OS:- Raya: Naraazgi se I love you tak... :- Part- 6 : Page - 21 - Page 12

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: .sangs123.

lovely updt dearr
thanks for pm
cont soon
sorry for late reply for 2 parts


Thanks so much...
Your Welcome...
Will Continue soon...
Don't be sorry dear...and thanks once again for liking it...😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Dsudipa

read all parts in ur OS in one go, its wonderful, Priya has asked him very valid questions, hope Priya will be fine, pls continue soon,pls PM me nxt part if possible


Thanks so much for liking it...
She has to fine for her Ram...
Will continue soon...
Have already send you the buddy request so that I can easily PM you...😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi.. Friends ...
Here goes the Fifth part of the OS, but again , its an unedited one, I just wrote it in one go and posted it here, so really sorry for spelling plus grammatical mistakes. I my self have not read it once so sorry for all mistakes...
Hope you guys enjoy reading the romantic roller coaster ride of Raya love and give your comments on the same.

Thank You😃


PART - 5

After three four minutes later doctor comes outside and ram steps to him almost rushing...


Ram ( In very nervous tone, scared at heart but still holding faith on his love) : Doctor...How's priya...is she fine...is she conscious ...what has happened to my priya...woh thik toh hain naa ...can I meet her...I want to meet her...how's she...arrey app kuch bol kyun nahi rahe hain...kuch toh boliye...


Doctor ( In calm voice and asking him to calm down ) : Mr. Kapoor, please relax... App mujhe bolne ka moka toh dijiye ...


Ram( again in anxious tone ) : Haan toh boliye naa...is she fine...can I meet her...


Doctor looks at him and gives him a calm smile.


Doctor ( smiling at him ) : Yes Mr. Kapoor you can meet her...she is conscious now ...it's due to smoke , which clog in her lungs and she got unconscious ...now the smoke is out of her lungs and she can breathe perfectly...she is absolutely fine Mr. Kapoor...You can meet her...Please go inside and meet her...


Ram gives a huge smile ear to ear when he listen the doctor's statement, He closes his eyes tightly while a drop of pure water of happiness descends from his eye, smile was not leaving his lips that moment , it seems that he is thanking God umpteenth times for saving his love when his are shut and his lips are in smiling position.


Ram ( Full happy while his heart is singing a beautiful symphony ) : Thank You doctor ...Thank you so very much...


Doctor ( smiling while he patted his right shoulder lightly ) : Go...Mr. Kapoor meet her...she wants to meet you...she was asking about you , that are you ok or not...You can take her home in some time...I will get the discharge papers ready in few minutes...


Ram happy and excited to meet priya and doctor's statement that , she asked about him and want to meet him has flew him to ninth cloud...smiling he nodded at and then come inside the priya's ward while doctor walks away to check other patents.


As he opens the door he looks directly to priya and priya lifts her eye lids slowly to see her husband...A tear drop escape from her beautiful eyes...at heart she is happy to see her husband all fit and fine...he comes inside and watches she is seating on the bed while nurse sees him and then his wife and giving both of them a calm smile she walks out of the ward...


After nurse went out, Ram sits on the bed in front of her and takes her in his embrace in a jiffy...he holds her tightly in his arms while his eyes again become wet ...


Ram ( controlling his emotions while he is enveloping her tightly in his macho arms, in emotions filled voice ) : Tum thik ho naa...(he comes apart to her face while still holding her in his strong arms ) : Priya ...tum thik ho naa...main...main...bohot darr gaya tha...mujhe laga tum phirfe muhje choord ke chali jaogi...( cupping her face in his both palms , while she can clearly see his red swollen freshly lubricated eyes filled with emotions, he watches her and draws his hands on her both arms then legs and then again back while repeating the same question in his concern voice filled with love ) : Tum thik ho naa...


She watches him with tranquility, both sees into each other eyes deeply in love, she notices his pair of red swollen wet eyes which are giving testimony that he is crying all while this time , her eyes also becomes moist to see her husband in that condition and that he loves her so much...her eyes fell on his right palm which is covered with bandage. She touches his hand lightly and directly looks at him ...


Priya ( with moist eyes and anxiety and in concern voice) : Mr. Kapoor you got hurt...aapko chot lagi hai...aap...aap...thik toh hain naa...


Ram ( he lifts his hand which have bandage towards her slowly and in concern voice ) : priya ...priya ...relax ...I'm totally fine...it's just a small bruise... (and proudly told her while giving a slight smile) and I have taken tetanus injection also ...so don't worry ...you just relax...( again coming to previous talk as he fondles her face in his both palms while he wipe her tear from his thumb , he sees deeply in her eyes with all his love and in concern voice) : Tum thik ho naa...


Priya (she slightly smiles while seeing into her husband dark brown eyes deeply with love with her moist eyes and ready to fall pure water from them, in slow calm voice filled with love) : I'm fine Mr. Kapoor...


They both covered each other in one another's embrace with all their love and emotions...both are shedding tears on each other's shoulders. They both are giving each strength to each other while Ram caresses her head softly with one hand and enveloping his another hand around her , priya holds him tightly in her embrace as her both hands are on his back. When they both get calm they both come out of the hug and stares each other into one another's eyes while they still holding each other in their arms...they both wiped each other tears while shooking their heads in a negative position and asking one another not to cry...


