FF-Hum aapke hai kaun part 11 updated on pg 24 - Page 14

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Awsm. Loved the way ram proposed priya.
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Lovely part!!
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Very cute so as always Ram charmed Priya and made her agree to come with him and wat a cute way to propose his Lady love and she also accepted it. Continue soon and thank you for the pm.
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I m changing the story lil sorry character shipra is negative n ayesha tho hai n pls its was important for story hope u all r ok its needed for story to go further

Part 11

Oblivious to the world they were still kissing it was soft, full of love both were drowing in each other with every passing moment, until the need for oxygen arrised they reluctantly broke off the kiss still holding on to each other, breating deep Ram was storking her back she smiled at him and put her head on his chest while he put her arms around her. Gently moving with the wind, Ram: Priya
Priya: han

Ram: thanks

Priya: pulling herself back a little looking at him, 'thanks' kis lliye she asked acting all innocent (what she is Embarrassed )

Ram: with a spark in his eyes, pulled her a little closer 'acha nahi pata kis liye kyun?' with which he again placed a kiss on her mouth tasting her soft lips, kissing her over and over it was magical feeling her lips move against his it gave him a high, never had he felt a kiss could be so sensuous. Pulling back, 'for accepting me!'
Her eyes were getting moist again, she couldn't bring out her voice to say thing, so emotions lay within her all at the same time it was just beautiful!

Suddenly it occurred to them that the ship had stopped moving it had come back to the shoreline.

Priya: I guess this is it..

Ram: ya, but not for too long, I promise I'll bring you back here soon! but for now this'll have to do... thanks to your brother he thought to himself.

They walked down meeting Captain Sam midway
Captain Sam: I hope you enjoyed!

Both of them together : yes!

Ram: it was great thanks (he said before he kissed her hand again) LOL We shall make a move now.

Captain Sam: sure have a good evening.

Leaving from there it was already 10:15, getting in the car they zoomed off towards the hotel.

Priya: Ram slow down you're going too fast.. way over the speed limit.

Ram: ya I know, leking what to do we're already running a little behind schedual and I've to get you back by 11.

Cheekily she said: so I see you're taking my bhaiya's words quite seriously good good... but what are having for dinner?

Ram: dinner right ofcourse how could I forget.. now what would you like to have for dinner or you could just have me once your brother kills me for not abiding by his curfew as it is we're late.
Priya: Ram relax will you! Its ok, I'll talk to him

Ram: you will.. acha kya kahogi usse ki kyun late ho gaye hum?
Priya: yahi kahongi ki.. she stopped midway realzing what he meant, you're so mean..

Ram: really I had a different impression a few minutes ago should I redemonstrate and he pulled the car to he side. So where were we? Leaning a bit towards her.

Priya getting all shy on him, Ram kya kar rahe ho aab late nahi ho raha hai kya?
Ram: nah .. tumhi neh toh kaha ki tum baat karogi, toh dus minute late paunche ya aaur der se kya farak parta hai.

Priya: Ram please.. lets go she pleaded.
Putting the gear the car begain moving, few moments later he noticed she had drifted to sleep she was sleeping like a baby and a smile adorned her face reflecting the new found happiness which filled her heart.

Soon they were back and she was yet to wake up, seeing how peacefully she was sleeping he didn't have the heart to wake her but knowing well that it wont be a pleasant sight if Vikram saw her like that.. he couldn't risk it not yet ways.. Gently stroking her hair Priya! She stirred, Priya utho we're here.

Priya: Ram hum paunch gaye her eyes still a little groggy.
Ram: yes sweetheart we are here come on lets go in, As she got out she held on to his hand and they walked in, 'tumne mujhe uthaya kyun nahi'

Ram: tum itne chan se so rahi thi ki mera mann nahi hua ki tumhe uthaun

Priya: lekin phir bhi tum drive kar rahe the aur mein.. her face fell.
Ram: its ok, no need to put a frown on that beautiful face now be a good girl and give me a smile, and also we don't want bhaiya thinking I didn't take care of his little girl now do we?

Priya: coming close to hug him one last time. No we don't!
As they reached her room, Priya: Ram

Ram: haan

Priya: tum bhaiya se, mera matlab woh

Knowing well what she meant he continued. Kya?
Priya: woh humare baare mein and she hid her face in his chest.
Ram: ya, I'll actually abhi chalte hain as he pulled her hand to take her with him. She quickly drew it back, now what tumhi neh toh kaha ki bhaiya se baat karni hai toh ab chalo na ruk kyun gayi?
Priya: abhi nahi, baad mein kar lena an jao aaur so jayo.

