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Originally posted by: BALHLOVER
hayeee Me totally in ur Fan list
again superb start ,but its dreamhaawww..please.. nextfast fastwaitingthank u for ur pm
heyyy senior...
hahaha... i like the last dream part...😆superb...continue soon
thnx and not decided yet ff or SS
BEING TOGETHER IS ENOUGH
PART 2
""Hello Friends here is part 2 jst wanna say this is story is narrated by priya
so some of conversion between priya and ram...Ram's convo in Red
color and flashback part in black color so plz dnt get confuse.""
RECAP :
Ram came close to my lips...
i close my eyes...
I waited...waited...
Waited...
I opend my eyes see...his teeth... and suddenly he bites my neck...
I shoute...
Raaammm...
Ahh ahhh...ahhh
breathe breathe...
I jumped from my bed dirctly in front on mirror...
check my neck its ok...its alright...this is a dream..
ohh my god this is a dream..
Priya's Narration :
I checked my neck in mirror and i saw
Ram's reflection in mirror
He standing jst behind me...
He came close to me...
He brushed his lips to my neck where i place my finger to chk my neck...
I turned my side...
And without waste single min i take his lips to mine...
He doesn't respond...
Hey what happen jaan ram separate himself and asked me...
Nothing just a dream...sorry i said...
Don't be sorry i know it gonna be happen one day...
No no esa kuch nahi hoga i knw how much u love me ram...
Hmmm i love u but how can i trust on myself...
I went near him...cups his face...
Hey plz look in my eyes plz ram
Nothing gonna be happen trust me nothing gonna be happen...
He hugs me tight as tight possible...
After some time we broke hug...
Ram touched his forhead to mine...
Only u can control me priya...only you
I love u and love u love so much...
I could see pain in his eyes...
Ram i love u too...
This time ram takes lead
he catches my lips into his...
Our tongues plays with each other...
While kissing
I slowly slowly drag ram to my bed...
I opend his shirt button...
He deeply engrossed in kiss...
Ram is now shirtless...
We fall on bed...ram on top of me...his hands moving on all over my body...
i opened ram's paint button...
Bang
He suddenly push me to the edge of bed and he jump off from bed...
I cant priya i cant
mujhse... control nahi hoga...
i cant hurt you
Ahhh...
I hurt not bcoz of ram bcoz of edge of bed...
Hey hey he came close to me...
Sorry ye sab meri wajah se...priya how could i do this to you...
I put finger on his lips...no ram mistake is mine mujhe thoda sabar karna chahiye...but ur smell
Ur smell drive me crazy...
He smiled and said waise ye lines meri honi chahiye thi priya...
tumhe laga to nahi...
thoda sa laga hai...
Kaha kaha chalo doctor ke pass....
Or doctor ko jake kya kahenge ki...
Ki...
Ki kiss karte time aage kuch ...mood nhi hua or...
Bus bus kitni shameless hoti ja rhi ho tum...
I laughed...
he slowly slowly caresses where i got marked bcoz of edge...
i close my eyes bcoz now its paining
Priya i think tetanus injection lagega...
No no No injection...
Are loha(iron) ki lagi hai look pura mark hai...
No ram mujhe injection se dar lagta hai...ye apne aap thik ho jaega...
He laughed actuly he rofl...
Whats so funny ram...
Tumhe injection se dar lagta hai...
i cant beleive...tum darti bhi ho...
I mean Mujhse pyar karne main dar nahi laga or jara si needle se dar lagta hai...
I hit on his chest... so mean ram...
I love u...and u make fun if me...
Jao main tumse baat nahi larti...
Or aaj ke baad mujhse milne ki ya mere ghar aane ki jarurat nahi ...
i gotup and abt to move...
he grab my hand and pull me near to him...
Ms. Priya diaz aaj to kah diya ab mat kahna i never ever leave u remember this till my last breathe i m with u
Tumse baate karunga...
Tumhe roj gudnight kiss diya karunga...
Ese hi tumhe sota hua dekhunga...
tumahare sapno me aaya karunga...
Tum jindgi ho meri or ese hi koi apni jindgi se dur kaise rah sakta hai priya...
Ram tum jante ho mujhe kaise rulana hai
he wipes my tear and said chalo ready ho jao
Main direct college main milunga tumhe...byee love u...
Bye love u too...plz ghar pahuch ke call kar dena i m waiting...
He laughed....ji mam or kuch
He open window and escape from there...
I closed window came to front of mirror...
chk myself again in mirror...
Priya Diaz
Or Priya Ram Kapoor...
ram kab maanega iske liye...kab main diaz se kapoor banungi kab ???
I set on my bed and remember my journey with ram...
**********Flashback************
Goa :
To change place or city or position
It was such a simple word, but who knew that it could have so many definitions...
For me, moving to another City is dreadful.
I had grown up here in the city beachs Goa, but of course I also have short stays with my papa,
Sudheer diaz in his house in the city of lakes and clouds Dehradoon during vacations when the temperature in the city is too hot and intolerable for a human's skin...
All my childhood memories are in this house and this room that I am sleeping at is probably one of the luxuries that I can at least have all to myself...
And not to mention, all the people I can call my friends -being the quiet person, if you get to know me i m nature loving...but lil reserved...
That's why it is very hard for me to move out and make new friends...
It's not the people and the house I am going to miss, but also the beauty of beaches ,nature and lively environment that the city of goa has even at night. But it's not a decision I have to make for myself, because if it is, I would have just not agreed to this crazy idea.
