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ssp_1992

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Posted: 11 years ago

#381

enjoyed reading this FF. eagerly wait for the next update. very well written.

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Jyothi

@joemahika

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Posted: 11 years ago

#382

Sorry for late reply actually iam out of town I read ur two parts at a time very funny but I feel very bad for priya anyways thanks for pm

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fan_forever

@fan_forever

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Posted: 11 years ago

#383

Uff... finally I m done reading all the updates... n now I want more...

Now u better update it soon or else😡 kk I know its not fair that first I m irregular n late in commenting n den I demand byt hey neel I m ur lil sis na... I can demand from u na.. right?

K I dont want to know ur ans 😆 as I m just gonna do that...

Pls update next part soon or😡

Now next point

Tell me who r u... rebirth of wch ancient story teller...out wth it... I mean everyone will agree wth me

Look at ur stories dear... they are awesome... well planned... no loop holes... perfect blend of steamy n emotional scenes.. above all timely updates supported by luring previews... wat else is left...

I m telling u... convert it into a novel... u ll surely need a big wala bank wallet

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akilagoud2

@akilagoud2

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Posted: 11 years ago

#384

awesome update👏
continue soon
thanks for pm

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armanz

@armanz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#385

Holaa 50 pages already..I am late. sorryy baby..

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Malati

@bpatil3

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Posted: 11 years ago

#386

Thx for the PM.

One thing i liked about the writing is what exactly a girl/woman expects from her partner.

Care,love, passion,protection sab kuch extra and even pampered by him on every silly n stupid wishes/reason.

How stupid n silly steps priya is taking to fly away,on the other hand ram is making her every move a big flop. Priya's state of mind n her stupid plans to go away n her thinking of sin and not giving what her hubby really deserves was written perfectly.

real life mein iss FF k jaisa partner hota hai kya??🤔

Neel is a sensible person. who helped ram. I loved the bus coming back to KM n ram telling bansi kaka madam thak gayi hogi 😆😆😆 too good

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anupam_dil

@anupam_dil

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Posted: 11 years ago

#387

OMG...that was really awesome...hmmm how romantic...super good...thanks for pm...and sorry could not reply for the previous update... out of town thi so culd not reply...but I loved both the parts...you are awesome⭐️⭐️ in this update especially...

continue ASAP

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sandhya

@lovelysakshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#388

Awesome update

Thanks for dedicating me......loved the update very very much.

I can imagine Priya's reaction when she open her eyes and saw herself in KM😆

lovely Ram gave bath to Priya...loved that part

yayy...Ram tear off the paper.

Priya is feeling bored and ram told him to watch Sony TV's crime patrol...😆

loved the raya's cute nok-jhok in between.

Priya normal lag rahi hai...bechari she trusted Neel...and neel in turn Ram ko sab bata rahi hai...but I like it...now Priya ko doubt ho gaya hoga ki yeh sab neel ne kiya hai...abb dekhna hai neel kya kehti hai

comes to hilarious part Bus scene🤣

OMG when she came out from the bus...she is standing in front of KM...Ram itna funny ho sakta hai...I cannot imagine...Priya ko maan lena chahiye ki woh Ram se dur kahi nahi jaa sakti..I can imagine how much she felt embarrassing when all KM and Sharma members are staring at her.

uff that dialogues...Bansi kaka...bag ander la dijiye aur kuch khane ko laayiye Priya travel karke thak gayi hogi...it was so so hilarious🤣..but I know Ram is very angry from inside...jo Ram apne room mein nikalne wale hai Priya par...Best of luck Priyu

thanks for PM🤗

please continue soon

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jineejiggs

@jineejiggs

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Posted: 11 years ago

#389

nice part, but I still can't agree with Ram about not disclosing such things to Priya, ek aadmi kabhi nahi samajh payega ek aurat ke dil pe kya beetti hain jab aisa kuch hota hain, how Priya is behaving is ver real, I still feel Ram should tell her now, kam se kam that guilt which Priya is carrying with her will wash away, anyways plz continue

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luvsakshi

@luvsakshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#390

Originally posted by: armanz
OMG dedicated for me..ohh am sweetly surprised. Thank you doc..
Thanks for keeping my name in your dedication list..
Thank you gals..
Thank you so much ..obviously na ..

Coming to the update:

I was just smiling all the way while reading the update..It was really really fantastic one..Kudos to writer and thanks a tonne for giving such a happy wala update.

Awww thank you so much for liking it .. Its our plesure ..

I can so imagine Priya's reaction when she woke up from her sleep and found herself in KM..Usska Golu is very intelligent..She tried to stop him from coming to Sharma house LOL he took her to KM..Its like jhatka to her but I Loved it.
Yup priyas expressions can worth watch ,,uska golu is veryy intellegint 😉
its for her he can do anything

He tore the papers and gaveher..
I know you will love it 😉

He gave her bath so sweet of him..I do know some hubbies do help their wifes in real life too..U put it here it was really caring and sweet.
Yah he is sweetly given bath to her as the way you are smiley 😉I so loved the smiley .. simply awesome ...muhaaa

Priya was getting bored and Ram was teasing her
Being in room priya was getting bored Ram is trying to make her cool by his teasings ..

Ram knows very well how to deal her. Whatever plan she has he will have his own ways to break it after all he is The Ram Kapoor the business tycoon.
But I was 😆when she got down bus and found out it was KM..But ultimate punch was Bansi kaka , Priya madam raat bhar journey karke bahuth thak
gayi hogi , jara uske saaman leke aao , our jaldi nashta bhi tayyar karo .. I
But for this Neel should be appreciated.👏 Cant you control your wife..😆

Ram very well knows how to deal his lovely wife /// agree with you after all he is The Ram kapoor ... lol even i rofled reading it again and again .. yah ultimate is his dialogue 😆

It was funny and Ram was at his best in humour..Aise tho Priya jaldi normal hojayegi I mean both physically and mentally ram se ladthe ladthe
Thank you for the good words ..
she will get well soon ..

I am loving it..Superbly written and yeah I loved the subtle romance and knok jhok too.

Continue soon.

Thanks for pm.