Originally posted by: Sharmirayanz
Superbly written..i can feel each nd every moment of raya...ghoshhh romance in telephone boot thud thud totally dead...its jst jst mindblowing...yaar when u bring thz idea...cant wait 4 next
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Originally posted by: Sharmirayanz
Superbly written..i can feel each nd every moment of raya...ghoshhh romance in telephone boot thud thud totally dead...its jst jst mindblowing...yaar when u bring thz idea...cant wait 4 next
Originally posted by: devmohan
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Originally posted by: vironikajain
Itna zyada blush kyun ji.. 😉 😆
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Originally posted by: Ramdeewani
This was So Romantic u spill magic with ur words n ofcourse RaYa jodi bhi hain hi aisi truly magical
Superbly penned ! and Superbly Romantic .. i liked it so very much 😳 😃
Friends this the Fourth and the Last Part of this OS, Hope you guys enjoyed the previous parts and do enjoy this last part also and shower your love on this writing piece by your view points and comments.😊
Thank You.
OS: Rain Of Love
Part-4
Priya: ouch (she yelp in twinge as her back jarred with phone)
Ensue to this catastrophe both spring up in sync with heavy breaths as they spot at the cause of upheaval in their cherishing occasion, they got amusedly shocked, Both looked at each other and then back to their previous vision as they utter in consonance delighted but with gleam of stun "PHONE"
They inspect their mise en scene', fathoming that they are standing in telephone booth, reverting to each other they peer at one another for few ticks as they both chortle sheepishly to their manifestation of hankering emotions towards each other. Returning to mind, they posolutely perceive what they should do right now.
Since the lasciviousness still stands stubbornly in them, they both don't want to be flaccid over gusto as they don't want their any romance poetry signatures to be left behind in public subservience booth. Reconciling each other's lechery, they both want to land in their privy love oasis, their green room as soon as possible.
Ram quests for coin in his wet pocket but being THE RAM KAPOOR' he only keeps big denomination notes, but being with his buona fortuna, his angel, his priya by his side who told him to take change from kulfi wala that night when he asked him to keep the change, as giving reason that hisaab hisaab hota hai', hence kulfiwala given him change which include two ten rupees paper notes and coins for five rupees, subsuming one coin of one rupee and two coins of two rupees each, he takes one rupee coin and topple it into payphone safe through very thin rectangular chink; he dialed the land line number of Kapoor Mansion, as bell is ringing at past midnight, tranquility of Kapoor Mansion muddles up.
On other side Priya adjust herself as she corrects her saree, her Romeo make glances at his Juliet from head to toe, her wringing-wet white chiffon saree embellished with thin silver crystal border is snuggling to her sodden delicate satiny body, enabling her body visible through habiliments, her hands array with two red glass bangles in each hand bordering with thin silver kadaas while her feet enrich with silver anklet with tiny mellifluous gungroos and toe ring embossed with red stone hemmed in by white diamonds. He comes to her elegant face again through his eyes as her slightly askew small red bindi is prettifying her forehead with sparely smudged vermillion because of his assail of love on his dame over her dank forehead, his espial to her neck trail by her cleavage as her mangalsutra dangling through her neck.
Sensing her monogamist's scrutiny on her she gander at him as she found her hubby gawking at her amorously, their eyes meet as he glare with his smoldering eyes into her charismatic eyes, while her inebriated syrupy lips enkindle him. Metamorphosing into mellow red tomato, she lowers her eyes as she chastises her lower lip by biting it hard between her teeth. The aura is euphoric both inside and outside the telephone kiosk. Admiring at his consort with ardor in this sedate yet fascinating demeanor, he smiles mysteriously.
At this spell of time, lovers' emotions are schmoozing through their eyes without any need of spill of words.
The phone disconnects as bell stopped ringing due to non receiving by anyone. He takes two rupee coin now and taking almighty's name and exhaling a deep breath, he plummets the coin in analogous manner as previous one, he again lays his eyes on her with his esoteric ideas for rest of the surviving night with his ladylove. After four rings Gopal kaka picks up the call wondering who is accosting at this hour of night through phone, Surprised and alarmed to hear his authority's voice, kaka asked him how he can help them. Ram ordains him to send another car with driver as he expounds the area and location where their car has been halted on middle of the road. Kaka assured him that he will send it as early as possible. Ram hang up the phone and smirks naughtily at her while on other side kaka goes to servant quarters in the background of Kapoor Mansion to rouse the driver and inform him about their master's orders as he asks him to do the same as their master told them so.
He tickle her magical black eyes with his magnetic dark brown eyes, grinning kittenishly with tongue in cheek, while she becomes rosy tint, biting her lip she lowers her eyes as she embraces herself due to gelidity by laying her palms on her arms . Contemplating this he beams impishly at her as he drags her into his virile grip in jiffy by through her waist by his right hand, landing in his sturdy macho arms her hands automatically settles on his broad powerful masculine thorax while he tucks her hair strands abaft her ear with his left hand.
Ram: (with fierce gaze on her as he whisper in husky voice) In another fifteen to twenty minutes the driver will come with another car to fetch us.
Priya: Reading his smoldering eyes, she scarlet, simpering while planting her gaze on his chest where her palms are resting, she becomes crimson red.
Ram: ( He chuckles, imprisoning her chin between his index finger and thumb, he lifts it up, enabling her to look into his aphrodisiac eyes, in hypnotic and prerogative tone ) After reaching home and ( now nearing his lips to her ear he buzz) to our bedroom...we are not going to sleep tonight.
Listening to her hubby's romantic intentions for rest of the night she flushes becoming roseate, closing her eyes and continually punishing her lower lip harshly to stifle her coyness, she buries her face in his thorax firmly near his heart while his heart is humming a mellifluous love symphony. Brooching her in his stalwart envelop of his robust arms, he fondles her by kissing her hairs and shoulders while with his one hand he caresses her hair and back.
Her lips curve into a smile on his chest and he senses it and made his grip tauter on her as her hands hold him from his waist.
They nestle each other in that position...
Ram: I love you wifey (with romantic and gratifying smile on his face)
Priya: (with same rhythm of emotions as of her husband's) I love you too...
THE END😃