Priya broke the scilence...


Priya ( she gulps some air and then in slow voice) : Mr.Kapoor...


Ram stops her in mid sentence by putting his right index finger on her lips...


Ram ( in voice full of love yet in remorse tone while looking into her eyes) : Priya please kuch mat bolo...main janta hoon ki maine tumhara trust break kiya hai ...main yeh bhi janta hoon ki maine tumhe bohot hurt kiya hai...main tumhain batana chata tha par darr lagta tha ki kahin tum mujhse dur naa chali jaoo then suhani ne bhi kaha ki abhi tumhe koi aisi waisi baat na bataoon jise tumhe stress hoo...( he looks into her eyes deeply with love and yet apologetically) : Priya please mera yakin karo main bohot darr gaya tha...darr gaya tha ki agar sach pata chalne par tumhen kuch ho gya toh...( he her hands in his ) do baar tumhe koh chukka hoon abb aur himmat nahi hain tum se dur rahene ki...( tears starts escaping from his handsome eyes slowly) : I know main bohot selfish sound kar raha hoon ...par yakin karo main tumhe khona nahi chahata ...( he wipes his tears and gathers some courage to speak further as he continues to look at her) : agar tum uss din coma se bahar nahi aati aur agar main shaadi ( he closes his eyes in pain as if he is feeling that situation which doesn't happen but it's imagination is also too much painful and tears trickled from his eyes ) ...Priya mujhe yeh sochte huye bhi darr lagta hai... Ki tum mujhse dur ...( he again shut his eyes tightly as if gulping his sacristy while tears don't stop to fell down from his eyes) : tab shayad main marr ...


Priya frees her right palm from his grip instantly and immediately puts it on his mouth to shut him for uttering such unholy words, he looks at her and found her she is crying with him and shooking her head in negative as she is asking him not to occur such words again, he kisses her palm lightly and took it his hand while he gives her a slight smile , they both look deeply in each other's eyes...


Priya ( with all her love and gulping her emotions ) : Mr. Kapoor main janti hoon ki app sirf aur sirf mujhse pyaar karte hain ...app ne muhje sach nahi batya and it hurts me like hell ... Mujhe bohot bura laga...bohot taklif bhi hui...par main yeh bhi janti hoon ki appne yeh faisla apne dil pe pathar rakh ke liya hoga... Muhje laga ki sahayd main app logo ke beech main agayi hoon...app logo ki chalti hui life ke beech aagayi hoon...( all through this tears have not stopped to fell from her eyes ) : I really hope Mr. Kapoor ki kash mujhe kabhi hosh hi nahi aata...( he hears her all shocked and tear dashes from his eyes also as he gets immense pain with this statement of her's while she continues crying)...ya meri yaardash kabhi wappis nahi aati...In fact sabse achaha hota ki main marr...


Ram over voices her once again to shut her mouth...


Ram ( in loud voice which contains anger of love , he holds her from shoulders and pulls her towards him while looking into her eyes) : yeh kaya keh rahi ho tum...tumeh kuch andaja bhi hai...tum aisa soch bhi kaise sakti ho...tumahari life meri jindigi hai aur main apni jindigi bachane ke liye kuch bhi kar sakta hoon...kuch bhi...( in anger also his tears are escaping from his eyes ) main janta hoon mujhse galti hui hai...par main uss galti ko sudhaarunga bhi...but tumhari cost par nahi...tum meri saans ho ...ek baat yaad rakhna priya ...jab tak tumhari saanse chal rahi hain tabhi tak meri bhi dil ki dhadkanne chalenegi...tumhare bina main nahi jeena chahata aur naa hi jiyuga...I promise you that I will win your trust back but please don't think also to go away from me...I will not be able to tolerate this...( with this he takes her in his embrace tightly)


Priya ( she envelops him in her arms tightly and let him calm down , tears are trickling from both the pair of eyes, she speaks with all her love ) : Mr. Kapoor ...I love You...(with this he comes to face her and looks deeply into her eyes, she wipes his tears ) ... I love you Mr. Kapoor and I trust you...



Note : Guys next part will be the last part, actually I want to post it with this only but then it would have become a lengthy part and would not be able to post it in one go, that's why decided to post it in two parts...also in next part you all will come to know that why priya's trust is back on her lover cum husband and lots more which also contains the touch of naughtiness and teasing in their love . So the next part is ready but will post it after you guys will complete reading this part and till then you all can also guess what's the reason that her trust is back on him...Till then enjoy reading...and have fun...😃


Will Continue soon...😊

Edited by devmohan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome updt full of emotions
so beautifully written
plz make it an ff if possible
thanks for pm
cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
so beautiful and emotiinal update...loved it...good that priya has forgiven ram...lovely...continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
good one priay is fine and so ram
happy they talked and cleared their mu
continue soon waiting for next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb update
lovely
waiting 4 next part please update soon ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow very emotional and beautiful loved it 👏👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing...Loved...Loved...Speechless...Wish Show also like this...Pls Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: .sangs123.

awesome updt full of emotions
so beautifully written
plz make it an ff if possible
thanks for pm
cont soon


Thanks so much dear...
Your welcome...
Will continue soon...😃

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