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Janilover

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Part 3

In the bright sunny day RaYa reached Heathrow Airport and Ram took a cab and came to his apartment. He has been in London for past 2 years on an International Project, occasionally visiting India, iss baar bhi kuch business ke silsile me hi aaya tha India aur Delhi se Amritsar, apni jhalli ki shaadi attend karne, Priya ko pyaar se jhalli bulata hain Ram, lekin usse kya malum tha ke khud shaadi kar ke wapas aayega London. Both entered in his apartment, it is 3 bedroom one.

Amarnathji told him to buy a house but Ram was reluctant, he said, what will be the use in buying a plush home when he will be the one who will stay in the house so he choose to buy this apartment. Both of his parents have come and stayed with him but only once. Though an apartment but it was still very plush and big one, but the most beautiful thing about this apartment is its balcony. Ram lives on the 9^th floor of the building.

After entering the apartment, Priya looks around it, though she wasn't feeling anything but some kind of positive vibes came from her. Ram came back to Priya where she was standing, he looks at her and then said

Ram - aaj se yeh ghar tera bhi hain, tu jaise rehna chahti hain reh sakti hain

Priya looked at him surprisingly as she heard him.

Ram understood her thoughts and said dekh wahan India me tujhe sabke samne aise baat nahi kar paya main lekin mere liye na tu Karthik ki behen aur hamare jhalli hi hain, bhale hi hum dono me ab koi aur rishta hain lekin main bulayungi tujhe isi naam se aur tu bhi mere se aise hi pesh aiyo jaise tu aati thi

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iluvusakshi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

yaar ama mere pass to words hi nahi hai describe karne k liye. superb absolutely mindblowing. jinneejiggs thanks for writing this story. after ur mkl-iht, and second chance, we all were missing u. thank u for writing. and aman thank u for pm. pl continue.

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Mitwaa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Lovely update yaar. Continue soon. Thank's for pm.

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Janilover

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Posted: 10 years ago

#14

PART 4

Priya is also constantly trying to cope up with the situation, she is trying to accept the truth but truth is always what says a bitter pill. Priya is still frightened to be left alone, abhi bhi akele ho jaane par darti hain though Ram is always beside her. In this one month she has seen Ram as a very different person, very caring, very attentive and moreover very much supportive. In ek mahino me jitna woh Ram ko jaan payi hain utna Ram bhi usse jana hain, though they have become good friendz still something is not there in them as couple, in fact both Ram and Priya forgot that they are couples. For not once or single time Ram everv mentioned to her, him as her husband, never treated her like his wife, though they share the bed but Ram never tried to cross his limits...dadi told her to be his strength so Priya is trying her best to do that, she too started taking care of him. Yeh sheher yahan ke log doesn't belong to her, only Ram is one person whom she belongs to and she don't want to loose him, ab aur kuch khone ki himmat usme nahi hain.

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PART 5

Next day Shergills and Kapoor started their journey for picnic. Ram and Priya came to Vikram's house and they all start their journey. Ram was driving while Vikram was beside him, in the back row Neha and Priya were on window seat and Rahul was sitting in the middle. All were enjoying their journey. Today Ram was looking uber cool, wearing a moss green tee with blackish blue jeans and a black jacket on it with an eye gear. Priya was wearing jeans and short top with a sweater on it. Her hair was in braid but some was flowing in the wind and was falling on her face.

Ram - jaa to rahe hain lekin koi destination bhi hain yah yunhi...

Vikram - aree don't worry, we are going to that nature resort, remember three of us went there while we were in college

Ram - yaar that's in country...

Neha - so what, today the entire day we all will enjoy, waise bhi this is Rahul's first excursion and Priya's too, aur agar you both are feeling tired then I can drive, have no problem in that.

Ram - tu toh rehne hi de, I can drive, not a big deal

Neha - that's better, so now just chill and enjoy, waise aaj weather bohot achha hain

Vikram - perfect for outing

Ram smiled looking and hearing his friends.

After about an hour they halted their car in near by field and enjoyed their breakfast. Neha made some lip smacking sandwiches and Priya made some chicken balls dipped in sauces. While all were eating, Rahul was looking at his mama and was making sounds from his mouth, suddenly he said ma-ma. Neha just heard it and looked at him and said to Vikram

Neha - Vikram, Rahul just said something

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MnSakshifan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Lovely and beautiful updates...
Pls continue soon...

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Mitwaa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Awesome update. Like ur MakarSankranti gift.continue soon. Thank's 4 pm.

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iluvusakshi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#17

both the updates r really superb. priya ab dheere dheere khudko sambhal rahi hai with the help of ram. thanks for pm pl continue.

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Janilover

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Posted: 10 years ago

#18

RAYA OS - Tum dena Saath Mera Part 6

RECAP :

Ram - dost hain woh meri, mera sabse ache dost ki behen hain woh, bachhpann se janta hoon usse, aise mauke pe kaise chhod deta usko, tu hi bata

Vikram - ab sirf dost nahi woh teri biwi bhi hain, usko sambhalne ka, usko khush rakhhne ki zimmedari bhi teri hain, bohot seh liya tum dono ne ab zindagi ko mauke de, aage bar apne rishte me, Priya ke saath, u deserve to be happy yaar aur maine dekha hain Priya ko teri kitni parwaah hain.

Ram couldn't say anything.

PART 6

On the other hand Neha and Priya were in kitchen and were chatting. In these months Neha became close with Priya, Neha understands Priya and her fear and loss.

Neha - tumhare aane ke baad Ram phir se jee utha hain, am so happy for you both

Priya smiled.

Neha - mujhe aaj tak samajh nahi aaya ke Sanjana ne Ram jaise insaan ko kaise thukra sakti hain, kya Ram kabhi uske aur career ke beech aata?, Never, he always gave space to her but she didn't understand his love not for a while, in fact she didn't deserve to be in his life.

Priya felt a tug in her heart, she can't see his pain, she felt sad for him.

Neha - but am happy ke usse Sanjana nahi tum mili ho, I know you take great care of him, who will be always by his side. He deserves to be happy, you both deserves happiness, Ram jaise insaan ko as life partner milna bohot luck ki baat hain. You are lucky Priya.

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iluvusakshi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#19

superb update. finally ram confessed his love for priya. waiting for priyas confession.pl priya ko b jaldi se ye ehsaas kava do ki wo b ram se pyaar karnne lagi hai. thanks for pm.