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Posted: 11 years ago

#401

Originally posted by: BALHLOVER
first of all ..
ALL THE BEST for ur upcoming performance ..and
abt the update aweee Priya cn sense his love yippe
superb
just loved it .. now plzzz confession thank u for ur pm

thanks for commenting😊, thanks for the wish, confession will be very soon, keep reading, pleasure is all mine

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Posted: 11 years ago

#402

Originally posted by: sssabcd
very nice. Pls make ram cnfes soon.. Waiting fr that..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#403

Originally posted by: 123fiza

Wow superb update 👏
loved it to bits...
nicely described..
ufff mob ko abhi ring hona tha 😕
priya is waiting for ram to confess 😳
thanks fr d pm..cont soon

thanks for commenting😊, ab kya kare pyaar ke raaste me sab ko taang ara ne ka shauq jo hain😉, don't worry inn dono ka confusion kuch style se hoga😳, will continue soon, pleasure is all mine

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Posted: 11 years ago

#404

Originally posted by: lpsakshi
thnks for pm me and aftr reading ur update wu goosebumps just loved it muahh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#405

Originally posted by: bpatil3
Thx for the PM.
So unknowingly priya is getting close to ram. and her fear whenever ram tries to be around her, showing care, concern ,protection and the love which she is not sure about perfectly penned down.
Ram has lust for priya more than love I suppose. but the way he is making things easy for her is truly justifiable by his every single move.
Only one thing i didn't appreciate is the Bikini part, i don't think so any indian hubby will ever like to take his wife in the bikini outfit outside his room. 😛

But a total rayalicious update , I loved the cave scene and ram loosing himself in her , and priya's heart beats were so fast. but the driver and next was the phone😆😆

Liked priya mingling with him easily, taunting him u had brought me here , I suppose you know better what would be our next visiting place👍🏼😆 priya never change.

Good one

thanks for commenting😊, yes she is confused with all these expressions of Ram, she is still doubtful and it is very natural on her part, love and lust are the two sides of a same coin, Ram is truly in love with her but yes at the same time he craved her not only her heart but her body also but that is the extension of love, isn't it, people in love always wanted physical pleasure too, Ram wanted Priya to wear the bikini as he wanted to see her in that , Indian men may be traditional but in my story Ram Kapoor is definitely not but he will never make Priya a show off thing, it was in Seychelles where no one will find them and moreover she was secure in his arms so nothing to worry. Ram and Priya are coming close and that is very much evident from their behaviour and body language, hope they find themselves soon, thanks for liking the part, pleasure is all mine. CONGRATULATIONS! on becoming IF Rockerz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#406

Originally posted by: zeylanica
All the best for ur programme dear ..n it was a fabulous update ... very well written ...
So Priya can feel d love for her in his eyes ... Poor Ram confess karte karte reh gaya ... waiting for the confession now...
Continue soon n thanks for d PM

thanks for commenting😊, thanks for the wish, Ram confess karega and that will be very interesting one, keep reading, pleasure is all mine

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Posted: 11 years ago

#407

Originally posted by: luvsakshi
Another good update ,,,, simply superb the place is
i loved it .. annd the way both are attracting to each other was just perfectly shwn
waiting for more
cont soon

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Posted: 11 years ago

#408

Originally posted by: lalmadhu
Hi Ujjaini,

Awesome update. Raya brimming with love neatly penned down. Bikini part was awesome.😉😳 but u always stop in and interesting point...😭

Waiting for the next. Thanks for the pm.

ALL THE BEST dear for ur performance. ROCK THE STAGE GIRL.👍🏼

thanks for commenting😊, thanks for the wish, thanks for liking the part specially the bikini part, am really glad, keep reading, pleasure is all mine