His hand on his heart aab neend kahan ayegi!

Priya: just go

Ram: kissing her head goodnight; and left.

They were both oblivious that Vikram was standing just a few feet away from them and had witnessed the entire scene.. he too was happy knowing his sis was happy but still he needed to assure himself that Ram was the right one for Priya which he'd know in just a few hours. He too retired to his room to get some sleep.
Ram had changed and was checkin his e-mail, replying to all the messages he'd received from his office mainly from Raj jiju regarding the deal in Delhi. He knew it was going to be crazy once he got back to Mumbai with loads of work he needed to take care of which had piled due to his absence! Having replied to all the e-mails he shut the laptop and kept it aside. Laying down on the bed he got up almost instantly remembering that Priya had said she was hungry and his feeling was she had probably not had a thing to eat after getting here too. He felt bad!

Calling down to the reception he asked called and ordered a couple of sandwiches, along with 2 cups of coffee, the food was delivered to his room within a few minutes. Taking the tray he walked down to her room and gently knocked.. there was no answer, she must have slept he thought of calling her but then he saw one of the hotel staff there and asked them to open the door for him.

The guy looked at him and then the tray.. "I'm afraid sir I cant open the door its against hotel policy to let people in other rooms"
Ram: I understand that but she's not answering and we were suppose to have dinner.

Guy: I'm sorry I cant do that, why don't you call her and ask her to open the door.

Ram who had about had it with this guy, 'listen would you just open the door, its my fianc in there and if you'd rather i can call up your manager and ask him to unlock this stupid door.

It didn't take long after that for the guy to pull out his master key and let him in, getting in he banged the door on his face...
Sh** that was loud, but to his luck he found her huddled up under the blanket sleeping very comfortably with a what with teady bear she was cuddeling on to the bear like her life, 'I wish that was me she was cuddeling upto aah just thinking about it gave him goosebumps.

Slowly placing the tray on the table going near her lightly pressed her hand Priya.

No response, a little louder Priya, pulling the blanket over her she turned around unable to resist he came in close proximity to her ear and 'priyaaa that did it she got up with a jolt "kya hua" she screamed and Ram burst out laughing seeing the look on her face!

Ram still laughing, while Priya was looking at him mad
Priya: aise uthate hain kisiko and pointing towards him tum tum yahan mere kamre mein kaise aye?
Ram: bas aa gaya, aaur ab utho
Priya: kyun utho, mujhe sona hai neend aa rahi hai, tum jao na apne kamre mein
Ram: haan baba so jana per tumne kuch khaya ?
Priya: getting her teddy and squeezing it 'nahi'
Ram: get up, not seeing her budge came forward removing her blanket out of the way she was wearing a Winnie the pooh pajama set, seeing her in those he thought such a kid she is, she was very conscious of her appearance as Ram's gaze pierced thru her skin.
Ram: Priya jaldi utho; as she got out he led her to the table where the food was laid, seeing that she smiled.
Priya: yeh sub, khana?

Ram: coming close to her haan, tumne kaha tha na ki tumhe bhook lagi thi na toh aab dekh kya rahi ho.
She stood still her eyes moistened, feeling a tug on his hand as she had not moved when started moving he turned around to find her crying, coming close to her but before he could say a thing she came forward and hugged him, holding him tightly as he rubbed her back! He didn't know what happened but one thing was for sure he couldn't bare seeing tears in her eyes, softly he asked her: kya hua Priya

Priya: nahi kuch nahi

Ram: kuch nahi, mujhe bhi nahi batayogi?

Priya: bas mujhe iss sub ki adat nahi hai na Ram kept looking at her trying to understand what she meant bur completely failing to do so, she kept going "aaj tak kisi neh mere baare mein itna nahi soocha, ghar per kitne baar aise hi so jati thi she couldn't continue a further remembering all those times and her life back in Australia, and now Ram had brought new hopes in her life she dreaded the fact that soon they'll be going back and then what'll happen is this it she was afraid of going back there in this short span of time Ram had toched her soul!

Ram: Priya mujhe nahi pata ki isse phele tumhari zindagi mein kya hua, per itna zaroor hai ki iske baad humari zindagi mein sub acha hoga only if you promise that you will not cry I hate seeing tears in your eyes. As she smiled they setteled down to have the sandwiches which looked very appealing as she was starving well so was he! They ate glacing at each other everynow and then. Finished with the food she set the plates aside..

