NEW OS: An Unwanted Marriage - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome!!! 😳 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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very nice os treat to read u r amazing i love to read ur FF's thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
lovely os ...i soo love to read ur writing...vryyy nice...superb os..cn we expect more such surprizezzz plzzz...thnkuuu...and thnxx fr the pm..!!
Edited by mishraapoorva14 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: armanz

Sorry Darling I read it yesterday itself but coz of busy I couldnt comment..



Yup ..I know I got your PM..nO SORRYS .. 😛

Sorry but I was all the while when I was reading.
Frankly Neel you two are awesome A for you two for penning this and binging this here.Loved it..

Awww thank you so much .. i know i know you will be grinning lik a fool 😆
and Thank you so much ,hugs to you too 🤗Thanks to Giri especially 😉
to get married and here these two married against their wish for their parents sake.

Yah they married just for parents sake but landed in love land finally 😛
And DIVORCE application the next day itself.. these two are impossible.
But their parents are too intelligent they made all arrangements to push them to live together


Rofls .. these two are impossible souls on earth and their parents are more impossible than these two 🤣

ram and cooking!!!See he burnt his hand.. but when Priya is there why to worry she will manage everything


Awww where you are getting these smileys from
loved them .. choo cute //.Yah when priya is there why he should burn his hands 😆
So they were hating each other fighting with each other with out knowing that they were falling in love..Bed wala scenes tho rather funny hai.Right end Priya ka Left end Ram ka..
..Awesome.

(wasnt there any couch in their home???😉)



Yah they dont know until they fall in love
right priya ka left Ram ka ..There wasn't any couch in the room ..😆

Her pain moved him..so he was getting attracted to her..LOL..too good.cupid was playing main role..hai na..

Yah he is attracting towards him anfd cupid was palying main role here ..


And the accident thing was final matter..she realized she cant live with him..

And the divorce was granted!!!Then they learnt their feelings
Yah soon they realized they can't live each other so the unwanted marrige turned to be happy one

Waahhh kya track hai..Fell in love with its..So they expressed their feelings ..and became one..

Aww thank you for liking the track
and they beacme one 😛

And now she is pregnant...Awesome yaar.Let Happiness be bestowed on them forever and ever.
I Loved the story to bits..

Yah now she is pregnant and they lives happy everafter
Thank you so much for liking the story


It was mindboggling and truely amazing..so many twists and turns..

Keep giving us more like this.

I know how much you love this OS\and im waiting eagerly for your comment from yesterday
and you made my day buddy..Love youu 🤗

PS:Neel for you my special wishes...

Writer: You are simply amazing..keep rockinggg gal.





Viji..Iam gonna kill you for that last tag of boss day wala 😡

From writer :Thank you so much ,muhaa back to you 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45

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Viji..Iam gonna kill you for that last tag of boss day wala 😡

From writer :Thank you so much ,muhaa back to you 😛

Really am a mad fan of this story..i will gv.. u an advice I mean wil pm u.
Last lines Neel..Come Kill Me am waiting
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
@Viji
Thnaks for your Pm
and i will do the honours
and last lines tho
I will send someone to kill you '😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: sss283

😲

am in a daze
sooo sweet 😳
when i started reading it ... i just couldn't slow down...i had to rush to finish it
then come back and read all the details
phewww so exciting
got an os after sooo long
lovely os ❤️🤗



Subbbu meri jaan
Love you

aagyayi aap
Thank you
I know you wil like this story
and as i guessed you read bit very fast
may i know howmnay times you read it
Thank you so much for the lovely comment


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Posted: 11 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: sss283

gudiyaaa
😲 hehe itne di baad if m hi bol rhi
hehe hi 😆😆😆



Subbu .. you are impossible girl 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49


Thank you 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50


Its my plesure lakshmi
😛


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