I have to do this for my mom and for Dad...
I love her and I want her to have full time to her socail events not to worry about me...she alwys leave her work bcoz of me...
she was ex Miss bhuvneshver,so many celebrities know her...her events...her chains of butique...lots of works...but she ignore all when i was at home and i dnt want that she suffer loss bcoz of me...i dnt know why she cares me alot extra care...
So, no matter how saw I am and don't want to move, I have to.
It's for the best.
Plus, I would get some quilty time to spend with my Dad who I only get to see during summer vacations. And when he came to stay with us once in year only 2 days...
Sighing, I pushed the duvets away from my body and I jumped out of the bed, yawning. I stretched my arms and legs and yawned again before I rubbed my tired and sleepless eyes.
I walked over my room window and opened it, the bright, blinding rays of the greeting my eyes making me close it out of instincts. When I adjusted to the overwhelming lights, I blinked my eyes a few times as I overlook the view of Goa from my room's...
Sadness overwhelmed me again as I stared longingly at the cars piling up in the street at this early time of the day. People were already finish their jogging hurrying to get to their workplace and offices as early as possible.
Knock knock
A knock came in my door, snapping me out of my little daydream. I snapped my head towards the door, just in time to hear it creak before it opened, revealing my Maa
"Good morning, priya." uth gayi beti tu...She smiled warmly at me as she entered my room.
"Good morning, Maaa."
"beta jaana jaruri hai kya...Mera nuksaan hota hai to hone de...?"
She started...again
I nodded my head with a forced smile. "Yes, jaana jaruri hai...sirf aapke liye nahi papa ke liye bhi ye decision liya hai...main shower leke aati hu then ready to leave.
She bobbed her head up and down in understanding, "thik hai niche aa jana jaldi breakfast karne and aaj no apple samjhi naa?
""Okay." I told her and she gave me one last smile before she left the door, closing the door behind her with a slam.
I took a deep breath before I headed to the bathroom to take a warm shower that would surely help me relax for my trip later. I stripped the clothes from last night and stepped into the shower, the warm waters sliding down my exhausted body.
I dried my hair with a white soft and fuzzy towel as I walked towards my small walk in closet.
I finally decided on wearing something warm for my body because I knew too well that Dehradoon is a place where it rains frequently and the temperature is always low.
I slipped on the black-blue jacket paired with a tight pair of jeans. I approached the mirror to check my reflection.
I openup my hair and tucked behind my ears...
Finally satisfied, I smiled at my reflection in the half body sized mirror and released a deep breath.
I picked my backpack up and slung it into my left shoulder. I took one last look at my room and last touched to my chairs...my desk ,wall everything
I exited and close the door behind me.
I came down from stairs to dining table where the heavenly smell is coming from.
I'm going to miss Maa's cooking.
She always make sure that I eat the most delicious yet healthy foods varying from snacks, dishes and other meals.
Maa. is one of the sweetest, loving and best maa in the world. That's why I love and value her so much. I am going to miss her cooking and her caring nature towards me when I leave.
Willing myself not to cry, I forced a smile as Maa slowly turned around, transferring the food from the frying pan into a large plate.
"priyu pet bhar ke khana beta aaj plz..." She smiled warmly at me,
Priyu i hate this 'u'
but I can tell that she is holding back tears. I obliged by taking a seat on one of the dining chairs.
She placed a full plate in front of me and poured the clear glass beside my plate with freshly squeezed orange juice.
I began to eat silently I looked up to meet my Mom's eyes but was surprised when I saw that tears were already brimming there.
"Maa?" I asked through a mouthful, "Are you alright?"
She nodded, wiping the tears that leaked out of her eyes, but miserably failing, "haaa main theek hu bus tuhje bahut miss karungi betaa...
""ooo maa aap main jayada door thodi na jaa rhi hu plz aap ro mat warna main jaa nahi paungi or rougi to jhuriya aa jaegi chehre par...miss ex bhuvneshwar...
She laughed while she successfully wiped the tears evident in her cheeks, "ok ok but roj kam se kam 10 baar phone karna...?"
I nodded with another forced smile, "Pkkaaa wala promise bus"
I finished remaining BF...
My Mom readily smiled at me without uttering a word the rest of the time I was eating and it made me sadder, but I just ignored it.
Silence wrapped around our surroundings like a thick blanket, both of us trying our very best not to shed a tear in front of each other...
"Chale beta warna late ho jaaega"
"Yes." I breathed out, trying my hardest to fight the tears, and eventually winning. I walked out of the dianing table and passed my suitcase along the way, dragging it until I was out of the house.
Maa maine cab manga li hai plz
Aap mat aana warna main jaa nahi paungi...plz...
She somehow agreed...
A black cab was parked in our driveway, the tinted windows not giving me enough access on the inside...
Bhulna mat din me 10 baar call karma..., okay"
My Mom told me, a tear slipping from her left eye but she swiftly wiped it away as if it never fell from her eyes at all...
"I promise pkka wala promise..." I told her before I engulfed her in a bone crushing hug, not wanting to let go... But eventually, our moment has to end. I waved goodbye to her, smiling as I got inside the cab.
She waved back at me, the tears now freely running down her cheeks. I took one last look at her, and at the house that I had always lived and grew up to, before the Cab finally drove off.
I had a feeling that moving to Dehradoon can change my life forever...
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