OS: ONLY RAYA - Page 3

Originally posted by: aman.anjaan

<font color="#660033"><font size="5" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">hey arushi If its ur 1st attempt then u shud write more its amazing i mean killer tha Keep writing
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ty for PM
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Thanx aman 4 such lovely comment. I know ur busy in exam preparation phir bhi apne reply kiya thanx yaar. 🤗

Originally posted by: agneeputra

nice one...pls leave some gap in the updates and also pls continue ur writing its tooo goood

thanx yaar an next time i will take care of that.

Originally posted by: OrangeBlossoms

Haye haye😳Such a cute os,

i was grinning from ear to ear while reading it😳

thank u so much 4 reading & comment

Originally posted by: Cute_Saakshii12

Gr8 job!!!
Lovely OS!!!
Do write more!!!
And thanks 4 pm!!!

thanks 4 reply

Originally posted by: BALHLOVER

aweee

so cute os..

u should write more but next time long one please /

thank u for ur pm

Thank u so much di.

Originally posted by: Sakshiashu

Superbly written yaar. First timer?????

I don't think so. It was excellent.!!!!!

Keep writing!!!!

But long ones as yeh dil manage more.

Thanks for pm.

thanks 4 reply. Next time ka promise nahi kar skti bcz writing is not my cup of tea. Thanks 4 bearing my update.

Originally posted by: ARUJI

thanks for reply. plz tell na what you want to suggest

Originally posted by: priyajan12

words k beech mei spacing daal yaar

kuch bilkul chipke huye hai

and dialogues alag alga line mei likho

varna clumsy lagta hai

thats all😊

thanks 4 suggestion next time mein pakka dhyana rkhugi .

Originally posted by: ARUJI

thanks 4 suggestion next time mein pakka dhyana rkhugi .

Nice one.. Thanks for the pm