OS-monday's take - Page 3

Originally posted by: youandme272000

Super duper... damn good yaar... 😛

Originally posted by: peeyara

nice atttempt 😊

it was very good😊

i hope k cvs bhi kuch aisa dekhaye😊

thanks for the pm 😊

Originally posted by: .pia_12.

loved it ...

Originally posted by: Mohana33

Wow... Its awesome. U wrote very well

Originally posted by: sandhyasn

lovely OS

starting was too scared. U scared to write and I scared to read. I cannot see pain in Priya's eyes.

kisi bhi womens ke liye yeh bahut badi baat hai. but last mein jis tarah se aapne juhi aur naina ki watt lagayi hai I loved it. specially that dialogue...R u a member of Kapoor family👏

hope eisa hi kuch Balh mein dekhne ko mile aur Ram Priya se shaadi kar le😳

write more and thanks for PM

Originally posted by: bishop22

Thanks for the pm.

Lovely OS

Originally posted by: bpatil3

Thx for the PM.
Lovely heart touching outburst from Priya, touched my heart million times. No reason can justify ram's answer for his blunder. that word 'ex' pinches my heart several times every time i read, toh priya ko kaise nhi lagegi. liked the way she was asking him with what right is she sharing room n bed with him? genuiunly kitni aasani se bol rha hai ram , hum ab legally divorced hai 😭, par kagaz ke rishtein nhi hote. Haan rishtein dil se hi judi hoti hai fir bhi, ek galat decision ne wo ehsaas badal diya ex hubby bana diya😭 really touchy every word of dialogue n her emotions were superly penned down stabbed my heart. liked when priya said she was feeling guilty for one night stand with him when he was married to ayesha, now with what right is she staying with him? also ram kapoors immediate reaction of showing juhi her place and telling not to interfere n try to snatch or take priya's place. dil toh maan bhi liya ram loves her, dimaag apne rishte ko leke sangharsh kar raha hai. well done when priya signed the paper trusting him completely without a single question. Good you ended it on a happy note. loved it... fir bhi ram ko saza milni chahiye mujhe abhi bhi lagta hai, till now , till priya ask him he didn't realize he did a blunder, itni aasani se usse iss baat ki maafi nhi milni chahiye yaar, kisi bi rishtein k maayine hi badal jaate hai ek kagaz ke dastavej se..😭

Originally posted by: leena04

Fantastic OS hai ji maza aa gaya so agreed to this i wish CV's bhi kuch aisa dikhaye par pata hai 2 hafte show ko khichna hai tohh utne me bahut kuch hone wala hai... suruta sayad aise hi kuch hogi par ant ka nahi keh sakte in show... but yaar Room me jane k baad kya hua woh toh bata do plz...

Originally posted by: chillpc

Nice part...
Hope same hpns in balh...!!!

Thnx fr the pm...

Originally posted by: tulshan1989

nice one

thanx for the pm