|| FF: Motu aur Patloo Ki Jodi || PART 4 on Pg 13 NOTE PG 20 (7 Oct)

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iluvusakshi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#131

sorry for late reply.
ram ko priya ne bataya k wo iss shadi ko nahi maanti. ohhh feeling very bad for ram.
lekin jaise jaise waqt bitata jayega priya ko ram se pyaar ho jayega.
thanks for pm. pl continue.

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aanchal

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Posted: 10 years ago

#132

Yippee Ram Priya ki shaddi ho gai and their Rajat call him to congrats him and now Ram will share his feeling towards Priya with her. Continue soon dear and thank for th pm

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aanchal

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Posted: 10 years ago

#133

Koi Nhi Priya enjoy the vacation
Enjoyed the story so far will miss you

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leena

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Posted: 10 years ago

#134

Intro
infect I loved the intro a lot it was too good to read I must say very awesome thoughts so now moving for next to read...

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leena

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Posted: 10 years ago

#135

Part 1
this story is actually different & awesome as always I just lived yeh mujhe mere Bachpan ke days me le gaye so god & awesome as always awww Priya is such antic piece yaar iske liye someone special hi hona chahiye too gud...

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leena

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Posted: 10 years ago

#136

Part 2
hahaha Tom & Jerry was one of the my favourite one but Yeh title sirf RaYa pe hi aacha lagta hai... but loved the way r wants a bride to gud awesome loved it ...

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leena

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Posted: 10 years ago

#137

Part 3
awesome update & long one too amazing gud loved it a lot... so Shipra found Ram for Priya even made Priya to meet him too wah wah so baccho ka reunion ho hi gaya... awesome so an jaldi se Saadi bhi jaye maza aa jayega... too gud...

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leena

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Posted: 10 years ago

#138

Part 4
very nicely panned down not accepted this to be happen but happy for no more MU BTW RaYa now story will be more intersting from bow so plz update the next part soon waiting...