FF: The Circle of Life : Part 14 Pg 39

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Nisha

@shut

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Posted: 11 years ago

#101

First of all sry for not commenting for so long...

Nd thanks for all the PMs...

The update as always was fab...👏

Ur friend really knows how 2 woo her writers..

I mean always a different concept nd that 2 with so many emotions...

For of u r just fab...⭐️

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akilagoud2

@akilagoud2

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Posted: 11 years ago

#102

nice update
continue soon
thanks for pm

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contactcharu

@contactcharu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#103

nice update
continue soon
thanks for pm

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Cute_Saakshii12

@Cute_Saakshii12

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Posted: 11 years ago

#104

Wow superb update!!!!
thanks 4 pm
and continue soon...

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Sanjukta

@BALHLOVER

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Posted: 11 years ago

#105

again i found this line is so touchy love is the most expensive thing you can get..

really thank u this ff..as it unque and too much help full for all .. throught ur writing i can feel their pain..

thank u shanaya for ur pm ..and sharing

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vironikajain

@vironikajain

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#106

Read 2 updates together..
Superbb updates..
Story is moving perfectly in a right direction..few lines in every update re just incredible..hats off to Neha for these thoughts.. 👍🏼
Loved Priya's characterization..her thoughts, simplicity, nature.. 👏 convo with Ram...
Ram is in awe of Priya's thoughts..
These 15-20 days will gonna change their lifes for forever..hope its for good only nd unknowingly Ram doesn't hurt Priya like the fear everybody has living in that place..
I dont think Ram will tell Priya about documentary..but looking forward to how Ram will change the climax of the movie in script...which he will surely now..i guess
Thanx for pm..

Edited by vironikajain - 11 years ago

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Krutika

@kaparikh1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#107

Finally an update... That was so good... But in this FF of urs I am loving priyas dialogue... Keep updating faster...lol... Thanks for the PM Shanaya...

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vishakupp

@vishakupp

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Posted: 11 years ago

#108

Wonderful update.👏 Dialogues are superb. I especially liked this one " Priya: No..i just belong to a different world..here love is the most expensive thing you can get.."

Looking forward to the next. Please update soon😊

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Dsudipa

@Dsudipa

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#109

very nice update,loved Priya's last dialogue, waiting 4 nxt,pls continue soon,thx 4 PM

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Malati

@bpatil3

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Posted: 11 years ago

#110

Thx for the pm.

How absolutely true love is the costliest thing which they crave for. Its really touching priya's each n every word is of her experience of life, how did many girls got into this work, its the fact heart wrenching too, how they have been ditched.😭

Ranjit mehra has got some connection with priya I strongly feel.

Very very well written.

Superb I m dumbstruck the way priya is been portrayed, I m really respecting these women more than before after readinf ur ff.