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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: luvsakshi




Thank you so much lakhs
wer are you todayyy ..

awww before AK interuuption Rams love is unconditional hai na

haha kithna achha imagination hai .. i too loved ..
haha kada naku kuda ivvalani undi ilanti treatment
Haha i too can imagine only one face ..Lol
Haha obviously aakhi inki biwi hai na
so direct flirting chaltha hai boss

Edo edo aipothundi eda lo edo ipothundi ..
rishnaji saviour a ahaddii a nuvvu cheppali ..lol

Kiddi kiddo
vesthadi okaroju baaga
Vikram is sweet and he looks after her like his sister and you will dfinatly come to know all in next updates

Thank you so much for the comment
still half left haaa
tha waiting



Haha today I ll give another half
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow after so much time some criminal story I loved it
read all the parts in one go ...

Ram is very nice ...hope to see RAYA coming closer soon

very nice story line up and very nice description
thanks for pm
continue ASAP


Edited by anupam_dil - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Doc kuch bhi ho idhar sameer aur rajjo ka naam sunke happy honewali ne apne pehle hi comment me sameer naam sunke point out kardiya, jo ki hume bhi dhyan me nhi rehta lekin usse hamesha se rehta hai 😆 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
thank you for pm 😛
shruti n ashwin got murdered n Priya has probably seen the murderers
priya par 2-3 times attack 😲 but vik n sudhir has saved her all the time n now its Ram's turn 😆
aww sahil too got murdered
i have one confusion, (may be it sounds silly 😆)
ram ko sudhir ne kuch toh bataya hai then why he is saying k why are not sharing it with me Priya 😕
aur wo jab Vikram se bhi baat kar rahi thi tab bhi ram ne same cheez kahi
i want to ask k Ram ko pata hai ya nhi 😕 ya phir yeh bhi suspense hai 😆

p.s. note mai sameer issue clear karne k liye thanks 😆 but sandy toh sirf naam se hi khush thi na aapne wo bhi khushi cheen li sandy ki 🤣 sandy ko suppose hi kar lene deti na aap 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
thanks fr pm.
Expectng nxt update soon.. Intersting stry..
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Posted: 10 years ago
PREVIEW

Priya reached the door , her tears gave up seeing Sahil's body covered in a white cloth .

"Dii I want to become a pilot , so I can take you two [ sruthi di * priya di ] to Everest and wherever you want "

His words echoed in her ears , tears flowed from her eyes non stop , she walked near Mrs.Bhandari
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When all the rituals are going on Mrs.Bhandari uncontrollable she lost her conscious fell in Priya's lap . Ram came there lifting her up in his arms , he made her lie down on the bed Immediately started the treatment .

Jayesh karekar came to check on her , but seeing Ram he stood there .Ram looked up at him

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Ram got call from His mother ,It's not safe to stay Newly married couple out side .so come back with priya soon . How can he ask her .when he was fidgeting in his own .


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She rested back on the seat , her tears started raining , She felt Ram sat beside her , she thought he will ask something but the drive was silent .

His thoughts were racing like car , why ?? what ? its all mystery to him ??

He glanced at priya she still closed her eyes . when they reached , Ram walked with priya , seeing her Krishnaji came , before she ask anything

Ram said " she is tired ma , just not now "

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When ram saw her there all cuddled up with aunt and crying ,His heart solaced , and he was happy to see her safe and sound . And don't know why but if something happens to her he can't see . after all when he don't know anything about her .he saved her ,how come he wont save her now . His first meet lingered infront of his eyes .

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"Im scared " she stifled ..

Ohhh He don't know what to do , he scratched his temple , Umm ok come here He spread his arms to her , She looked at his eyes ,seeing genuine concern she just fled in those arms .

She braced herself on his broad chest , Her grip on his mascular arms was strong , Her soft curves touching his broad chest , she is as light as flower .He bent down his head to her ear "I can't live with out you baby " just don't say those words again .



errr how many want update ??? because after this she wil take a 3 days gap to update next one sooo ..

Edited by luvsakshi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
So it was reg Sahil's death she gotta know and left home abruptly.. My guess is right.. But am not happy coz this was abt sad part... I liked Ram goin there to be with her..But Jayesh Karekar.. 😆 bhi agaya story mein.. good. khali bansi kaka amd Sid ka entry abhi baki hain 😆
Jokes apart where did she go again wid out informing when she knows there is a threat to her..Ram saved her when they were strangers?? When did that happen?? Before their meet at hosp or after that meet? Coz he didnt know who she was when they first met na so am asking..
Oh their first official hug.. loved it re..
Lovely preview so I wanna read update now..
Why r u asking Neel abhi dedo update jaldi plzzz...
Edited by armanz - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
superb update
full of suspense
who killled sahil,shruthi and ashwin ??
continue soon
thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: lpsakshi


Haha today I ll give another half


will be waiting for that

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: anupam_dil

wow after so much time some criminal story I loved it
read all the parts in one go ...

Ram is very nice ...hope to see RAYA coming closer soon

very nice story line up and very nice description
thanks for pm
continue ASAP




Thank you so very much
Im glad you liking it ..

and thank you for likes and comment ..
will try to update soonish

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