'The best thing to hold onto in life is each other; | Part I : Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi. Well i'm Harshida and want to tell you i'm die hard fanatic of RaYa and i'm here to show you my writing skills.. soo i hope i write FF very well and makes you guys happy!

Your comments are important to me.. please do write 1 or 2 letters but please do write 😊
Happy reading 😃
Note : See i'm very very lazy when it comes to writing but i'll try to give you updates less then in 3 days! Sorry 😕

{ Prologue }

Ram Kapoor - He's in his 20 and he's most handsome guy in the college and he's unmature boy but he has no interest in girls.. b'coz he thinks girls are dramebaz and crying babies.. He hate girls but he loves his mother and sisters a lot.. He has two best buddies in college Tithi and Aryan (They're engaged) and Ram is like brother to them.
Priya Sharma - Hmmm She's a kinda tom boy girl in her science college and she's popular for her image! She's simple but spoil brat girl and she's queen in the college.. Everyone loves her and even her class teacher too .. She has one brother and she loves him a lot.. can't see him in any pain.. she can do anything for him and he also loves his sister a lot.. She has one best buddy and she's sister to her and her name is Zeel who's Aryan's sister.

Part I : Page 2
Thank you, Harshida
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OH so they were in college. ram is 20 only
sounds good.
just prologue. Update soon na.

I wanna read.

good to see ram's buddies are not vikram n neha seems like story is new.

go ahead and write more

I will be waiting

thanks for PM


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Interesting Prologue
looking forward for Raya college love story
continue soon
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wOw nyc prologue
continue soon
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nice prologue... looking forward to it :)
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Lovely start pls continue soon
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nice ...
waiting for part 1
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Nice storyline.ple update soon dear ;)
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Thank you very much guys for your positive feedback 😊
I'm updating Part I tonight 👍🏼
Edited by harshidakp - 11 years ago
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Part I

It was 4'o clock in the morning and Priya called Zeel's name loudly who was in the bathroom and taking bath but boom water was gone b'coz there was no more water in the tunk.. She was damn angry on the watchman and on Zeel too b'coz she was awake but she was busy chatting with her boyfriend and here Priya was for getting late for college.. she gave up and came out wrapping towel around her wet body and she saw Zeel was smiling looking at her phone and Priya nodded her head left to right and she bend down slowly and said Hello loudly in Zeel's ear and like zoom Zeel got down from the bed and looked at Priya head to toe in shock!

Zeel : What the hell Priya.. Why you came out like this? But you know what.. You're looking hot like this babe.. trust me if i was boy na then i would have kissed you right now and winked at Priya.
Priya was staring at Zeel badly.

Priya : Zeel you know what if you were a boy and you've kissed me na then i would have kicked ur ass badly babe and listen stop talking nonsense.. idiot there is no water in the tunk i think that's why i came out without taking my bath! Now enough i'm getting late for college.. If i'll be late na then Bharti ma'am will kill me for sure.. SHIT!!! Dammnnn .. I forgot about homework! I'll be dead today for sure!

Priya ran to the cupboard to bring her clothes and she wore her clothes.. She took her note-book and text-book and started writing her homework.

Zeel was not interested soo she lied down on the bed again and in the less time she was fast asleep! Priya completed her homework and looked at Zeel.. She smiled looking at the sight.. She came near Zeel and kissed on her forehead and covering her with duvet she grabbed her scooter keys from the desk and locking the main door of the house.. She left.

At 5 in the morning at Olive bar in mumbai.. A boy held glass of vodka in his hands and drank it in one ship.. He called out waiter loudly and asked him to bring him one more bottle of vodka.. waiter did what the boy asked for to do.. Waiter came with the bottle of vodka in his hand and gave it to the boy. Boy opened cap of bottle and drank vodka like crazily.. No one was there to stop him.. He was very sad at the day of evening.. That's why he was doing crazy thing!

Waiter asked boy to leave the palce b'coz it was late night! Boy looked at waiter and asked him in loud voice out of his control..

Boy : Do you bloody know who the hell i'm!? .. Do you know to whom you're asking to leave.. I'm bloody hell the Ram Kapoor and you're asking me to leave.. Ram was damn angry at waiter.. Waiter got scared of Ram and looked down.

Just then the door of bar opened and Priya entered in the bar.. She looked around for waiter.. Then she spotted waiter with boy.. She walked straight to the waiter and asked him if the bar is opened or not!? She got no reply from waiter.. Soo she asked him again and this time she looked at Ram.. She was in bit shock that was Ram Kapoor doing in the bar late night? but then she ignored and asked waiter for the table.. Got no reply from waiter she was about to walk off Ram spoke.

Ram : Being a girl.. You don't get scared entering in the bar in the night?? It's too risky for girls in city like Mumbai.. You should be careful.

Priya was smiling..

Priya : Mr. Ram.. Being a girl that doesn't mean girls can't enter the bar in latenight! .. I'm very strong inside and outside.. I know how to protect myself! .. Thank you for your concern.. You should be careful for yourself not me.. You're badly drunk.

Wihout listening Ram's reply she walked to the table which was in the corner and from there she clearly can see Ram..!!

Ram laughed and lokked at Priya and winked at her.. Priya also smiled looking at Ram.

Ram then walked to Priya's table asked if he can sit here?

Priya : Why..? Are you trying to flirt with me..?? No you can't sit here.. I don't talk to stranger!

Ram : Priya.. please.. I'm really really sorry for what i've done in the evening.. It was not my fault yaar.. I'm tired of your nonsense yaar.. Like dog i'm running around you but you're soo damn stubborn.. Bye from today i'm not going to talk to you in my life ever! .. You girls are soo damn irritated.. agghhh!

Ram kept the glass on the table and walked off from the bar in anger.. Priya was laughing hardly..

She said : Mr. The Ram Kapoor.. You've to pay hard what you've done last evening.. I'm not going forgive you in my life ever..

She then asked waiter for one glass of water.. She drank the water and she came out from the baar and left for college..

Ram was in the cab and thinking about how his life changed in just one day.. before last evening.. He was normal and happy.. but his one mistake changed his life badly!

Priya entered in the college.. parked her scooter at parking area and walked to the staff-room where she has to decide how to hurt Ram b'coz ever in his life he never ever do such mistake!!!


Please do post you comments if it's positive or negative but write you feedback 😊

Happy Reading, Harshida

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