OS: HUMDARD - Page 4

Originally posted by: jodude

different thought ..!!!!

btw thanks for the os...😆😆

Originally posted by: chillpc

iam like..!!! 😲 this after reading...!!!!

seriously... only you can think of something like this...!!!!😆

hatsoff...!!! 😆

books and laptopss..!!!!

ufff...!!! i was reading very seriously as to what happened who's this new entry... and the person speaking turns out to be a book and a laptop..!!!

iam like out of words...to comment something..!!!😆😆

too good...!!!!😆 😆👏👏

aur dedication k liye thanks..!!! 😆

and for private message (challenge*) tooo.!!!😉

Originally posted by: contactcharu

very nice

awesome

Originally posted by: dhristikpd

Superb yaar

Originally posted by: Prabina057

Haha.
Nyc one.
I was thinking rajat's pov. But what a twist! Books and laptop!
Thanks for pm

Originally posted by: aman.anjaan

MAine abhi tak Pada Nahi 😆

sirf Last Line Padi Aman wali

NOWOnwards This OS NAME IS "Hamari Adhuri Kahani "

TUm kya yaad rakhoge Kitna Bada Dil hai Mera😆

Originally posted by: aman.anjaan

books and laptop seriouslly😆

OMG Waht an imagination yaar

Really superbbb And i loved the line cant he hug her outside 😆i gave my permission Please

Change Name to Hamari adhuri Kahani 😆😆

Originally posted by: Anandraji

wow great os yar, ,,its really amazing,,

Originally posted by: Balamma13

Fan of ur writings but aap adhura chodh
Dete ho 😭 😭 bohot sare ff os
ya ss incomplete hain

Lekin ye wali mast hai hahaha mujhe
Toh pehle rajat laga
Too gud ⭐️

Originally posted by: bpatil3

😆


Initially when I was reading thought ram , bcoz it was said 25y😆
But then his entry, made her forget me 😆 😆 and he gets jealous I felt it's rajjo stupid 😆

I loved reading it thoroughly, and the twist at the end made me smile even more broder 😉

unique concept hai, ram n priya k rishta kahi nhi todte hue, jo feelings books n lappy ne share kiya it's incredible.

Kitna bada dil hai book aur lappy ka, they let her n him forget them, n never felt jealous 😆 kaash insan bhi aisa hoaata bejubaan , emotions ko bayan kiye, bus usse feel karo aur move on, n let others move 😆

Then kahi kahi mujhe sudhirji laga , bcoz of spending time in the moonlight, chatting, kissing, hugging and 25yrs with me.
but I thought , a father never will be jealous of her daughter getting attached with her man, but yeah somewhere he feels the bonding is lessen.



Thank you for the brilliant conceot kudos, books aur lappy me jaan daalne k liye 😆 only u can write uniquely. Applause.
and humne return gift maangi thi, par kabhi nhi socha tha isske har tukde ko tumhare list k jitne bhi log hai unse share karna padega , sharing is caring, but I wanna be selfish, mujhe apna gift do 😆 😛



thanks for the pm