RaYa FF : Takdeer UPDATE ON PAGE -147,04/9/15 - Page 21

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Posted: 10 years ago
hayo... Y ram is behaving so bad... Poor priya...
but happy priya s saved from ashwin.
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Posted: 10 years ago
neelll hasshhh took a deep breath...:-) ram turned him black and blue...:-D...sooo good... hame prob nahi hai.. if ram is a bad guy if he be a bad guy with priya will not mind... if he does that bad things...:-P *dirty mind* -P next soon
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Posted: 10 years ago

actually Priya gone Nuts what she is thinking n doing she even don't know actually she is fustrated I can undersatnd thanks god at right moment her soul answered her what she is doing is wong... but wat is Ashwin is upto is more bad I know Am is there he won't allow anything to happen to Priya as long as he is there wither he loves or does not to her he knows Priya is his just his only... so waiting for next just post it soon...
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Preview...
I didn't like the way Ram slaped Priya but he might be misunderstood her there I felt still haath uthana mere hisaab se galat baat hai... aur jaha tak baki k preview part ki baat hai its really awesome everything... atlest Ram saved Priya... Ram is gud or bad I m ok as long as Ram is not allowing anyone to hurt her i liked the way he warned Kartik & now make Ashwin black & blue... I know he will change but jo bhi karna hai Priya k saath woh sirf Ram hi kare aur koi nahi...
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Posted: 10 years ago
superb preview waiting for update ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Jaanwaroan ki jungle me ek akela insan ghus gaya hai, priya ki kismat hi kharab hai, aise nalayak premi ya chahmewale kisi ko na mile. Hate the two men so much 😡
priya ko torture kiya, ram ne toh saari maryada tod di, koi insan mard nhi ban jaata kisi ladki k upar haath uthake, I hate sach men.
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Posted: 10 years ago
31part!!
Nice part!!
Also read the preview!!!
Can't imagine!! What is ram upto!!
Plz continue soon!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Sunday b gaya ! Monday b gaya ! lekin update nahi aya...
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Posted: 10 years ago
pls update dena mai to subha se check karrahi hoon,,i am so sad yaar!!!!Kab updt denge
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Posted: 10 years ago

Sorry for th elate update gals , update is ready but I was busy actully ..
here it goes ..


PART-7

Ram is walking to the library when Priya's professor met him on the way.

Professor:- Sir, Aap yahan

Ram:- Haan mein priya ko lene aaya tha...muje uske friends ne bataya ki woh library mein hai

Professor:- Achha lekin mein toh abhi wahi se aa raha hoon lekin meine Priya ko wahan nahi dekha...Shayad woh class mein hogi...aap wahan jaakar ek baar dekiye...iss building ke first floor mein hai.

Ram:- ohhk..

Professor:- BTW Mr. Kapoor...congratulation...aapki aur Priya ki sagai ke liye. Yeh hamare liye bhi ek garv ki baat hai aap yahan ke ek student se shaadi kar rahe hai.

Ram smiles and said thank you...and went towards the class.


Here,

After some time Ashwin and Priya broke the hug. Priya is crying and tears are coming down from her eyes. Ashwin held her both hands with him and slowly moves towards her. He closes the gap and concentrates on her lips. Priya parted her lips and kept her both hands on his shoulder when suddenly her eyes falls on her engagement ring and remembers about Ram. Priya becomes alerted. Ashwin is merely an inch apart to her lips when she pushes him hardly and said "No Ashwin this is wrong". Ashwin outraged with her action and losses his control and he slap her hardly on her face.

Priya is shocked with Ashwin's reaction and shouted "How dare you Ashwin...meri hi galti thi ki mein tumhare baato mein aa gayi...mera yahan se jaana hi achha hai". Saying this Priya turned to leave and tries to open the door when she realized door is locked from outside.

Ashwin wicked at her and said "tumhe kya lagta hai Priya...mein gadha hoon muje nahi pata ki tum mere jaal mein itne jaldi nahi aane wali ho. Iss din ka aur iss mauke ka mein kabse intezaar kar raha tha...meine hi yeh sab planning ki hai...Meine hi jaanbhujkar tumhe yahan le aaya taaki mein tumhare saat woh sab kar saku jisse mein kabse karna chahta tha. Tumne sahi kaha tha uss din Priya ki mein tumhe sirf bed par dekhna chahta hoon.

Priya:- Enough Ashwin tum pagal ho chuke ho...tumhe pata nahi tum kya bole jaa rahe ho.