Priya: thanks

Ram: chalo aab tum ja ker so jao mein bhi chalta hoon kafi der ho chuki hai.

She giggled nahi sirf 12 baje hain.

Ram: very fun getting up he stretched

Priya: you look very tired too go and get some sleep.
Ram: ya its been a long week and tomorrow I've got to go for a meeting so I better get going, I'll probably not see you till later tomorrow night.

Priya: hmm she said a bit disappointed but then work was important too.

Ram: ok now go back to sleep I promise I wont come back in this time.

Thinking about that ' Ram tumne bataya nahi tum andar kaise aye tumhare paas toh chabhi bhi nahi hai aaur'

Ram: bas aise hi aa gaya

Priya: bolo na

Ram: woh jub meh aya toh 'and he narrated what happened'
A stunned Priya ' tumne usse kaha ki, Ram tumhe pata hai agar bhaiya koh pata chala toh kitne problem ho sakti hai? I mean, you know what I mean to say'

Ram: haan Priya but not for long as I plan to talk with him and my family very soon so that we can get married. You know I've still not told no one at home about all this I can just imagine everyone's reaction when I'll tell them especially Maa she will be so happy, she has been after me for quite sometime to get married and now that I have finally found someone. She blushed as he spoke about her.
She was apprehensive as to what his family would think about her as her own family never thought too highly about her will they like me, and as if on cue Ram holding her close to him "Priya quit worrying my family will love you' she looked upon him surprised how was he always able to read her thoughts so unmistakably.
Priya: really you think so?

Ram: I know that they will and even if they didn't I wouldn't care he said looking in her eyes!

Priya: theek hai per ab tum jao, der ho rahi hai lightly kissing her on the lips,he left and Priya laid back down looking at her ring and drifted to a peaceful sleep.

Back in Australia

It was late afternoon and Shipra was sitting in her room flipping through odd magazines when Mr Sharma came in to get some files as he was about to step out

Shipra: Sudhir tumhari Vikram se kuch baat hui? Kab wapas aa raha hai?

Mr Sharma : haan kal hi hui thi keh raha tha ki ek do dino mein pata chaega ki woh project kisse deh rahe hain woh log. Kyun tumne achanak kyun poocha?

Shipra: actually mein sooch rahi thi un dono ke ane ke baad Priya ki shaadi kar den, Woh Mrs. Malhotra hain na unki behan ka beta Vidu woh India se aya hua hai, unke ghar party mein mila toh tha apko yaad nahi hai?

Mr Sharma: yeh tum kya keh rahi ho, tum uss larke se Priya ki shaadi karwana chahte ho, uske do baar shaadi ho chuki hai aur bacche bhi hain.

Shipra: toh isme harz ki kya hai, waise bhi usse shaadi kaun karega aise hai hi kya siwai iss keh ki woh iss parivar mein rehti hai. Aaur Vikram bhi shaadi tub tak nahi karega jub tak uski shaadi nahi ho jati.

Mr Sharma: Shipra tum Priya ke bare mein acha nahi sooch sakti toh kam se kam bura toh mat socho. Kya kasoor hai uss bechari ka sirf yeh ki... He was cut by her remark
Shipra: toh mera kya kassor tha Sudhir raat din uss larki ko iss ghar mein dekh kar jante ho mujhe per kya beet ti hai? Jo bhi ho mein aab usse iss ghar mein bardasht nahi kar sakti.
Mr Sharma: tum kab tak uss baat ko yaad karke pareshaan hoti rahogi, eek baar uss bacchi koh apna maan ker toh dekho.
shipra: Sudhir maine keh diya bus aab mujhe iss bare mein aur koi baat nahi karni hai, bas aab hi woh wapas ati hai uski shaadi kar ke iss ghar se jana hoga she said sternly and left the room.
Mr Sharma: pata nahi yeh kub uss hadse se bahar niklegi!

Preview: aab kya hoga Priya keh saath?
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Posted: 10 years ago
gud one. thanks for pm..pl continue.
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Aww so cute and adorable couple are RaYa and their romance is witnessed by Vik who is happy for them and back in Australia Shipra is thinking to marry her to some jerk. Hope Ram able to save his Priya before time. Do continue soon and thanx for the pm.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Very nice update
Continue soon
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Nice update...
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