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Posted: 11 years ago
#41
part 1

its very cute, I loved the start, yes me too think that they should get married legally again, yaar aajkal dil ke rishte ko kaun maanta hain all wants a piece of legal paper, chalo isi bahane we will again enjoy RaYa's marriage, continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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part 2

ayyye hayyye bohot pyaar aa raha hain yaar aaj kal jo bhi dekho yeh Viraj aur mallika ko ghusa dete hain RaYa ke beech, yeh dono sirf kabab mr haddi jaise lagte hain mujhe koi Ram aur Priya ko bhi romance karne ka mauka do, plz continue
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Posted: 11 years ago
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part 3

so finally truth is out, Priya must be shattered to hear this, but Ram was also in pain in last 7 years, Priya was in coma but he was very much there but he could only see his beloved slip out from his life slowly and slowly, that must the most painful for him, as a human being I can understand but can never understand how a husband has gone through such, plz continue ASAP
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
when can we have our next part dear?, update ASAP, and if possible do PM me
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: Sharmirayanz

Nice going waitting 4 next..next time pm me


thnku...!!!
will contn soon...!! 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: jineejiggs

when can we have our next part dear?, update ASAP, and if possible do PM me


got hooked up with colg wrk...!!!
sry fr the delay dear...!!

will post tmrw night...!!!😊
nxt part under cnstrctn...!! 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47

thnku for the comments...!!!!😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
sry for being late guys...!!!
this update is dedicated to the person who inspired me to write this @ Mini and sanju di for helping me out...!!!

pls excuse me for all the errors and fr nt making it up in tym...!!


Priya getsup from her place and starts moving. Ram thinks that she's going out and calls out to her. Priya turns to him, gives an assurance smile and moves towards washroom.
As soon as she locks herself in the changing priya.Priya lets her tears flow out that she has stopped from the time ram told her the truth. She cant imagine her man to be somebody else's. Ram is waiting for priya to come out. But seeing no sign of her coming out he call her. Priya gets up from her place and washes her face so that ram does not have the idea of her cry.


Ram: kya hua itni der kyun lag gya???

Priya:kuch nahi hua bas ise hi.

Ram: ok..ok.. priya dekho jo bhi hua iam sry. Nthng was deliberately done.

Priya: i'll meet neha and come,she must be waiting.

Ram: yeah fine. Par aaj bahar toh chal rhi ho na???

Priya just smiles as an answer.

Priya moves towards juhi's room.
She freezes near door hearing the convo.

Neha: tum ye kyun kar rhi ho juhi.
Juhi: ab priya ko hurt nhi krskti neha. Use lgta hain ki meri shadi sid se honi chahiye toh vahi sahi.
Neha: hum priya se sach khdngy juhi ki tumhari aur ram ki shadi hone wali thi.

Mujhe pta hain tum kitna pyar krti ho fatty se. Par mein yeh bhi janti hoon ki tumhari us se shadi kbhi nhi ho skti. Agar priya na bhi hoti aur ram se tumhari shadi us din hojati, phir bhi fatty tumhe priya ka plc kbhi nhi dene wala. Par i dont want u to rush into thngs. Hum priya se baat krngy, take sometym agar uske baad bhi tumhe ye shadi thik lage toh krlena, mein mana nahi karungi.

Priya runs onto terrace hearing the convo. Suddenly it starts raining covering her tears.

Ram who was secrtly following priya hears the convo too, but seeing priya runaway he thnks of comforting her frst.
Ram runs to terrace and sees that priya is getting drenced. He could see the tears overflowing from her eyes.

Ram could sense what was priya going through as he faced the same during rajat's tym.

Ram moved closer to priya and kept his hand on her shoulders. Priya turned towards him. She immediately hugged him tightly like a baby hugging her teddy with the fear of losing it.
Ram reprociated the hug, and was carresing his hands on her back soothing her.
Priya dint utter a single wrd. She just wnted to stay with him.

