felt two hands snaking on her waist... And she knows whose touch is that... ram tightens his grip on her waist... he kissing on her neck lane... a shrill ran through her body... priya controlling herself hardly pushes him back... Priya in low voice...wiping her neck with saree pallu : kya karrahe ho mr.kapoor... koi aajayenge... ram scratching his temple... He steps towards priya... priya alerts..turns back...stops ram keeping her palm on his chest... a cute eye lock... Peehu runs in to kitchen... calling priya
Peehu : mumma...mummaa... both raya become alert... mumma kabse wait karrahi hu..parantha kahan hai...
Priya settleing herself : laa...laarahi hu beta...tum jaao... glares at ram angrily... Peehu runs to ram..hugs him wishing good morning...ram kissing on her cheeks took her in his lap...both father and daughter irritating priya by calling her continuously...beating plates with spoon... kapoors and sharmas along with nevik family enjoying this father daughter naughtiness... and priya helplessness...
Priya hurriedly comes to them with parantha plate...priya kept the plate on dining table... Closing her ears : uffo...bas karo... Ab laayi huna khaalo... awaaz band karo... both peehu and ram relishing aloo parantha... by then peehu asks for more butter...asusual priya taunting her...extends her hand to take butter...peehu notice red marks on priya waist...
Peehu concernedly asks : mumma ye aapko kya hua hai yahan??? Priya serving butter...
Priya checking on herself : kahan...? Kahan..? kahan princess... peehu steps down from her chair... shows bruises on her waist... priya hurriedly hides that with her saree...
Priya stuttering : wo...wo...wo...kuch nehi princess...tum khaana khaalo... ram looking at her corner eyes...
Peehu : nehi mumma... kithna red hogaya yahan...aapko dard horaha hoga.. daadi... naani..peehu runs towards them Priya hiding her bruises... glares at ram..runs behind peehu : peehu ... peehu...by then peehu said everything to them... KK..Daadi..Shipra...soumya..neha... worried about priya... priya stood lil far away from them... scratching her temple... feeling helpless...thinking how to get out from being teased... everybody came to her asking concernedly.. shipra being loud
Shipra : priya...beta...ye kya kehrahi hai peehu...kahan chot aayi tumhe...dikhao... Shipra looking at priya hands... caressing her cheeks... turning her face to sides... even neha,sowmya, KK, daadi also...pouring so many questions... finally peehu shows them where priya skin reddened.. priya looks at ram asking for help... ram smiles...it irks priya...she glares at him angrily... ram smiles... Steps towards them... Ram pulling priya to aside...: ek minute ek minute... priya ko wo rashes aaj subah huyi hai... priya looks at him widened eyes... in shock... priya elbows him... neha noticed this thought something is fishy...ram understood what blunder he did...
ram tries to cover his mistake... mera matlab ye ki...wo...subah..hua wo...
Neha (typical neha style ): wahi kaise...?
Ram stammering : kaise matlab...jaise aap sabko hotha hai...?!..now priya slaps on her forehead...
Neha : matlab...oye fatty...sabko jaise lagthe hai wo chod...priya ko kaise lagi ye batao humein..
Ram : yaar waise jaise nahaake... This time priya stops ram by tapping on his shoulder
Priya intervenes... : neha...neha... inka kehne ka matlab hai ki... subah mein nahaake jo saree pehnethi...uski border mein kaafi work tha... wo meine notice nehi ki wo bahuth chubraha tha... aur jab mein notice ki toh ithni rashes hogaye... aur mein saree change ki... bas aur kuch nehi...ye rashes raath tak gayab hojayenge... so pls... Finally somehow they convinced with priya answer...still neha has some doubt... but acted like she is convinced... Raya are feeling relief...everyone went to do their work..peehu also joined nevik children they are playing... raya stood there ... still neha glaring at them... Lil bit far
Ram audible to priya : kamaal hai yaar... sab teri baath aasaani se maangaye...?
Priya under her teeth audible to ram : aap pls chup rahiye... baath sambhalne ki jagah bigaadne ke liye aajathe ho...? Waise ismein meri kuch credit nehi... sab aapke krupa...
Ram : mein...meine kya kiya...???? Little loudly...neha glares at him... Ram smiles and looks down...
Priya scratching her temple...in low voice : haan... iss umar mein aap ye sab karenge... wo expect nehi karenge na... priya eyes met with neha... she smiles... and steps in to the kitchen...
It took sometime to realize ram what priya said to him... when he realized ...he stood there in shock... in next sec his eyes searching for priya... There he saw her in kitchen... neha observing these two...now she confirm that something fishy... she sees ram going towards kitchen... when he about to enter in kitchen neha calls him
Neha : oye fatty... Tu wahan kahan jaarahe ho??? Vikram kabse tumhara intezaar karraha hai... ??
Ram looking helplessly turns towards neha : haan neha... mein wahi jaaraha tha...bas thoda paani chahiye toh... Again he tries to move forward... vikram comes there
Vikram : good morning ram... chalna tumse kuch discuss karna hai...chalo bahaar chalke baath karthe hai...literally he drags ram from there... vikram looks back at neha...shows thumbs up ( this is neha plan..she messaged vikram to do all these ).
