OS: Our Love Story Part A & B updated on pg-8 - Page 3

Originally posted by: .sangs123.

Yaar itna bhi
Senseless ya illogical nahi thaa
Nice start yaar
Cont soon
Thanks for pm

Originally posted by: kaparikh1

Sorry havent been commenting since long time...

But i loved your OS...With regards to logic jaha RaYa ho to logic ki kise padi hai...But i just loved it...Superb...Thanks for the PM dear...🤗

Originally posted by: bpatil3

Thx for the PM.

Wow cool baby..

Priya ko phasaane mein successful hogaye ramji😆

too good...👍🏼

enjoyed it to the core...yaar jab bore hui hai toh aise likh sakti hai toh jab mood accha hoga tok kaise likhegi??

Originally posted by: anupam_dil

Nuts asks her "ye kaun hai" and Peehu replies, "ye papa ki jaan hai".🤣🤣

superb yaar ideas kahase aate hai aap logonko

Originally posted by: ShazK.123

Pehli baat yeh hai ki pyaar mein logic nahi hoti. 😆
Dusri baat- yeh bohot bohot cute OS hai. I was smiling throughout the whole thing... Very nicely written. Hayee Ram ne darling kaha uff, so sweet... Aur flashback mein 'papa ki jaan' so cute!
Last bit was funny and sweet too. I enjoyed this a lot!

I wish they had shown this in BALH before this leap.

Thanks for the PM

Originally posted by: krunalidivecha

very awesome update

continue soon

Originally posted by: simlavidhi

Love your os...
Keep it up..
Enjoy reading it..

Originally posted by: luvbalh

nice family

continue love to read

Originally posted by: lalmadhu

Very nice just like a wonderful dream. Dream mein tho no logic, no sense sab chaltha hai dear.

I dont believe u wrote this getting bored. Do write more dear.

Waiting for the next part.

Thanks for the pm.

Originally posted by: nntthani

really very good to visualize that too with those cute little myra and pari,why the cvs didnt get such thinkings especially with those cute liitle ones.