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luvsakshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#501

Originally posted by: rayaBALH
do chaar aur maarti ashwine ko...marwa hi deti toh bhi chalta mere liye but finally no more him na????? doubt hota hai aap writers log kaha kha ghumate ho story ko hehe on a happy note raya together aur kya chahiye lekin sad part whats it now???????????? continue ASAP :)

From Girija :

Ram already gave enough ,youdo know how his punchs will be,

RayaBALH i just want to inquist here how the things were happening in really , i mean situations and the way humans behave in this generation especially ... but any way as it is fiction undoubtedly i will end the story with a happy note .but sad part have to include to finish up the story ..

Thank you so much for the wonderful feedback.

From Neel

Thank you so much dear , im glad to see your comment ..

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luvsakshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#502

Originally posted by: jineejiggs
this part is so nicely penned down, the trust is the ultimate keyword in any relationship and RaYa have trusted each other. I really appreciate Ram's way to handle such delicate issue, Ashwin was harassing Priya but at the same time Shruthi was his wife and it is the most difficult part for any woman to watch out the infidelity of her man, I really liked this part and plz don't hesitate to pen down ur thoughts, we are all ready to read that, continue ASAP

From Girija :

Yes dear , Trust is the ultimate keyword in any relation ship .. Thank you the way Ram reacted is my way that any man can think in their own way to protect female in such a manner that she should not suffer.

You pointed it out ,in place of Sruthi ,what a wife can do ..

To forgive him or to fight with him or divorce him ...

She wont think beyond this when ashwin pointed out Shruthi herself kept her shoes in this phace.she betrayed her closefriend and married him without letting know.

Now she feels disgusting and searching for other options for her living life ..

Thank you for the encouragement im already on the way to write in my thoughts .. thank you

From Neel

Thank you so much jaini ....

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luvsakshi

@luvsakshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#503

Originally posted by: jineejiggs
thanks for PM

You are most welcome dear ..

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sandhya

@lovelysakshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#504

lovelu update

meine jo jo socha tha kuch bhi nahi hua😆...

Ram knew about Ashwin..and Priya already said all this to Ram.

Shruti who message ram and obviously Neel shocked hogi😆.

but I want Ram to kill this Ashwin...😡. how he can talk like this.😡

but as the writer said trust is very important in any relation ...I like Priya said truth to Ram before.

please continue the story as decided by you. 😊

sorry for late...please continue and thanks for PM

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luvsakshi

@luvsakshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#505

Originally posted by: fan_forever
hey sweetie,
I hope you understand that this frnd of urs is little slow in replying... as most of the time I read ffs via phone and its difficult to reply frm there

so sry for late replies

but
but

but

but

as usual... u were awesome... hott and believe me u have an amaging skill of writing hot and sexy thngs so skilfully that it doesnt looks vulgar...

and now abt ur saddest part... i dnt know... wat to say

- i would like u to go head wth original story line as intended by u
- pls dnt make raya separate as i am an emotional fool so I dnt want to cry and trust me i do cry after reading stories/ff/ss...

FRom Girija :

Thank you so much ,im glad to hear its not vulgar ,...Loved to write RAYA love in the way every one loves but this time we are more concious about hot updates so will post in blogs .so no worries or contrversies ...

Thank you so much for the support ,will write in my thoughts ..

If you cry after reading the ffs than this is ggoing to be one of that but its not RAYA separation .

just the reality hitting in this story .. will unfold after two updates ...

Thank you so much ..

From Neel :

Hi dear .. Thanks for appearing on the forum atleast now ..

hope everything is ok with you ..Yah i know you will leave comment whenever you come

Thank you so much for the comments ...

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luvsakshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#506

Originally posted by: sandhyasn
lovelu update
meine jo jo socha tha kuch bhi nahi hua😆...

Ram knew about Ashwin..and Priya already said all this to Ram.

Shruti who message ram and obviously Neel shocked hogi😆.

but I want Ram to kill this Ashwin...😡. how he can talk like this.😡

but as the writer said trust is very important in any relation ...I like Priya said truth to Ram before.

please continue the story as decided by you. 😊

sorry for late...please continue and thanks for PM

From Girija :

Thank you so much Sandhya , Yes Ram knew about this i kept it s a secret wanna know readers feelings too .Rofls😆 yah obviously Neel shocked ...

Jokes apart ..But ashwin kind of ppl can talk and act can low to any cheap level .

Im going to give update soon with my thoughts .Thank you so much for the feedback.

From Neel :

Thank you so much sandhya, I can understand weekend hai tho obviously you will be busy

its my plesure to give pm.

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819504

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Posted: 11 years ago

#507

Mee...finally here..!!😛

what an update ji..!! Super awsome..!!👏

loved it..!!❤️

Well kya boley hum yahan now..!! U gave a surprise dear..!!

It was all full proof plan made by Ramji..!!with shruti ofcourse..!!
We did'nt even thought in dreams to ke you would show up priyaji's confession abt all this in a flashback..!!( this is why i'm a reader and you are writer..😛)
ramji was hurt by priyaji hiding dis bt knw how she may hve gone through..!!made her promisd him in futre no hiding at all..!! 👏

Great work ji..!! This short short twist make a story more grippng and interertng..!!

That b*****d even after hell beaten up by ramji did nt stop his filthy mouth from saying crap words..🤬
Waise ramji did give a nice treatment to him..!!👍🏼
Jst for shruti sake he left him..🤢

priyaji state was..!😔lovd how ramji consold her..!!let her cried heart out and he himself shed silent tears..😭
loved their love..trust for eachother..!!

And upcming update gnna be sad one toh i have no issues ji..!!go with the way u have plan..!!
I love wenevr u give some reality touch in ur story..!!😃

cntinue soon..!!thanx fr the pm..!!🤗

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vironikajain

@vironikajain

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Posted: 11 years ago

#508

Fab update di...
Ashwin is so sick, cheap nd disgusting😡..perfect eg of black dot on our society..bitter truth that such ppl still exist.. 🤢
Reading his cheap nd filthy language..i felt like punching him hard...its good Ram beated Ashwin..he totally deserves it..thanks for full filling this wish to beat Ashwin..
So Priya did told him everything at that night...it was a good surprise..
Loved Ram's move to involve Shruti in it.. 👏
Priya has gone through a lot but Ram's support nd love is always there with her as her strength..lets see how Ram will bring her out of this..
Thanx for pm..

Msg from Girija di is looking scary...but i m looking forward to it..penned down what u have actually planned for this..i m in for it., 👍🏼