|| FF: Motu aur Patloo Ki Jodi || PART 4 on Pg 13 NOTE PG 20 (7 Oct) - Page 2

Originally posted by: dhristikpd

Awww my favourite cartoons yaar u r writing in this ff great yaar priya pls continue soon

Originally posted by: Anandraji

great start priya rsm se shadi nahi karna chahti hai phir bhi karli,interesting continue soon.

Originally posted by: iluvusakshi

intereating concept. jaldi jaldi upsates dena ha plz. mujhe pm karna agli baar.

Originally posted by: iluvusakshi

intereating concept. jaldi jaldi updates dena ha plz. mujhe pm karna agli baar.

Originally posted by: Cute_Saakshii12

Nice start!!!
Continue sooon!!
And thanks 4 pm!!

Originally posted by: aman.anjaan

hey priya just amazing part u remind me my childhood memories and Yes pickachu mine fav Pokemon tooo



dont know y but tears brings in my eyes as i missed those bachpan ke din superbbb start waiting for next update do pm me on FB or IF when u next update i m eagerly waiting for next update

Originally posted by: aanchaltulshan

A fab intro with awesome start of first part
Priya ke to intro ho gaya ab Ram ka kab hoga
i was all time grinning while reading the convo of Priya and Neha
all these cartoon character make me remind of my childhood masti
continue soon and thanx for the pm

Originally posted by: ARUJI

Beautiful start of story.
Mera bhi fav. Cartoon hai yaar.
Continue soon.
Thanks 4 pm.

Originally posted by: Sakshiashu

Seems interesting and do continue soon.
Your images had taken me 13-14 years back when I watched all these with my son & had great fun. Thanks yaar.