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luvsakshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#491

Originally posted by: .pia_12.
Awesome update
love Ram:-):-):-)
Continue soon
thanks 4 pm

Thank you so much dear .. will try to continue soon dear

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luvsakshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#492

Originally posted by: zeenathsheikh8
👏 Awesome update,Ram found a good way to handle the situation.
About the sad part, continue as you have planned but please don't separate RaYa
please continue updating ,
thanks for the pm:)

From Girija :

Thank you so much .. I have written what exactly common man do in that type of situation.

Green signal aagaya tho i have to pen it down ... There won't be any separation ..

From Neel:

Thank you so much ..

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luvsakshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#493

Originally posted by: BALHLOVER
Congratulations dear
i love to read all of ur work..and custody was my fav..and really love this
one too..and Yes..love this romantic..RAM kapoor

From Girija

Thank you so much dear ,will take your opinion in count ..custody is coming p shortly ...

will try to put some romantic shades of Ram in next update ...

Thank you so much sanj...

Cheers

Neel

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luvsakshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#494

Originally posted by: youandme272000
Omg !!!!
Dts al i can say...

Thank you so much dear ..Im glad you enjoyed ...

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luvsakshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#495

Originally posted by: sinalbest
Hi Neel Di.. 😊

As usual superb.. 👏 ⭐️
Well execution by writer.. 👏 ⭐️
Would love to see next update wat writer wants to show.. 😛

thanks for pm
continue soon... 😊

From Girija :

Thank you Sagar ,counted in and im happy to see positive respone from your side ..

From Neel ;

Thanks bro ..try to update soon

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luvsakshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#496

Originally posted by: armanz
Superb Neel.. this update was with surprises..
Yaar public forum hai...😡otherwise I would have bad mouthed him very very badly..how dare is he to touch Priya 😡and speak about her in such way😡..he got very nicely..Kya maara Ram..dont let him open his mouth ever again in his life..he shouldnt even dare to utter Priya..
😡
Sruthi!!!OMG I didn't expect this..first surprise yaar..good she has learnt about him.It was a nice move to bring sruthi here.

Okk then Priya did tell to Ram...I was surprised as it was kept in suspense.Thank God she did.

Ramm...no words to praise him..it was too good that he told sruthi everything and asked her to keep an eye on Asshwin..business mind hai na...well planned.

Priya...she suffered a lott let her be at peace in Ram's embrace..

Neel..silent spectator..😆
It was mindblowing part..loved it totally esp Ram beating Asshwin..he threatened her..hope he wont come again.

PS..Writer told abt something sad..even if it would be painful to read I still want to know whats she going to give to us.

From Girija :

Hi Akka , Yes Ram has business mind plan tho bantha hai na ..

In the serial even after flirting with Priya ,shruthi helped him but still they showed them together ,ofcourse mANY CAN THINK its for good .

but i feel in such type of cases sruthi type girls losing her self respect and living with them

so i wanted to show strong lady and correct move by her atleast now ..

Thanks for pointing it out ..

Im counting you too .. yes it is bit painfull but i will write hence i have prepared the story alredy ..

From Neel

Thank you so much viji ...

yah yaar im really silent spectator 😆

I loved the part to bits ...

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luvsakshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#497

Originally posted by: iLuvRamKapoor
Hi Di once again Happy Anniversary di
Hope you enjoyed a lot😊
Coming to your update Ashwin is so cheap and disgusting fellow Especially his Filthy Language ewww even i am feeling to punch him on face monkey kahin ka😡
Chalo mere Hero ne kardiya jo mein karna chahthi thi He shoud hit ashwin like a foot ball
I like the way you gave everyones POV i.e. in FB's👏
and dont change your story idea pen it the way you want❤️
Will Be Eagerly waiting now some Beautiful raYa moments plz bahut dukh saha priya ne tho kushi bhi do😳

From Girija

Thank you Mani for the lovely feed back .. counting you too in i m not going to change my story .Thank you so much .. and YOur hero is alaways there by priya side ...

Thank you atlast you gave me clarification about the Fbs ,so readers were not confused . Raya moments are in next 2 updates .. stay tuned

From Neel

Thank you so much Choti .. yup had a wonderful day .. Thank you

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rayaBALH

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Posted: 11 years ago

#498

do chaar aur maarti ashwine ko...marwa hi deti toh bhi chalta mere liye but finally no more him na????? doubt hota hai aap writers log kaha kha ghumate ho story ko hehe on a happy note raya together aur kya chahiye lekin sad part whats it now???????????? continue ASAP :)

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jineejiggs

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Posted: 11 years ago

#499

this part is so nicely penned down, the trust is the ultimate keyword in any relationship and RaYa have trusted each other. I really appreciate Ram's way to handle such delicate issue, Ashwin was harassing Priya but at the same time Shruthi was his wife and it is the most difficult part for any woman to watch out the infidelity of her man, I really liked this part and plz don't hesitate to pen down ur thoughts, we are all ready to read that, continue ASAP

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fan_forever

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Posted: 11 years ago

#500

hey sweetie,

I hope you understand that this frnd of urs is little slow in replying... as most of the time I read ffs via phone and its difficult to reply frm there

so sry for late replies

but

as usual... u were awesome... hott and believe me u have an amaging skill of writing hot and sexy thngs so skilfully that it doesnt looks vulgar...

and now abt ur saddest part... i dnt know... wat to say

- i would like u to go head wth original story line as intended by u

- pls dnt make raya separate as i am an emotional fool so I dnt want to cry and trust me i do cry after reading stories/ff/ss...