OS: HUMDARD - Page 5

Originally posted by: Mitwaa

interesting story awesome update ,waiting for next part and extremely sorry mai meri admission mai busy thi an apko wish nahi kiya HAPPY BIRTHDAY NASEEM extremely sorry for late plzzz forgive me ...busy hu so forum par nahi atti hu an atti hu tab pm hi dekti hu phir se sorry and plz step mom ka update dedo na eagerly waiting for ur next update continue soon

Originally posted by: sandhyasn

OMG kya imagination hai tumhara😆
tumhare charan kahan hai. Books aur laptops ke bhi love story ho sakti hai meine kabhi socha nahi tha😆.
Uff Priya pichle 25 saal ke books ko carry karti thi kya😆😆. tab toh kaafi saare books ko complaint hogi.
Phir toh woh saare dresses ko bhi complaint hogi jo Priya ne apne ghar par chod aayi...uski bhi ek love story banti hai😆
Jokes apart...bahut achha tha...different concept tha. Raya kahi bhi na hokar dono ki starting life se lekar baad mein kya hua sab samj gaya.

Loved it. chotta tha but books aur laptop bhi kitna apni feeling likenge😆😆
Thanks for PM and dedicating me

mere charan mere paas hai🤣

Originally posted by: peeyara

reason tha ek but mai open forum pe disclose karna nhi chahti thi😉😆

aap gussa hoti mujhse😆 aur phir "Grrr..." karti 😆

mera dil bada hai😳😆 thank you...aapne kab dekha mera dil😆

return gift nhi hai, meri birthday pe mujhse gift maanga😆 toh maine gift de diya aur ab sab mujhe return gift do😆😆

achha PM mein batao kya reason hai.
gussa hoti hoon toh hasti ho phir kya faida😡😆
dil bada hai tabhi toh eisi unique story lekar aayi ho. Non- living thinks ki feeling ko bhi samajti ho😆
arre gift gift hota hai tu do mein du kya farak padta hai😆

Originally posted by: peeyara

🤣🤣

pehle Ram aur phir koi aur aur phir Sudhir 🤣 wo kyu aisa sochenge Jo 🤣

i didnt expected k koi bhi sudhir ka POV samjhega 🤣 u r great girl 🤣

Originally posted by: peeyara

wow my fan😳 i am feeling super happy 😃🤗

thank you very much...one more felt it to be rajat😆 bechare rajat 😆

i have not left any thing incomplete😊 only one OS Step Mom is incomplete, rest are completed😛

i hope you are not mistaking me to someone else 🤔😆

if you have read this comment, do tell what stories i hv left incomplete😊

😆

Originally posted by: sandhyasn

achha PM mein batao kya reason hai.
gussa hoti hoon toh hasti ho phir kya faida😡😆
dil bada hai tabhi toh eisi unique story lekar aayi ho. Non- living thinks ki feeling ko bhi samajti ho😆
arre gift gift hota hai tu do mein du kya farak padta hai😆

Originally posted by: jodude

heyy naseem... aapne.. khayli pulao chod diya...adhura...😆😆

n ek aur gotw jaise humne start kia na...😆😆 aap aur malu di jyaada active the us stry mai...😆

Originally posted by: leena04

OMG Naseem u r totally crazy & this OS too ohh my my I never had thought u will write something like this ever but actually only u can write something like this which is amazing mind blowing too good awesome & now I m lacking words for sure but when I read this first I thought of someone but at the end the dhamaka u have did head off to you only u can do this... too good awesome Buddy if possible do write more waiting for it... plz...

I was shocked seeing this OS 😆
Mai khud bhul gayi is OS ko n i was thinking k is title ka kaunsa story likha maine 🤣
I too want to write but tym aur mood match nhi hote
Jab likhne ka mann ho tab tym nhi aur jab thoda sa tym ho likhne ka mann nhi hota 😆

By the way thanks for liking it

Fantastic work Naseem
Love it
Oh my god... every words in this story are so beautiful
I Thought raya ke beech mein kahin rajat toh nahi but nikla book and laptop
It is so wonderful
Do write more