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Sumira

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Posted: 11 years ago

#271

Awww... such an emotional one ... beautiful update ...

could feel Priya's pain ...shez been through so much all alone n lost her baby too..

Waiting for the next one ...

Thanks for the PM

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luvsakshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#272

Thanks for the pm

omg what all priya has gone thru

aww cute peehu has some prob and her operation is not succes ful so sad to hear yaar

too emotional

now Ram came to know all the truth

waiting for your next part for Raya milan

sorry for late reply

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akilagoud2

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Posted: 11 years ago

#273

emotional update
u made me cry 😭
continue soon
thanks for pm

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lpsakshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#274

i just cant expalin ki how i m feeling just----

no words hattsofff thnks for pm

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abhishekpanchal

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Posted: 11 years ago

#275

awww...pihu...shit...sooo emotional... raya.
.priya suffered a lot...khair...ram now camr to knw the reality...plzzz update asap cnt wait anymore... i want...roothna manana...tooo...plzzz

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zainab kassim

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Posted: 11 years ago

#276

it is very good story please update today if can thanks👏

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Janilover

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Posted: 11 years ago

#277

plz update soon and plz
next time pm me

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sushfiza

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Posted: 11 years ago

#278

Thank u everyone for comments..
heres d next part
original writer APON

Part 10

Ram is gazing the picture... Tear is dropping on the picture... Pihuuu i m sorry baby papa couldn't able to save u i m sorry baby i m sorry in cracking voice ram is talking with the picture... He pressed the picture against his heart and starts to cry bitterly... His eyes is tried now.. But tear is not willing to stop.. It is still flowing its own way...
Priya shifted to the ICU ... Vikram and neha is pacing ups and down in the corridor waiting for doctor to come out from the ICU ... Priya is still unconscious... Doctor takes some tests and waiting for the report.. They r trying hard to find out what happens to her...but before the get the report they cant say anything...
Ram is still sitting on the bed lifelessly... He closed his eyes every moment he was spent with priya flashbacks in front of his eyes.. A long tear escape from his eyes... Right now all he wants to priya.. He opens his eyes.. Wiping his tear He keeps the picture on his chest pocket and walking towards the main door...
Two hour later..
Vikram and neha is sitting on the chair in front of icu cabin.. Neha is still sobbing... Vikram is telling her that nothing will happen to priya... Doctor comes out from the icu and calls vikram and neha.. Both neha and vikram praying for a positive report.. " well we have going through all the test of her and get the report.. There is some complications.. Nehas and vikram expression change into fear doctor understand that and continue further, her hemoglobin level fall down below 8 g/dL which is very risk for her life..her blood cellular is not functioning well, which is affected her body.. The amount of blood that she needs in her body, the blood cellular is not supplied that much in her body... Which is coz weakness and unconsciousness.. Probably she is not taking food from last few days which coz more demage in her health.. So we need to transfer blood in her body as soon as possible.. Another things is that doctor is taking time to reveal another problem.. Well we have found that in her heart there is few blocked still we r not sure about the size.. After confirmed the size we will decide if we need to do bypass or medicine will cure the block.. But problem is that her body is not that state to tolerate any operations and moreover in bypass body need huge amount of blood which is not now circulate in her body...if u have question that why we r not gave her body enough blood and going through the operations but i will say that it doesn't possible coz when we will do bypass the patient need to be perfectly fine mentally and physically.. Still i m not sure about size of the hole in her heart after confirmed that i will inform u... Saying this doctor again enters the icu..