Ashwin:- Yeh matt bhulo Priya tum khud yeh sab chahti thi...issliye abb jo bhi hoga uski zimmedaar sirf tum hogi...mein sabko bata dunga ki yeh sab tumne ki karwaya hai taaki Ram ko neecha dhikha sake. Iske baad Ram toh kya koi bhi tumse shaadi karne ke liye taiyaar nahi hoga.

Priya becomes shocked and shaken with his words.

Ashwin:- Tumhe kya lagta hai Priya...mein tumse sach mein pyar karta hoon...he laughs and said...love my foot ...jabse tumhe dekha hai tabb se hamesha ek hi cheeze mere dil mein thi ki mein ek baar tumhare saat pyar ke sair kar karu...Tum khud nahi janti Priya How sexy you are.

Priya is irritated with his talks.

Ashwin continue...

Upar se lekar neeche tak muje tumhe chune ka mann karta hai. Meine bahut baar koshish ki tumhare kareeb aane ki tumne chune ki lekin tum har baar uthni hi dur chali jaati thi. Aur jab pata chala ki tum shaadi karne wali ho uss kamine se toh mein pagal ho gaya...mere friends muj par haste hai ki teen saal peecha karne ke baad mein tum mere haat mein nahi aayi. Lekin aaj dekho tum khud meri jaal mein fass gayi.

Priya:- Enough Ashwin...chid ho rahi hai muje tumhari baato se...U r a cheat...tum kabhi kisi se sachha pyar nahi kar sakte.

Ashwin:- Tumhe jo bolna hai bolo lekin abhi muje woh karna hai jiske liye meine itni achhi planning ki hai...saying this he march towards her

Priya:- Ashwin please...mere paas matt aana...warna mein chilla dungi.

Ashwin:- go on Priya...chillao...kisne roka hai...yahan koi nahi aayega...aur agar koi aaya bhi toh jaise meine pehle kaha tha ki mein sabko bata dunga ki yeh sab tumhari hi planning thi...He came near her and Priya moves backward. Priya pleaded him in between to leave her but he walk dangerously towards her. Finally she hit the wall and Ashwin grab her hand and block her in between him and the wall. Ashwin closes the gap and moves towards her lips and Priya side her face and with her full strength she pushes him. Ashwin's grip on her becomes loosens and she ran towards the door when she hears the sound of door opening. She stops...Priya eyes are full of fear. She stops in the track and looks at the person shockingly.

Ram entered with a rage and looks dangerously at Priya. He marched towards her and and slap her hard on her cheeks then he turns walk towards Ashwin and held him from collars and beat him till he becomes half head. Blood was oozing out from his mouth and face. By then all the admin and non admin people gathered at the place and stops Ram from beating.

One Professor:- Sir chodiye...woh marr jaayega...hum uske kilaaf actions lenge..

Ram(angrily):- Dekh lo apne college ke students ko...kya kar rahe hai...agar mein time par yahan nahi aata toh yeh Priya ke saat...He stops...again he held Ashwin from his collar..."Tumhe pata nahi tumne kisse panga lene ki koshish ki hai...mein puri koshish karunga ki iss college se at least tumhe fair hone ka certificate na mile aur yeh bhi ki tumhe kahi bhi koi bhi tumhe job par naa rake...meri yeh nazar abb hamesha tum par rahegi...he left his collar. Ashwin is breathing heavily and not in a position to say anything. He then turns towards Priya and grab her hand takes her with him.

Ram forcefully takes her with him. Priya become very scared seeing his rage. He open the front door of the car and make her sit in the car. Priya is very scared to look at him. She very well know about his anger. Ram came to driver seat and shut the door hardly and drove off the car very fast. She has no idea where he is taking her she is silently sitting not even dare to ask him about where they are heading. His car drove off from the city and entered the highway. Finally his car halts in front of a villa. Villa is far away from city. He has taken this villa for their marriage. Priya looks around...but this place is new to her. Ram came out of the car and went to other side opened the door and pull her hand, .. Priya came out from the car. He takes her inside the house. Priya is unaware why Ram brought her here. When she entered into the house she became stunned to see fully furnished Villa. Ram took her upstairs and entered in a room. He closed the door behind with a swing he left her hand.. Priya sway in front. Before she could understand anything he slaps her hard on her cheeks. Priya fell on the bed and looked at him scarily. Ram moves towards her and she moves back and finally she hit the headrest. He held her leg tightly and Priya is shivering in fear.