Here in kitchen priya... busy in her work...preparing lunch... as she expecting ram there after her taunt abt his age... so without looking at the person...
Priya : mr.kapoor... mujhe patha hai...aap he ho...pls ab koi shararat nehi... ye kitchen hai pls ithna toh sochiye... Upar se sab yehi hai...so pls behave yourself...kal raath ki tarah kuch math... saying she turns to face the person...she gulped her words ... tu..tu...tum dono yahan... she tries to divert the topic... kuch... kuch chahiye kya...?? Haan mein bhul he gayi... Chai...chai banathi hu... phir thodi der humsab baithke baathein karenge... waise bhi tumlog kal wapas jaarahe ho...phir patha nehi kab humsab milenge... she running here and there while saying all these... taking necessary things to prepare tea... she steps towards fridge to take milk... But neha stands in between her way... crisscrossing her hands... giving a stern look
Neha : ye rashes kaise huyi tumhe...?? Kal raath ki tarah kuch math ...kya????
Priya tightly closed her eyes to herself : priya tu gayi...?? Teri khair nehi??? priya gulping lump in her throat... meine pehle he kahan tha na neha ye rashes saree ke wajahse hua... neha glares at her ... aur kal raath kuch kuch khaas nehi.. tumhe toh patha haina mr.kapoor mujhe kaise kaise ajeeb sounds sunaake darathe hai... ussi ki baath karrahi hu mein... bas aur kuch nehi...
Neha and sowmya exchange looks both steps towards her... priya stepping back...: bhabhi agar ithni si baath hai toh...aap ithna kyu gabrare ho...??? Bathayiye na ye bhappa ka morning dose haina aapko??? By then priya started blushing... faking anger...
Priya stood stiffly Priya : oye tum kuch ...kuch bhi math bol... Aisa kuch nehi... tucking her pallu on her waist... turns aside acting like concentrating on cooking... but her cheeks are crimson red... Neha sowmya exchange looks...
neha teasingly : arey sowmya kya yaar tum bhi... ab priya kehrahi haina...wo rashes saree ki wajah se hua... by the way tum bhi theek kehrahi ho... patha hai jab mein subah madam ko laane gayi thi... tab ram soraha tha... meine kahan ki uttao ...lekin mrs.kapoor.. bahuth meherbaan horahi thi apni pathidev pe kehrahi thi ...rehne de neha... unhe sonedo... sowmya ek baath batha aisa kya kiya hoga ram ki priya ko laga ki ram ko subah subah uttana nehi chahiye...sone de na chahiye...haan... aur wo ram ne bhi kahan ki ye rashes aise he hua jaise humsab ko hotha hai... means... samajhrahi hu na mein kya ...sowmya intervenes
Sowmya : haan neha bhabhi ab samajhme aayi... humsab ki tarah ...hayee ... priya listening all these two brats taunts... still acting like that shes not paying any attention but her cheeks totally turned in to red...neha sowmya noticed this...
Neha teasingly : sowmya...tumhe dikrahi haina yahan pe sundar si gulab ke phool khilrahe hai... now priya cant take this anymore she turns to them...
Priya : oye tum dono bas karo... Mein koi Sharma nehi rahi hu... ab ye sab bandh karo... Neha sowmya laughs...
Neha teasingly : darling humne ye thodi na kahan ki tum Sharma rahi ho... humne toh bas ( caressing priya cheeks ) ye gaalon pe khilrahi gulaabon ki baath karrahe hai...!!! haina sowmya... priya slaps on neha hand..she about to say something they hear... aaj jaane ki zidd naa karo song...
Priya taunting ram : ye mr.kapoor bhi na ithna bhi samaj nehi hai ki kab kya karna chahiye... she was at the doorway of the kitchen she collides with ram...before she land on ground... ram catches her in his arms... eye lock..backgroung song continues...both drowning in last night romance... They gets back their sense...
Ram looking at her lovingly : dekhke chalo...ye kahan bhaagrahi thi..
Priya in fake anger : aapke paas aarahi thi... ye kya karrahe hai aap... phirse ye gaana kyu .. ram stops keeping his finger on her lips
Ram : shh... mujhe laga tum... he bends towards her lips... priya realize that neha and sowmya also there... she pushes him... she signals ram with her eyes... ram turns and looks at neha and sowmya...who stood there in shock... ram biting his tongue slowly tries to slip from there... but neha stops him
Neha : oye fatty...ab natak karne ka koi fayda nehi... ab humein jara bataogi ye gaane ka kya lena dena hai??? aur wo rashes kaise huyi priya ko ram couldn't take any more this...he turns in a jerk...taking priya in side hug
Ram : tumhe kya problem hai... meri biwi... ek he biwi hai mere... pyaar kartha hu... thoda bahuth personal moments hotha hai... tumhari shaadi huyi na...ithna bhi nehi patha kya... toh 3 bacche kaise hua?? Aur tum dono ab jyada pareshan math karo mere biwi ko... ab jo sunna tha wo sunli na... ab bhaago yahan se... neha and sowmya didn't expected this bold answer from ram... they left from there leaving them alone... priya stood there with wide open eyes.. ram shooks her... priya comes back to reality
Priya : ye kya kiya aapne...

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