Doc its really going good yaar, why didn't you try earlier, you write so well.
btw, u perfectly penned down priya n neha's ccharacters, easily relatable.
It's such a beautiful one neha n priya , neha teasing priya n priya's dialogues awesome
Oye where is ram btw? Rraya kab milenge dobara? Mere khayal se neha ka bf vikki hi hai, since neha had recommended priya to this hospital, vikki is always eyeing on priya definitely there is some plan, I m sure. vik neha ki trick always works in case of raya.superb hihihi.
Aur ye dusra koun hai raj? And stupid fellow , seems to be jealius of ram..
good going. aage.
give the update soon