She cldnt imagine herman wid sm1 else, and moreover the thought that juhi will stay in the same mansion and evrytym she looks into her eyes she can find them full of love for hr man, this was the hardest truth priya cld evr digest.

Ram's blood strtd to boil seeing the condition of priya. Its just a few days that shes back from her coma and now shes facing the hrdest truth of her life.
Ram was very angry on himself that his behaviour towards juhi made her love him and he strtd blaming himslf for the happnings...!!
Ram: priya room mein chale, bht bheeg gay ab...!!
Priya immediately comes out frm his grasp and moves towards their room. Ram follows her and tries to talk to her, but not giving him any chamce she moves twrds chnging room. She changes and comes out and sees that ram is nt in the room, but she dint care this time. She mives twrds juhi's room finally.
Neha : kha thy madamji aap, kab se intezar krwa rhe hain.
Priya: sry neha.wo mr.kapoor kuch bol rhe thy, she was cut of words as neha strtd.
Neha: oh...mr.kapolr huh...!? And winks
Priya: she jus gives a little smile and finding that juhi is nt in her room priya asks for her.
Neha: wo toh abhi abhi ram ke sath gyi hain. Ram ko kuch kaam tha us se
Priya was stunned. She dint expect this from ram after he knew the whole truth. She was cmpltly broken but sensung neha there she composed herslf and told ok.
Priya: acha ok kuch kaam hoga unko. Aur tum batao, ghar par sab kaise hain??
Neha: ghar par sab theek hain dn wry, ye batao are u able to adjust yourself here. I know there have been a lot of changes in the past seven years, so hw r feeling here??
Priya: changes toh dikhai de rhe hain par iam feeling like an unwanted here, feeling like an alien
Neha: dn wry. Sab whi log hain aur wahi pyaar hain tumhare liye ab bhi
Priya: par mujhe lgta hain ki wo pyaar mein jyada prcnt koi aur ko milgya hain
Neha: matlab??
Priya: kuch nhi.
Neha: priya sid aur juhi ki shadi itni jldi krwani cmplsry hain kya??
Priya: koi cmplsry nhi hain. Par mujhe lga jo kaam meri wajeh se rhgya wo mein hi cmplt krdun
Neha: hm...krlo na, mana kisne kiya par tum ab tak puri tarah se theek bhi nhi hui ab kya jldi hain kuch din ke baad krlngy.

Priya: acha dekhngy ab kya ye class lene aayi ho??

Neha: nhi bas ise hi...guppe maarne...bht din hgy hum guppe maarte hain.

Priya: chalo mein bansi kaka.ko bolke aati hoon ki sabke liye chai banaye.
Neha: juhi khkr gyi hain dn wry. Tum yha baitho tumse bht saare baate batani hain

Though priya was listng to neha, her mind was wandering over juhi and ram.


Kapoor industries, top floor, empty cabin.

Ram sitting in his chair and juhi bfr him.


will be contn soon...!!

sry for being late again...!!

pls dont frgt to hit like button and post ur valuble comments...!!!

Edited by chakravarthty - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
i just hated the person called juhi who is an thorn in raya life😡 and neha hate her more sooo close to juhi priya is right all gave love for the person who just staying like and unwanted guest for 7 year is showered love and priya totally hurted😭😭😭😭😭😭😡😡😡😡😡😡
now ram the great left with juhi 😡😡😡😡😡 fina javo shaadi karlo usse😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡

did not like it 🤢🤢🤢🤢 was angry reading the update😡
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: shavii

i just hated the person called juhi who is an thorn in raya life😡 and neha hate her more sooo close to juhi priya is right all gave love for the person who just staying like and unwanted guest for 7 year is showered love and priya totally hurted😡
now ram the great left with juhi 😡 fina javo shaadi karlo usse😡

did not like it 🤢 was angry reading the update😡



its just this update...
Keep ur anger to the next update...
Juhi will be out forever from their lives..!!
Pls dnt be angry

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