Tere ishq mein-os (updated part 6- page-17) - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Arre yeh neha hamesha galat time pe atti hai >_< btw cuty romantic update :D plz continue...
Edited by Sharmirayanz - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
second part of the os was great ram has started to wooing back priya
neha always comes in wrong time continue soon waitung for next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 2
awww its so sweet & cute loved the whole update yaar Ram is trying wooo back his GF mallika as Viraj awww... i just loved it nothing can batter then this i really loved this sweet & simple update its great... plz do connt soon waiting for next...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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ooo ho Ram is trying to woo priya😆😆...kaash ye serial me hotaper any way you are writing very nicely continue asap
Edited by anupam_dil - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15
Very sweet nd lovely update..
loved it..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
thnx fr all your comments...!!!

will update the next part soon...!!😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
here goes the next part...!!!
pls feel free to comment or like...!!

Priya: mr.kapoor chodiya na pls. Neha aayi hain. Agar wo.ise dekhlegi toh bht prob bhjyga.
Ram: tumhe kya lagta hain priya. Aaj itne saalo baad meri jaan meri bahon mein hain aur mein is mauke ko jaane dunga..??
Priya looks at him suprised.
Ram: tum neha se khdo ki wo juhi ke paas jaye aur tum unlogo ko 20 min mein join karogi.
Priya : mein.isa kuch nhi khne wali ram. Chodiye mujhe.
Ram: kya kha?? Priya bites her lips
Ram: ab toh chodne ka sawal hi nahi. Tum neha se kahogi ya mein tumhe utake lejaun???
Priya: aap isa kuch nhi krngy.
Ram: toh phir khdo neha se.

Priya seeing she has no other option call out to neha whoz still banging the door.
Priya: neha tum pls juhi ke paas jaogi, mein tumlogo ko join karungi todhi der mein. Changing dress. Bf krte wakt kuch grgya.
Neha: ha ok. Par jldi aane mujhe tumse kuch baat krni hain.
Priya: ha ok.

Neha leaves from there.

Raya bedroom

Priya: ha ab boliye kya hain??
Ram: kya kya hain???
Priya: acha. Agar aapko kuch nhi.khna hain chodiye mujhe. Mujhe jana hain neha interzar kr rhi hain.
Ram: nahi. Mujhe mere mallika ko ise bahon mein liye bht din hgy. Mujhe todhi der ise hi rhna hain and kisses her cheek.
Priya: mr.kapoor aap kuch jyada hi kareeb nhi aare???
Ram: mein apni gf ko kiss kr rha hoon. Wo aaj itni cute lg rhi hain is saree mein ki mein kya btaun???
Priya: shyng, thanks and looks at him
And they share an eyelock.
Ram moves close to priya and kisses her on her forehead. And tells her. "you know wat, i may have gained so much popularity and may have recieved many prestagious awards but my most prized possession is u priya. You are the best thing that has ever happened to me. Ye saat saal meine kaise kaate ye sirf mujhe pta hain. Jab bhi ghar wapas aata tha srf yhi schta ki kaash ab meri priya yha hoti. Ye saat saal mein ek.monotonous zindagi jeeya hain, koi tha hi nhi jo ise xctng banaye, koi nhu tha ye khne ki mr.kapoor pls aaj ek din rukjao bahar chalte hain, khi ghumke ayngy, aur sbse badi koi nhi tha ye khne mr.kapoor mein hoon na, tblts ki kya jaroorat. Mere grlfrnd nhi thi date krne, secrt dates pln krne. Akle sehta rha ye sab kuch fr svn years priya.
Ab tumse duri bardash nhi hoti. Jldi se shadi krlngy pls.
Priya ha tears listng to all these from ran. She had thought that ram has moved on but she has now realised that ram is xctly at the same point where she had left him.
She took him in her embrace and let him cry out all those tears.
Ram, priya started " can i know the reason behind you giving me divorce??"
Ram," priya, jab tum.puri tarag se theek hojaugi toh hum is bare mein baat krngy."
Priya "ram mein theek hoon, pls dont keep me in dark. Batayiye isa kya hgya tha ki aapkonmujhe divorce dena pada"
Ram agrees and makes her sit properly on the bed, and he sits on the floor lying hid head on her laps, starts
Priya mera isa koi irada nhi tha tumhe divorce dena ka par halat ise thy ki mujhe tumhe divorce dena pada.Juhi ko uske husband se divorce milgyi par usne court notice bhja tha for the custody of naina. Humne ne socha ki juhi ki shadi sid se krngy par because he had a criminal record, shadi ke baad bhi hume naina ki custdy milne ke chnces bht kam thy. Kisi aur ko dhund ny ka tym nhi tha humare paas, so with no other option i had to be the groom.
Priya stops brushing his hairs. Ram looks at her.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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part 2

neha and juhi are dushman of rayya i hate that juhi chuhi😡😡😡😡 har baar par ram ko tokti hain when even priya is around who is going to tell her to not interfere i wish nuts says uskeliye tum fiakr amt juhi meri bahbhi hiana 😡 and shwo her place saying u r not his wife so stay away

bahut gussa aya yaar padkar
javoo jab deko koi dushman ko itni imp raya ko nahi like ekta..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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i dont want priya to forgive ram at any cost😡😡😡 spl for that divorce pehli baar kkuch achha kiya ram chasing neha but ye kyaa bekaar mein ye baat beech mein lekar agayi uhuhuh

ab i want ram to kidnap priya and marry her

continue soon 😡
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: shavii

part 2

neha and juhi are dushman of rayya i hate that juhi chuhi😡 har baar par ram ko tokti hain when even priya is around who is going to tell her to not interfere i wish nuts says uskeliye tum fiakr amt juhi meri bahbhi hiana 😡 and shwo her place saying u r not his wife so stay away

bahut gussa aya yaar padkar
javoo jab deko koi dushman ko itni imp raya ko nahi like ekta..


arey neha ko bhagadiya na nxt part. mein...!!!
ab prt 4 mein juhi ko bhi bhga dungi dn wry...!!!
nuts abhi gyi kha ...!!!! wo bhi hain...!!!


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