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sandhya

@lovelysakshi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

read both the chapter

beautiful writing...loved it

waiting for the 3rd chapter and PM me if possible

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Sanjukta

@BALHLOVER

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

i read both update in a one go ..

excellent ..

superb story line i just loved it

and please continue soon

thank u for ur pm dear

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ADITI

@couchyC

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

hy...wonderful beginning! plzz cont soon! waiting...

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aanchal

@LovingRaYa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

hey dear where you

waiting for the next part

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leena

@leena04

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

hey buddy awessome start dear I loved this conceept someething diffreant & new feel when I was reading iit felt like reading novel u have such a fabulose writing skill I must say its an awesome... start for any story... now come to the story part then OMG what an update dear any man can get hate the woman like Isha she is such a S**t eeven thet is also coould be the batter then her she is worst then that who thinks like this for her own child... Ram is such dear father for sure... it says when u beecomes pareants unknown resposiblity makes u batter pperson theen what u r that is only happen with Ram & i lovd that Finally Ram divorced that mad woman good he is coming back to India somee really short of good thing must be abt to happen... so moving for next...

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leena

@leena04

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Posted: 10 years ago

#26

part 2
awesome dhamakedaar Priya's entry so past of RaYa yet to be reveled how they know each other & wghy they hate each other? but loved thier enconter in Kush's school theey r just like our beloved RaYa ladhte jhagate hue... awesome... loved this part nowww now more greedy to read further plz continue soon waiting for it...