Ram enters the hospital and runs towards the reception ask her where priya has been shifted the reception gal tells ram the direction.. Without wasting a second ram headed towards the icu section... He finds vikram and neha is sitting on the char..their facial expression is saying they r very tensed... Ram goes near them he calls vikram.. Vikram looks at himm ... Looking at ram vikram heart cry into pain.. Ram is looking so pale and vulnerable.. He cant disclose him what doctor said to them.. " vikram doctor ne kya bola priya thik han na, mujhe usse milna han vikram, mujhe usse dikhna han" " rammm wo doctor ne bola wo bohat hi jada weak han thoda tym lagegi recover krne mai, aur ohh.. Neha is feeling hesitate to tells him further more.. Aur kya neha . Ram asks neha his heart is start to beating first... He has not enough streanth now to hear any negative things regarding her health...
" doctor assume kr raha sayed uski heart mai blocked han, aur prblm ya han ki aab operations nahi kr sakte uski health k condition bohat kharap han... Tears gather in nehas eyes again... He is feeling blank, his heart is wincing in pain..
he cant loose priya he cant... Vikram holds ram arms and says dont panic ram doctor is not sure still... " vikram mujhe priya ko dekha han, plz vikram ram manages to say... Vikram goes doctor cabin and request him to allow one person in the icu after requesting several tyms doctor agree and says one for ten min ram can go inside.. Vikram thanks the doctor and moves towards the icu...
Holding the door handle ram is breathing hard so that his tear does not roll down.. He steps inside... His eyes fall on priya.. She is lying on the bed .. Her bed is covered with a white cloths.. Her palm is rested on the bed.. She is looking pale and broken... In a steady motion she is taking breath... Her eyes is closed but tear is visible corner of her eyes... Iv is attached to her one hand which is transferring blood on her body... Ram enters into the room.. He gives so much afford not cry again but tear is not in mood to hear him... He goes near her pulling the tool near the bed he sits beside her... He takes her hand in his.. Placing a kiss opposite of her palm ram keeps her hand above his heart and says priya plz aakhe kholo... Agar tumne aakho nhi khola to mera iss jo dhakaan ko mehessons kar rahi ho wo hamesha k liya dharakna bandh kar degi... Aur kuch khone k takat mujh mai nahi aab priya...plz aak bar mujhe dekho mujhse gussa karo.. Mujhe danto .. Tum jo bologi wo hi karungi par plz aise chup mat raho.. Aise sataow mat priya... Aise sataow mat plz .. Pressing the palm oh her against his hear he is sobbing silently ... He feels that her finger movement he stands up and looks at her ... Her hand is still on his hand.. Priyaaa.. Ram calls her in cracking tone... Priya is taking time to open her hand.. Her eyelashes is moving frequently.. Ram is holding his breath he is praying god to gives her streanth.. Finally priya ables to opens her eyes... her tried eyes meet with his teary eyes.. Seeing his tear she feels someone is pricked something on her hear.. Shakingly she raises her hand and wipes his tear,which makes him cry more... Priya nodded her head in negative.. Ram compose him self and bends down.. His lips is against her forehead.. Tears is rolling down for corner of his eyes and caressing her face.. Feeling his soft lips she closes her eyes tear also rolling from corner of her eyes... Ram steps little away from her..so that he can see her angelic face..
[4:57pm, 08/08/2014] Sush: [9:19pm, 07/08/2014] Apon: His eyes become wet... He does not want to sobs infront of her.. He has to be strong for herself.. He cant now let her happens anything...
The new light of the sun engulfed the darkness of the world... Bird starts to humming its own song... Tree is playing with the light wind.. Still a little darkness is lingering in the city... Ram is still sits beside her.. Doctor comes into the icu and tells ram that already two bag blood is transferred in her body.. Which will help her to gain some streanth... We need to observe her for 24 hour.. We will give her light food like soup..and some medicine... If her body response positivly we will shift her in normal ward After that we will going to again all the test.. So that we can identify she has a hole in her heart or not... Hearing this ram feels little relaxed.. He knows his priya will be fine soon... He places a kiss on her forehead and goes near the window.. He slides the curtain a side so that the sun ram comes into the room and gives his blessed to her... Ram comes out from the washroom after freshen up... He finds priya is still sleeping peacefully... He goes near her and starts to massage her scalp lightly and calling her softly "priya utho baby, kuch kha ke tumeh medicine bhi lena han plz utho... A sweet voice is ringing on her ear she is so familiar with this voice... A sweet smile creeps in her lips.. She slowly and steadily opens her beautiful eyes... Thr first sight that her eye capture is her man beautiful face, which is looking at her intensely... Looking at priya ram whisper good morning baby... Good morning ram priya also wish him back... In meantime nurse comes into the room to check priya and helps her in washroom... Nurse tells ram to go outside and waits there... Hearing this priya become sad, ram understand this he moves closes to her and whisper i m here near u... Don't be sad baby saying this he kisses on her cheeks... Priya smiles cutely...

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Edited by 123fiza - 11 years ago