Ram(angrily):- How dare you Priya...tumhari himmat kaise hui Ashwin se milne aur baat karne ki. Meine tumhe mana kiya tha na usse milne ke liye. Tumhare saare friends bahar the aur mujse jhoot kaha ki tum library mein ho matlab sab planning hi thi na. He pressed her leg more tightly and held her chin and pressed it hardly. Priya winched in pain but did not say anything and continuously crying.

Ram continue...

Pyar karti ho usse...he pressed her chin badly...bahut pyar aa raha tha tumhe uspar. Mere saamne natak kar rahi thi ki Ashwin ne tumhare saar zabardasti karne ki koshish ki. Achha nahi laga hoga na ki mein wahan aa gaya. Priya said nothing and crying nonstop. Aaj ke baad tum wahi karogi jo mein tumse kahunga. Abb shaadi hone tak tum yahi rahogi mere saat iss ghar mein...saying this he left her. His left her leaving his finger marks on her chin and slap mark on her cheeks.

Priya:- Ram please Im sorry...mein abb eisa kuch nahi karungi...muje ghar jana hai please...mein aapki saari baat maaungi lekin muje apne ghar jana hai.

But Ram did not budge and called Shipra and asked "Shipra ji mein chahta hoon ki aaj Priya mere saat rahe mein kal usse aapko aapke ghar chod dunga...aapko koi problem toh nahi hai na.

Shipra:- are nahi damad ji...hame kiss baat ki pareshaani...lekin kal aap chod denge na...kya hai na yahan bhi kaafi rasme mein jo Priya ke bagair nahi ho sakti...aur sabse badi baat Priya ke shaadi ka joda bhi toh lena hai na.

Ram:- Ji Priya ko kal mein chod dunga...saying this he hang up the call. Priya is silent now and is looking down..

Ram:- Jao Priya aur jakar fresh ho jao aur jaakar taiyaar ho jao... ...hum dono bahar jaa rahe hai.

Priya gets up and took her mobile but Ram took her mobile and said "Tum mere saat ho toh iski zaroorat nahi hai". He takes the mobile and put it in the pocket. She gets up and went to freshen up. She washed her face and saw marks his fingers marks on her cheeks. She again starts crying silently. After freshen up she came out from washroom wiping her face with towel. She sits on the bed lost in some thought.

After some time she saw the knob twist. She becomes alerted and get up from the place. Ram entered holding one packet in his hand. He gave it to Priya and said in demanding tone "Hum club jaa rahe hai...jaakar taiyaar ho jao"

Priya:- Ram muje club jaana achha nahi lagta.

Ram goes near her closes the gap and said:- Meine tumse tumhara opinion nahi maanga hai...order kar raha hoon...issliye abb tum jao aur jaakar change karo agar tumse nahi hota hai toh mein help kar deta hoon.

Priya left with no option...she took the dress and went to change. She wore that dress. But Dress is very short and its just above her knees and top is also revealing. It becomes difficult to her to controls her anguish. She is crying from inside. She did minimal make-up and came out. Priya is uncomfortable and tries to hide her revealing parts. Ram looks at her with an evil eye and goes near her. Priya trembled with fear.

He goes near her and whisper in her ear "Not bad Darling...u looks really hot and sexy...abb samja Ashwin tumhare saat woh sab kyun karna chahta tha...mann toh mera bhi bahut kuch kar raha hai bahut kuch karne ka lekin abhi sahi waqt nahi hai but don't worry Priya I will make you happy very soon. Jo Ashwin tumhare saat nahi kar saka mein tumhare saat zaroor karunga. Saying he saw her face. Marks of his slap are still over there. He caresses her cheeks. Priya closed her eyes.

Ram:- Abb bhi pain ho raha hai ...Mein kya karu Priya...tumse mana karne par bhi tum wahi karti ho jo muje bilkul pasand nahi hota hai aur muje gussa aa jaata hai. Said this he slowly bends towards her and kisses her on her cheeks. He caresses her cheeks with his lips and Priya shut her eyes tightly. She bears his torture silently. A tear falls from her eyes. After some time Ram left her.

Ram:- Smile...don't worry mein tumhare saat hoon and u know how much I'm possessive to you.

Ram kept his hand around her waist. His touch makes Goosebumps to all over her body. Both sits in the car and reach club. Priya came out from the car. Ram again put his hand around her waist and take her inside. She stiffen her body but he forcefully takes her with him. She entered into the club and clasp Ram's hand tightly.
Club is crowded with young boys and girls. Some are dancing in the loud music and some are taking the drinks. She is uncomfortable with the place and people. She saw only in TV now she is actually experiencing it.

Ram:- Kya logi...any drink, juice or coke.

