Jeevan Saathi, a SS on RaYa, updated on page 42

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Sanjukta

@BALHLOVER

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Dristi nice concept...eagerly waiting for the rest of all...

Ujjaini thank u dear..for sharing..and can u pm me plz..

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vironikajain

@vironikajain

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Nice start..
Slap for Rajat in first update itself.. 😆
Thanx Drishti nd Ujjaini..

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sampa123

@sampa123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Dhristi yaar as usual too good ..maine pehle vi apki ff rkr ma read kia ha.n i know ur writing always superb n romantic hoti ha..jo mujhe bohot pasand ha..n a maine apko pehle bhi bola ha..n Ujjoini pls yaar dhristi ki ff vi pm kr dia karo na plsss agr possible ho to.pls yaar.aj a suddenly dikh gaya mujhe.n cntinue soon

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anupam_dil

@anupam_dil

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

nice story line continue soon

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leena

@leena04

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

awww a very intesrting Intro looking forwrad to the story it will be awesome for sure Plz PM for next update will gonna go read first part...

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leena

@leena04

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Part 1
ok so it was all abt the past intearsting in this story Rajat is jerk no intesrted in him waiting for next do update soon... plz PM me next time if u can...

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Dsudipa

@Dsudipa

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Hey Dhristi nice start & interesting story and Ujjaini thx dear 4 posting this SS here, pls continue soon, pls PM me nxt time if possible

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jineejiggs

@jineejiggs

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

a short preview is here, hope you all will enjoy

Kartik-di aur yeh hai mere bade bhai vikram bhai aur ram bhai...priya
turned n saw a pair of brown eyes staring at her...

Ram-hi i m ram...ram kapoor he extended his hand towards priya...

Priya-hi i m priya sharma plz to meet u...

Kartik-aur priya di yeh hai meri ma krishna kapoor...priya bent down n
touch her feet...

Kk-khush raho beta aur sada sukhi raho...

Kartik-lets dance di...

Priya-kyun tum natasha ko chor kar mere saath dance karoge..(teasing him)

Kartik-di main toh yun hi puch raha tha i knw u will ask me to dance
with nuts...

Priya-badmaash kahin ka n pull his ears...