OS - PYAAR KI EK HAASIN RAAT, update part 2 on page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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hello everyone, this time am back with a very sweet OS from one of my good friend Dhrishti, I met her in twitter, she is a big fan of my writings and she too loves to read all the fictions here in the Forum. She is unable to register herself here so asked my help to post her one of the writing, so here it goes


PYAAR KI EK HAASIN RAAT


credit to original writer : Dhrishti Kapadia

Part 1

It ws going to be 1year today priya had arranged a small party in the
house wid close frnds n family..saying it was their 1st year of
wedding


it ws small surprise for ram as she hd nt seen him for a month..



Ram hs gone to US due sum work regarding business..



Priya noticed that guests r coming n suddenly a smile apear on her
face coz any tym ram flight is going to land...



When her phone rang she went runner to corner n picked up the phone n
heard his familiar,stunning n husky voice...


Ram-hi priya i m here in mumbai...



Priya-ram i m so excited aur thanks aapki kasam ke liye i cnt cum even
tn pick u up at airport( saying she felt sad)



ram-coz i dnt u to cm as i want to gv u suprise..


Priya-let see ram who gves better surprise than she hang the call...



Then ram enter the car which ws outside the airport n left for km




Priya ws busy wid the guest.as she felt better to serve it herself to
guests...one of her friend gave her compliment as was looking goregous in white saree.


She blushed at it n continue looking at the door...then she went in
the kitchen busy wid her work she felt a pair of hands encircle her
bare waist..she knew it was her ram then she turned bck to see her
luv...



Priya-ram!aap aagaye she was suprised he smelt so heavenly ever after
a long journey...



Ram-yes darling if ur finished checking me out i m bck...blushing
priya hugged him tightly feeling his warm..pulling him bck aap itne
tired lag re ho come lets go upstaris u need to freshenup...



Ram-priya thanks for the party i did gt a nice surprise i knw y u kept
this party n then went to their room



Ram locked the door while priya was searching the clothes for she
decide to gv him a brown kurta she kept on bed when she realise he ws
staring at her...ram went near priya n kissed her passionately the
need for her the longing for her n how he missed her was expressed
through kiss...priya responded bck in the same manner...



They broke the kiss n ram went to change n she went to check the guest



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Cute_Saakshii12 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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lovely one please continue soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hmmm nice start 😉😉but ending wrong time pe😆😆continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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vry nice os dhrishti.cntinue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awww this is so shrt and sweet part ..
ending at wring time haaa...
plz continue soon..Good one dear .
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Good one..very sweet OS
Thanx Ujjaini for sharing with us..😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 1
awww Ujjaini yaar Part 1 is looking soo awesome u just loved how Priyaa suprised Ram with party of their 1st anniversary its was really awesome to read mindblowing great work enjoyed it a lot... do post next soon will be waiting for it... TFS...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Dristi - so swt yaar..cute too..but short update..plz write log one na..as ur exam is overed no..thank u ujjaini for sharing this..

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Posted: 11 years ago
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credit to original writer : Dhrishti Kapadia


Part 2

Then after few mins ram was ready n came down in hall n greeted his
frnds n relatives...



Priya prepared the plate of food for ram..
Priya-ram aapne kuch nahi khaya hoga yeh plate lejaye aur khaliye...



Ram-i m nt hungry maine plane main khaliye


Priya felt bd n went to the kitchen then ram followed her...



Ram-i m sorry priya..

Priya-ram u lied u knw i hate lie


Ram-yeh lo kaan bhi phakar leta hoon



Priya smile at his cute behaviour n tiptoed to kiss him on corner of
his lips ram deepened the kiss..his hand were roaming around her waist n then priya pulled him bck n move out of the kitchen...



After cming out they saw there were few people in the house while ram saw priya standing he went behind her n hugged her...priya i love u so much he whispered


prya-ram aap kya kar rahe hai?people cn see us she felt his hand roam over the curves of her breast..ram plz i prmise i ll make up wid u soon n plz remove ur hand away...then ram remove his hand from her.. n gave her naughty smile...


When finally last guest left ram didnt waist tym n he took her
upstairs shutting the door he made sure it ws locked..

Then he move forward n kissed her hard n priya also responded bck then they broke the kiss i missed u mrs kapoor n i love u a lot then he
kiss her on neck then his hand went on shoulders remove the pallu n
started to kiss her on cleavage...

She felt lil shy then she also took the charge she removed his kurta n
kissed him hard n they were tasting each other nector then they both
undress each other



Then ram pick priya up n place her on bed ram went down on her thigs n kiss it n also her private part n he entered her n both were enjoying their love making he pushed it untill they reach climax... n they both were under a duvet

Ram-happy anniversary priya..


Priya-same to u mr kapoor n i hv 1 more surprise

Ram-kya hai woh jaldi bolo na..


Priya took ram hand n place it on her stomach n said ram i m pregent...


He was so happy ram-priya thanks u so much n they doz off

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Posted: 11 years ago
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read both parts. awesome dear
continue soon

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