Priya nodded her in negative and said "Muje kuch nahi chahiye...mein yahan se jaana chahti hoon".

Ram:- Arre eise kaise abhi toh aaye hai dance hai music hai mere friends se bhi toh milana hai. Chalo pehle dance karte hai uske baad tum thoda relaxed ho jaaungi.

Priya:- Mr. Kapoor please muje ghar jaana hai

Ram in angry tone "I said come"

Ram kept his hand around her waist and took her to the dance floor. Ram is moving his body and Priya is standing in fear. He then kept his both hands on her waist and orders her to moves her body. Priya moved her body little. He then pulls her towards him and she falls on his chest. Priya kept her both hands on his shoulder to protect her from his touch. He kisses her on her bosom and nuzzled her neck. He then brushes his lips with her and snuggles her everywhere on her face. He touches her everywhere. Priya is exasperated and making faces. She is in the verge of crying. After some time Priya left the place and settles herself in the corner. She is silently crying. Ram is happy and enjoyed her condition.

One girl came near Ram and ask him to dance with her. Ram stares at her from top to bottom. She looks utterly hot and sexy. Girls caresses his face with her index fingers and she reach to his lips. He clasps her finger and kisses her on her palm. Ram forward his hand and took her to the dance floor. Both are dancing very close. In between he kisses her many times. Ram then grip her hair and kisses her hardly on her lips. Priya is watching them and looks down. After enjoying fully he broke the kiss.

Girl:- Shall we continue this to hotel.

Ram:- No..No..Mein yahan apni hone wali wife ke saat aaya hoon...Im already engaged. Little late dear...come I will introduce you with her. He kept his hand around her waist and took her near Priya.

Ram:- Priya...meet my friend...He realized he did not ask her name...

Girl:- Suzan!!!!...What Ram hum itne der saat mein the aur abhi tak tumne mera naam nahi pucha.

Ram:- but tum toh mera naam janti ho na.

Suzan forwards her hand to Priya but Priya turns her face to other side.

Ram:- Yeh kya Priya woh tumse dosti ka haat bada rahi hai aur tum uski taraf dekh bhi nahi rahi...chalo haat do...this is not good manners. But Priya did not budge.

Suzan:- Chodo Ram tum bhi na...shayad usse hamari dosti pasand nahi aayi hogi. Ek kaam karo na mere liye ek vodka aur...arre Priya tumne abhi tak kuch nahi liya...what Ram u r so irresponsible. Priya ke liye juice...ok...Ram angrily glare at Priya and left to bar counter..

Suzan:- Priya lagta hai tum yahan pehli baar aayi ho aur tumhe yeh jagah uthni pasand nahi aa rahi hai na...Priya becomes silent and ignored her talk...waise ek baat kahu...ur Husband...I mean ur future husband is very hot and handsome and what a kiss...aaj tak itna passionate kiss kisi ne nahi kiya. Priya becomes annoyed with her talk and at last she spoke "Listen muje koi interest nahi tumhari kahani sunne ki...please muje aapse koi baat nahi karni". By then Ram came with the drinks.

Ram:- Kya baate ho rahi hai...

Suzan:- Kuch nahi...bass eise hi. Waise Ram tumhari hone wali wife kaafi beautiful hai.

Ram kept his hand around her shoulder and said haan who toh hai lekin tum bhi kam thodi ho and winks at her.

Suzan:- Raaamm...No flirting in front of ur wife.

Ram near to Priya and said in her ear "u know Priya...her lips is very hot but not more than you darling. Im desperately waiting for you Priya"

Priya closed her eyes...and controlling herself.

Ram gave one glass to her.

Priya:- Mein drink nahi leti

Ram:- Take it Priya...wine hai...isse peene se kuch nahi hoga

Priya denied

Ram becomes serious and said "I said take it"

Suzan:-What Ram...chodo na agar woh nahi lena chahti hai toh kyun zabardasti kar rahe ho.

Ram shares the drink from the same glass. First he gave it to Suzan and then forwards it to Priya.

Ram:- Ur turn Priya. Ek saat Girlfriend aur Biwi ke saat drink karne ka maza hi kuch aur hai... common Priya...Im waiting I said take it.

Priya:- Meine kahan aapse ki mein drink nahi karti...aap enjoy kariye apni girlfriend ke saat mein jaa rahi hoon

Ram becomes angry and he grips her hand tightly. Priya had enough of his torture. She slaps him hardly on his cheeks.

Priya:- U know what Mr. Kapoor u deserve this...enjoy with ur girlfriend...Im leaving. Ram becomes shocked. He left her hand and Priya walk out from the club.


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